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NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - "DEDICATION"

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NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - "DEDICATION"

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 3rd, '08, 01:35

I recorded this back during the summer time. Quality ain't the best, but it will be gettin' better soon. Let me know what ya' think. And and all feedback is appreciated.

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Steve Spag - Dedication ROUGH.mp3 - 9.09MB

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - "DEDICATION"

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Oct 3rd, '08, 02:06

ill feed you on msn if your ever on anymore
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - "DEDICATION"

Postby DelinQuent » Oct 3rd, '08, 02:19

i liked the chorus

flow was good in the verses, rhymes were also good.

only thing i didnt like was the way you pronounce words. no offense but you sound like a nerd rapper lmfao, but its also a good thing because i never heard anyone like that.

overall a good track, good message, i liked it.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - "DEDICATION"

Postby Boston » Oct 3rd, '08, 02:22

this is a nice track, quality can be better (i think vocals can be a tad bit louder)
the hook has a nice flow, its catchy

the lyrics are on point and the flow is nice to. im really feeling it. i think delivery can be better at some points though. but i like this.
keep it up

peaceee bro
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Postby Steve Spag » Oct 3rd, '08, 02:54

thanks for the feed guys, much appreciated.
i'm still workin' on my delievery, lol.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - "DEDICATION"

Postby Solace » Oct 3rd, '08, 03:09

Just love the beat man :y: The beginning of it was awesome.

As Boston said, vocals should be a bit louder. The chorus wasnt catchy, but it was good.
I do this for me, and I do it for music, so it puts me to ease
Love that. Lyrics were sick as usual. I think delivery was fine, same with quality. Overall, nice track Spag.

PS. Two Questions:
So this is Life Overdose's Single?
And did you get your album cover done?
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Postby Steve Spag » Oct 3rd, '08, 03:12

shadymademe wrote:PS. Two Questions:
So this is Life Overdose's Single?
And did you get your album cover done?

1. No, I had originally planned for it to be on the CD, but I cut it to make room for better tracks, lol.
2. McMaybe's workin' on it for me right now. I'm sure he'll make it dope, lol.

Thanks for the feed man.
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Postby Tash8 » Oct 3rd, '08, 03:46

i felt like u were a bit slow on the flow, like if it was moved just a bit to the right it would have been perfect..

but overall dope song! album time?
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Postby neversnooze » Oct 3rd, '08, 04:55

like everyone else said it was a dope track and u had minor volume issues which i can pass , i really enjoyed this piece

btw i have it downloaded :wave:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - "DEDICATION"

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 3rd, '08, 18:39

^^
Thanks for the feed guys, much respect.

The album is in the works, better to wait it out to have better quality, lol.
Want to make it perfect.
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Postby Big Proof 4ever » Oct 3rd, '08, 19:14

oh shit 9 mb :sweating:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - "DEDICATION"

Postby Solace » Oct 4th, '08, 03:39

Steve Spag wrote:
shadymademe wrote:PS. Two Questions:
So this is Life Overdose's Single?
And did you get your album cover done?

1. No, I had originally planned for it to be on the CD, but I cut it to make room for better tracks, lol.
2. McMaybe's workin' on it for me right now. I'm sure he'll make it dope, lol.

Thanks for the feed man.

Its gunna be dope alright!

You should put the cut tracks on a little mixtape; The Missed Out Pills or something. The Pills That Didnt Digest. The Extra Pills etc.
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Postby Robbie G » Oct 4th, '08, 03:50

I liked ti man, waiting on the album. :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - "DEDICATION"

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 4th, '08, 04:28

shadymademe wrote:You should put the cut tracks on a little mixtape; The Missed Out Pills or something. The Pills That Didnt Digest. The Extra Pills etc.

Already had that planned ;) haha.

And thanks for the feed Shady Baby, much respect.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - "DEDICATION"

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 6th, '08, 02:17

beat is hot, vtz lol... cool

the flow is a little bit off, like timed unproperly... quality is good but still needs work, the concept and lyrics are great, good look on that

overall is a great track, not my style at all, but sounds good, also you need to feel more on your delivery, other than that a perfect track..

the lyrics on the hook are very very nice, good job on that
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