Vettori & Sincere- Don't Wanna Work Anymore

[Vettori]

LTF- viewtopic.php?f=38&t=149950&p=2017893#p2017893

http://www.hulkshare.com/n2soon0dgv0g

Hope you enjoy this, We setup the condensor Mic So the quality is better.

Thanks in advance for the time taken.

[Eedee]

Yeah, that quality is way better! That beat was really really sick. I loved it.

The chorus was really catchy, to be honest. Great way to begin the song and get me hooked. The first verse volume seemed too low, maybe boost that. The beat drowned it out. The flow and lyrics were nice, no complaints there. Delivery was solid too. Good intonation.

Second verse had good delivery as well. The volume on that verse sounded okay. Try to even it out throughout the entire song, it'll sound better.

Those new mics did wonders.

[Vettori]

thank you for the feed.

[Mr Change]

Man. That was GREAT.

Props

[Vettori]

Tyvm I appreciate the Time taken

[Vettori]

I'll take that Thank you very much for checking it out Iv'e been experimenting lately, Stepping outside of the comfort zone. I always make sure to switch up every other song though.

[Elision]

Why was I sent a message with a link to this?

[Vettori]

Live your life as A why not kind of person. It's a better place. Thank you for the effort to check.

[AbramIsaac]

Why was I sent a message with a link to this?

Maybe he respects your opinion.

[CrashBand]

Why was I sent a message with a link to this?

Maybe he respects your opinion.

Or maybe he sent out a message to everyone..

..we'll never know

[AbramIsaac]

Actually, I do know. Purple Gang or die, bitch.

Anyway, on to the song. It seems like a nice personal concept, and on a casual listen it's a good track. The details kind of derail it, but I believe you guys put a good amount of work into it. It just needs cleaned up a bit. The chorus is good, but the fact that it's sung out of key and doesn't totally harmonize is sort of an issue. There are also a few spots in the last verse where the delivery is off a bit.

Still a good effort.

[Vettori]

Tyvm
I'll try to put an even Greater effort towards the songs. Because sometimes I get comfortable, which isn't always a good thing. Time to step it up

I appreciate the time taken, It's very hard to keep in touch with each person on a personal basis. So a "mass message" is an easier and more efficient way to put the song out. If I didn't do that, Would you have bothered to check on your own free will ?. With having put out a few songs in the past, And from experience and experimenting, This is the most effective method. For me and my limited resources.

I hope you all have the best day you possibly can

[Tomer666]

Well, first thing off, good work

This beat is not my type but you sounded good on it. Your flow is solid, chorus is very catchy I really liked it
Keep on doing it!

[Kez]

Sorry it took me a while.

Shit man this is just properly enjoyable. Not that it isn't without it's things that made me double-take and say "huh?", but overall I just enjoyed listening to it. It definately gets more than one listen, put it that way.

The beat is a bit irritating with it's intrusive tags, but they mostly stay out of the way. The hook is a bit weird, but it grew on me. Although sometimes it sounds like you forgot the layovers for little bits.

I thought the flow was a little over the place, but in a good way. Very versatile. Sounding very in control, lots of stoppin and jumping back onto the beat.

By far the best thing I liked about this song was the lyrics though man, some fantastic ones in this. And the general concept and shit gave me ideas.

"If I don't know the answer to a question then i'll learn it"
"Giving someone else my life to let em live it for me"

Those two especially got me, great shit. You still remain one of the best i've heard on this site who's actually still around, and i'm sorry I may have missed other shit from you.

[Vettori]

Np man, we are all very busy . Link me to some of your new material in a pm, Id like to check it out. Thank you very much for checking in