*New* Big Mak & Apocalypse: "Rock Dis Funky Joint"

[Makaveli525]

Well I know we are not up to par with the Poor Righteous Teachers.

But me and Apocalypse put down some verses on their beat.

We switched our styles up a little... and wanted to know what yall have to say.

The order of verses is Apocalypse, Mak, Apocalypse, Mak.

All comments are appreciated. As long as they are helpful. Thanks.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/504251802b1b8609/

[DelinQuent]

first off, volumes are too low.

first verse's lyrics were extremely corny.

2nd verse was better, rhyming was good. so was flow and delivery

again the 3rd verse was kinda stupid, "i'll have blood flowing thru your capillaries"... umm sorry but even before hearing him i had blood flowing just fine lol

4th verse again better. but the delivery was weaker.

overall, you both need work on delivery and well i guess just practice.

i wasnt really feeling it because the beat is wack to begin with, but thats not your fault, but the volumes being so low had me really struggling to stay along.

keep working

[Xray]

i agree with everything DQ said except i thought the volumes weren't bad. you guys sorta sound funny lol, definitely need to work on pronounciation and delivery, cause at times you slurr words to much.

[Makaveli525]

Well thanks for the feed.

By 'volumes are too low' I'm going to assume you mean vocals, so I will turn em up...

Only thing I really disagree with is "the beat is wack". That is classic PRT!!! Listen to that ish... it was funky... lol

Will work on the word-slurring, I'm thinking that's in how I structure my verses... cuz I need to leave some more space for breath-intake... lol

And by "you guys sorta sound funny", what does that mean? lol... I switch my voice up to try and get a better effect with the delivery, because everything else I've posted here, you all said sounded dead and lifeless and bored.

But will practice!!!

[Requiem]

the beat sounds old school, funky and fresh. lyrics were cool, just need to work on delivery. sounds like ur reading the lyrics. just put more air in ur voice, but i liked the whole thing.
verses were great.
verse 2 was better than verse 1, better delivery, but wasn't loud enough.

i liked the track, 7/10, a great practice track

[Makaveli525]

Preciate that Ice Killa.

I did up the levels of the vocals.

I wonder if they are too loud now.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/50457716c6f55811/

[Makaveli525]

^ do those levels make the track any more listenable?

[Kez]

^ do those levels make the track any more listenable?

You have them.

[Solace]

^ do those levels make the track any more listenable?

You have them.

REPORTED NOOB

Thats nasty ^ And i didnt get the joke.

[B.A.D.]

I agree with kez

fuckin noobz

[Kez]

REPORTED NOOB

Thats nasty ^ And i didnt get the joke.

Oh no, don't report me

The joke was he has some fucking balls to bump his own shit when Ax has brought an album out today and he's paid it no fucking attention.

Gonna sound like a broken record, but i don't care this still pisses me off

[Solace]

REPORTED NOOB

Thats nasty ^ And i didnt get the joke.

Oh no, don't report me

The joke was he has some fucking balls to bump his own shit when Ax has brought an album out today and he's paid it no fucking attention.

Gonna sound like a broken record, but i don't care this still pisses me off

Thats true. Especially when you did sucha good part (i love the remix you did)

[Makaveli525]

Damn yo.

I meant no disrespect to Ax-D.

No need for all that.

[Call Me Pik]

the 2nd and 4th verse has much better flow

overall i wasnt really feelin it just kuz it was boring to listen to tah me ......the rhymes where excellent tho so good job on lyricism overall i give it a 6/10

[Makaveli525]

Well thanks Pik.

But seriously guys, I was just asking a question.

I didn't go into the Audio Stage and say hmmm... there's an album... let me bump my ish above his!!

No... I went into my posts... and was wondering if I had fixed a problem.

So I asked.

I apologize if I offended anyone.