Atone The Underdog - Survivor

[Atone]

"Stronger Than I'v Ever Been" officialy in the works

New Feedback link: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=135718

Audio Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vtrDeUHy24M

thanks for updating it Atone
-staff

[Ka0t1c]

why does ur title say, "I'v"

also, why are u offbeat badly? it ruins the lyrics, they sound alright tho

[Atone]

why does ur title say, "I'v"

also, why are u offbeat badly? it ruins the lyrics, they sound alright tho

Thats the name of the album, "Stronger Than I'v Ever Been"

[Ka0t1c]

yeah, i don't understand tho the reasoning behind "I'v" is that code or u think it's cool, plz explain

[Atone]

yeah, i don't understand tho the reasoning behind "I'v" is that code or u think it's cool, plz explain

I'v is short for I Have

[Ka0t1c]

no, I've is, homie, what school u go to, are u american?

[Atone]

no, I've is, homie, what school u go to, are u american?

a very shitty school, thanks for the correction, woulda sucked to have that in the final cover lol, imma fix that

[Ka0t1c]

yeah, your fanbase might be limited due to that ONE fact, they be like what a "ninja" kid so ignant that boy dere

[Atone]

yeah, your fanbase might be limited due to that ONE fact, they be like what a "ninja" kid so ignant that boy dere

Lmao, i went to a small ass school where i graduated with 21 students in my class, teachers paid more attention to the rich kids (mostly the hot little preppy girls)

[Ka0t1c]

as would i

[iain08]

It doesn't sound like you wrote this song for this instrumental. Your flow isn't there, it just sounds like talking.

I like the hook, lol.

[mdemaz]

No no no no...
You have to ride the beat man, don't just go against it.

That's all you need to work on really, you got lyrics nailed.
I've said this many times already, so fuck it.

[AbramIsaac]

I feel like you really want to be a rapper. You must enjoy making music, to be so prolific. In other words, you have the passion to do this.

You don't, however, seem to care about quality at all. Every time you post a song, or an album, you get the same advice. You don't listen to any of it though. Your music suffers as a result. Audio quality is one thing, as it takes money to buy equipment. Your delivery and general technique, on the other hand, can be improved with minimal practice.

Just put a little more work into individual songs before you put out yet another album or mixtape that is practically unlistenable, simply because you don't care enough about your art to make the most basic of improvements. Not hating, just telling it like it is. I'm sure damn near anyone here would tell you the same.

You can do it, just keep at it man.

[mdemaz]

I don't think he is really good with his DAW, someone else should mix his vocals.
I could do it if you wanted.

[Eedee]

I was going to listen but you took the song down from YouTube...