Engaged 16 [Lyrics]

[TripleNineThree]

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=147031
Song [Lyrics are in the video] - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uImh8Ohz ... e=youtu.be

As some of you guys may know, me and my Fiance got engaged last night. We've had a lot of support from people but we've also had a lot of naysayers claiming that we are too young. I decided to write a quick sixteen as a response to everyone who is claiming that we are too young and foolish to get married.

I hope you guys enjoy the verse. Drop a link and I'll be sure to return the feed!

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Damn man great verse, this one definitely seems like a step up from the other tracks I heard from you, although they are good too!!

I liked how there was definitely a lot of emotion in there and you kept flow and rhyming great while still getting your point across, very tough thing to do IMO, nice job man keep up the good work!

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man I appreciate the feedback!!

[Trimss]

I think the "Why should I even listen" sounded a little out of place, maybe because it was a little faster or I don't know. But I loved the part where you go like "Fifty percent of mariages", it's pretty smooth and cool.

This was a great response to those people if you ask me.

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks Trims! And yeah, I changed the flow up a little bit when I said that - sped it up

[Phantom]

flow changes came at perfect times. "they think im 18..." sounded good, emotion in your voice was perfect. although im not a huge fan of the beat, you did very well on it. great job bro

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man!!

[gutawafang]

Eh, seriously, your lyrics always include God. I really think that's awesome man. It's kinda inspiring to me man. Keep doing your thing.

[Man In The Mirror]

Good flow and voice. But you need to pick your pengame up and start learning multisyllabic rhymeschemes and stuff like that. Keep praticing PEACE!

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks guys for the feed! And I have been working on my lyrics lately, It's a challenge to include a lotof multisyillables and still have a good flow - ill get it eventually lol

@gutawafang - thanks man! I believe that when people do hip-hop, the center and purpose of their live always bleeds out through the music. For some people its drugs, or fame, or music itself but for me it's Christ because of how much He transformed my life

[Chet Starr]

This was awesome, I wanna to show my Christian friend who just got married, soon as I can find that guy lol. No feedback, I just enjoyed it.

Side note: there needs to be a rap group composed of different religions. Imagining a Satanist, Christian, Muslim, & Jew rapping together. But I guess the group would break up pretty fast lol

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

This was awesome, I wanna to show my Christian friend who just got married, soon as I can find that guy lol. No feedback, I just enjoyed it.

Side note: there needs to be a rap group composed of different religions. Imagining a Satanist, Christian, Muslim, & Jew rapping together. But I guess the group would break up pretty fast lol

HAHAHA that would be cool AF though if they could make it last haha

[TripleNineThree]

This was awesome, I wanna to show my Christian friend who just got married, soon as I can find that guy lol. No feedback, I just enjoyed it.

Side note: there needs to be a rap group composed of different religions. Imagining a Satanist, Christian, Muslim, & Jew rapping together. But I guess the group would break up pretty fast lol

hahahahah, yeah, I agree - I don't think that would last long lol

[Atone]

like i said in the PM, this is very dope, just, don't let anybody get in the way of your love for somebody

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks Atone!