~going nowhere~ Mpyre

[M-Pyre]

sup peeps, this is my newest beat that I have created, I think it's bumping like a motherfucker, but I came here to get some feed, plz leave some constructive feedback, like with what the beat would be better, and what kinda elements can be added or deleted etc.

here is the link:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/72856439ad31dd/

and if you want feedback on your shit just holla at me, and I will give it to you

get your feed on people, and not your sleep on

and here is the new version of the beat:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/7327168d02e6c1/

[Kez]

I like it.

I'm not a beatmaker so i can't accurately feed beats, but i like it.

[M-Pyre]

thnks man just keep the feed coming

[Shady's_Back]

Same here not sure on how to give proper feedback but that sounded good to me!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

same not a beatmaker myself but...
the instant background melody is annoyin after a while...like u could do it for 4bars then stop for 4 bars and do it again...know wut im sayin...just a thought
and the chorus melody is pretty good like it...
overall: decent beat,,,keep it up

[M-Pyre]

yeah thnks man, uhm I like the background melody, it's the juice that sparks up the beat in my opinion but keep the feed coming people, there are a lot of mouths to feed, especially mine

[Nu Syd]

damn, better than i was expecting,i really like this, easy to get a creative flow on,great melody,got a twisted style to it, nice

[M-Pyre]

thnks, I see that I get a lot of good responses on this shit right here, I already made a few adjustments,
I will post it up as soon as I can, then you can decide witch one you like better, in the meanwhile, you guy's can keep feeding, if you want to of course

[Speech]

it is a nice beat just ain feeling it at all...your work wasn' in vain...but not the type of beat an underground (or even industry) rapper could rap over...might be just me idk....ok....like i said..wasn in vain...not like i totally hate it hahaha

keep it up

[M-Pyre]

good looking out, maby you will like the new one better then the last one, I'll post it up by today, when I finished it up, but keep throwing food at me people, like I said there is a giant mouth to feed

[M-Pyre]

no food

[Nu Syd]

it is a nice beat just ain feeling it at all...your work wasn' in vain...but not the type of beat an underground (or even industry) rapper could rap over...might be just me idk....ok....like i said..wasn in vain...not like i totally hate it hahaha

keep it up

i totally disagree with this, its the perfect style beat for anyone who likes the style,underground or industry. I know i would use it.

[Xray]

damn sounds like a 2 dollar beat no offence but the melody and drums and everything about was shit but thats my opinion others may like it dunno so keep it up

[Tash8]

this is really not a rap beat.. it's more of a commerical or a movie type beat...

i like the background melody but i think it woudl sound better with muted guitars...

you need better sounds btw, that piano or whatever it is doesn't sounds real...

drums are alright, except they should be louder..

overall its not going to be a rap beat, unless u remove that piano melody or chorus melody with something else....

btw it needs more in the verse part IMO.

[M-Pyre]

thnks for the feed, I see the the opinions is really mixed at the moment, did you guy's listen to the new version, I have just put it up there, maby you can compare it or something, but keep the feed coming people!!! pz out