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Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

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Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Dec 31st, '08, 05:46

well heres the song, i hope yall like it
i know i mispronounced irascible, i thought it was something out my mistake!
i might re record this but for now here it is and i hope you guys enjoy. thanks!

ASYLUM
http://www.myspace.com/rozzicrew


http://www.zshare.net/audio/53499628536cb97a/


if you can listen from the myspace one! gota keep those plays coming! but either way is fine

you wana fight? set the date, im known to be irascible/
on the site i detonate, no one here can match the flow/
write to win, drop constant tracks, no one heres as skilled as me/
pint of gin on top of yac, still wouldnt be as ill as me/
look at you, your petrified, you go behind your friends n hide/
praying, kneeling next to christ, hoping that the tension dies/
and then when you least expect it, thats when these things get hectic/
have your family do the "mourning", fore they even seat for breakfast/
what you written, dont bother spitten, get it n just rip it up/
only time you rippin, spitten is when your hit, sick spitten blood/
have you kickin', wishin, head is splittin, get the ambulance/
stab you, quick incision, filled with stitches, now you feeling us?/
just thought you could hurt me? your cocky with a shallow lead/
just knocked you out in thirteen, like rocky did apollo creed/
now i swear im done witchu, i got other stuff to do/
i feel bad for the next guy whose just another bluff like you/
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 31st, '08, 05:51

Without a doubt you have skill, your flow was flawless, lyric wise they were good but not something that made me go :o, delivery was on point, emotion was there.
Very very nice track, 8/10. Put more crazy lines you'll have 10/10 tracks every time. :y:
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Slovinec » Dec 31st, '08, 05:56

lmao some1 just got dissed.. nice 5/5
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby <Stiiccy> » Dec 31st, '08, 09:15

good shit man,..i loved all of it...cant wait till it's finished

only prob is...the beginning where you say bring it to the streets Dude you from Bosten there are no fucking streets...its all suburb's
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Dec 31st, '08, 13:45

thanks for all the feed people really appreciate it.
especially you maybe, means a lot.

and sticcy, no disrespect bro, but you are COMPLETELY wrong with that..completely man, boston is the city.. the suburbs are outside of boston..
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby randomghost » Dec 31st, '08, 14:21

nice intro....dammnn some nice shit :y: :y: :y: :y: :y: :y: nice lyrics...flow is decent...nice beat...good diss man..enjoyed listening :y: :y: lookin forward to hear more :happy:
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Jay-19 » Dec 31st, '08, 15:27

Damn man, your flow on this track is straight up insane man! :worship:
Your delivery is crazy! I can really feel your anger!

Rhymes are really good and you pull the concept off flawless!
This shit is fucking fire man!
Can't wait till it's finished!

This track is going to be on my mp3, no doubt! :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Dec 31st, '08, 22:13

^^ thanks a lot bro

more feed please people..
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Tash8 » Dec 31st, '08, 22:19

def feeling this, the mourning/morning line was a bit cliche, but besides that it was all tight... good job man

i'd just work on a bit pronunciation.. u kinda seem to spit while ur rapping.
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Dec 31st, '08, 22:23

thanks! ha and yeah, i had more spit in my mouth than ever for some reason
i kept drinking water like crazy my mouth felt dry before i went but maybe i had to much?! shit idk ha
but thanks for all the feed!

you already know ima bring more heat!

keep it coming people, thanks for the people who feed me, yall will most def get feed again when yall drop something. for the people who dont want to feed when i feed them, pfftt
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 1st, '09, 01:13

Boston wrote:thanks for all the feed people really appreciate it.
especially you maybe, means a lot.

and sticcy, no disrespect bro, but you are COMPLETELY wrong with that..completely man, boston is the city.. the suburbs are outside of boston..

i swear dude...when i went up there all i saw was suburbs...i might be wrong but thats all i saw
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Boston » Jan 1st, '09, 01:15

lol i can promise you on my whole life boston isn't suburbs AT ALL. far from it. (im not saying there arent good parts) but yeah, outside of boston you will fine wack ass citys. but its all good. do you remember what part you went to?
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 1st, '09, 01:17

Boston wrote:lol i can promise you on my whole life boston isn't suburbs AT ALL. far from it. (im not saying there arent good parts) but yeah, outside of boston you will fine wack ass citys. but its all good. do you remember what part you went to?

naaa man...i dont...but ill take your word for it...it just seemed like a reall decent suburban city...which i for one would be proud of...
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Steve Spag » Jan 1st, '09, 01:21

Damn, nice drop bro! Feelin' the ager and emotion you put into it, matched the flow very well. Lyrics were sick too, really diggin' the wordplay.

Keep it up dude!
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Re: Asylum/Haters w.e! New Song!!***

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 1st, '09, 01:39

pretty good, i would just work on my lyrics more tho so that they're not too basic and cliche but i think this track deserves an 8/10 :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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