The Chaos Theory EP

[Solace]

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This is the Chaos Theory EP; a quick tape done with my friend (MC Anonymous) in a couple days. Hope you enjoy it. If you need any lyrics, they're all on the Youtube pages. Comment/add/subscribe/like, anything please.

[Tranquil]

1. Chaos Theory
Fuck. Great song to start the EP off, I loved both of your flows and lyrics.Theres really no feedback i can give this song because its good in every way to me

2. I Hate Myself
This song is fucking class. "My dick squeezes through the hole of a cheerio," Great line, love the humor! The hook is great, the only thing that I noticed was the backing track was a little off. Solace I liked your verse and you pointing out your flaws, but you aint got those flaws anymore

3. Melancholy Melodies
I'm waiting for the downfall of this EP but I don't think there is going to be one, another great track. Could really feel the lines that were spat on her, "Sixteen years wasted just to learn that I'm worthless," Shit man, deep shit! Loved the sampled hook!

4. Thanatology
I listened to this song when you dropped it and I swear that I posted feed on it but it dosent look like it. Anyway you guys have really good flow, don't slip up once in this song. Really good lyrics and the hook is great. Nothing to complain about.

5. Farewell
Fucking SICK beat, loved the flow on this one Solace. You guys have really good chemistry together! Loved both of the verses and chorus's, I was really feeling MC Anonymous's anger in his verse. Great closing track!

Overall:
This is a great EP! And only being done in a couple of days is really impressive considering the quality of the songs. You guys have good chemistry together and I hope you guys get together again and do a full length or something like that, I'll defiantly be on the look out for that!

[Block]

Hmm... I listened to this entire thing last night, but got too tired to leave decent feed, lol.

Chaos Theory - Decent intro. The whole introducing yourselves thing.. You guys both did your thing. It's weird hearing Angel rapping with his real voice.
Hook - Funny, lol. No production feedback as it was too short.

I Hate Myself - Mc's verse reminds me a lot of a vintage Maybe verse. Sounds exactly like something he would say 5 years ago. Not much to say for feed. Solace verse sounds a little lack luster. The lyrics are nice, but the emotion isn't there. I imagine more of a sarcastic style on it, which is what it seems like you were going for but just couldn't really find it.
Hook - Good hook. Good mixing on it.

Melancholy Melodies - Mc's verse is fire. Great flow, great emotion, great lyrics. The production is amazing on this beat as well. Solace, this seems like the type of beat you're fit for. Your flow shines on here.. Still a few flaws, but they're tiny in comparison. Emotion is great here too. This is the beat 'collaborative effort' on the EP, imo.

Thanatology - Great production. Great lyrics from both. The hook sounds good.
Solace- I think the beat is a little too slow for you here. Your flow got a little choppy. Your emotion is good and delivery is on point, but your flow kinda brought you down here. I honestly just think it's the beat though.

Farewell - Great production again. Good verses from both of you.. Suitable outro track. Not much to give feedback for on this. I like the hook as well. Angel sounds like his vintage self. This is the emotion I'm used to from him.




Solace - your voice is pretty dope for rapping. You just having to get used to opening your mouth a little wider (seriously lol) so that your lips are out of the way when you're spitting at a faster pace. I know it sounds crazy, but it's true. It's something rappers have to do consciously to stop from slurring. Not that you were slurring a lot, but at a faster pace you kind of did.. That will help. Overall, your emotion is pretty good and doesn't falter very much at all. Your flow is choppy in some parts and then smooths out in others.. I think it depends on your beat choice, as to whether or not your flow will be solid. For instance, your flow was really choppy on the more faster, hard hitting beats.

Anonymous - It was good to hear you rapping with a different style on this. It was also refreshing to hear that vintage 'crazy' sound, as well. Good stuff all around. I noticed some slip ups, but I'd be nit picking if I pointed them out. Was a good performance, bro.

Good performances from both of you. Solace, you shined on the first song and Melancholy Melodies.. Anonymous, you shined on the outro and Melancholy melodies as well.

Good shit.

[Solace]

Props on in depth feed, both of you. I was excited when I saw "Block" as the last poster (even though that's only 2nd but whatever), I knew you'd give some really good tips and show my weaknesses. I'll try that opening mouth thing too lol, whatever helps I will try. Thank you for taking your time to listen Tranquil and Block

[B.A.D.]

I didn't saw you released this until now. I'll take a listen, maybe more if I like it, which I'm sure I will. do you want any feedback at all, or its ok?

[Solace]

If you could spare the time to give me feedback I'd love that man

[Maybe]

So far, sounds sick (listening now). I'll leave full feedback when I'm not on a cellphone. In case I forget (haha), feel free to PM me a reminder.

[Solace]

Good lookin' out man, I'll PM you sometime later in the evening.

[Solace]

Thank you bruh. Didn't expect such kind words.

[Eedee]

Gave it a listen.

1 - Chaos Theory: Both of you spit dope. Flow was fantastic from both of you. Lyrically, with the multi's and whatnot, just fantastic. No faults for this track!

2 - I Hate Myself: This whole song is just fucking hilarious!!

3 - Melancholy Melodies: HOLY SHIT! Immediately, the sample used reminded me of Spend Some Time from Encore (which I freakin' LOVE that chorus). MC Anonymous spits real talk. Then the chorus goes and I then your verse starts and I and as you finish your verse I just go . And that's my story of listening to this song thru smilies.

4 - Thanatology: Good shit. Listened to this when you dropped it earlier. Awesome.

5 - Farewell: Incredible way to end this EP. Just incredible, you guys. That was so raw.

Overall, this is just so FUCKING fantastic, I'm in awe. Much respect, you guys.

[Solace]

Either you like emotes or emotes like this EP. So glad you enjoyed it man

[Eedee]

Either you like emotes or emotes like this EP. So glad you enjoyed it man

Words do not express what I think of this EP.

[Solace]

Flattery will get you no where (except my asshole) nooooooooooooo fucking homo.

[Eedee]

Emotes will.

Just kidding. I just think it's an awesome EP. Good work! (Last post on this thread, don't wanna spam another one of your threads.)

[Kez]

Chaos Theory:
The "clever intro" thing was funny, but I think you could have left it without having to say "but we don't have one" lol, woulda been better.
Both your verses flowed fine, the content was tweaked just enough to make it work decently as an intro track. A lot of it is the same shit that i'm sure i'll hear throughout it, but yeah.

I Hate Myself:
Beat sounds strange but it fits by the time the verses have started. Anon LMAO. Your verse was fucking funny. It's not often I actually laugh at songs but your first 8 bars cracked me up hard. Solace you brought some funny shit too, the "I have three friends" was good. Hook was a bit hard to understand at times when both of you were on at the same time. Good track though overall, it wasn't what I expected.

Melancholy Melodies:
Haha. I think half the rappers on this site have done a track to this beat. I sure have. This is more of what I would have expected really. Same kinda shit. I like how you both started your verses the same. Solace your lines seem to end a bit early at times. Both your lyrics are decent enough, but nothing stellar because it's more of the same shit I always hear from Anon's shit lol.

Thanatology:
Beat is awesome. Anon fucking killed this. His delivery needs to sound like this more. Sometimes he raps and like, eats his words. But the slow flow made his voice way more clear and it sounds awesome. And the lyrics are great. He killed this. Solace you brought it too, your voice is clear enough to keep up with Anon's. The hook is sweet. This track is totally my kind of shit haha, the content and everything. Solace you had some awesome lines, especially the cancer ones. Definately my favourite track. No complaints.

Farewell:
Beat is nice and minimalist. Solace you had some sick lines in here, like the "stopped to breathe" and I liked the flatline after your last line. Anon your delivery here relates to what I said before, you kinda eat your words a bit sometimes lmao. I think your flow stumbled a bit on the "death, kill" bit too. Your delivery is awesome though. I think Solace was better on this track though. He just came clearer and it was easier to understand him. But in terms of emotion and shit Anon definately won this one.

I enjoyed listening to this, the length stopped it getting stale. That said if it had been much longer I wonder if you could have sustained it. My favourite tracks were I Hate Myself and Thanatology, least favourite was Melancholy Melodies. You both did good. Anon still needs to work on not eating up his words when he goes with the fast flow, aside from that he has pretty much everything down. Though it would be nice to vary up his content a bit for a change. Solace you have a good voice for rapping, and your flows are pretty on-point, though sometimes too much so. It would be good to maybe not follow the beat to the T every time, it helps shit sound more natural. But i'm just nitpicking, this was pretty good.