Ring Around The Rosie-First Round Tourney Entry

[DelinQuent]

since pik never submitted a song, i won by default.
leaking the track so you guys can listen.
Mart85 on the beat.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/542971562830b300/
or
http://www.myspace.com/iamdelinquent

Lyrics-
(Hook)ring around the rosey, pocket full of posey/
rhyme around the beat, try and watch my feet/
ashes ashes, we all fall down/
rappers rappers, we all claim the crown/

i been a beast, and you been a monster/
betta watch um, yeah i mean my feet/
fly like a butterfly sting like a bee/
call me ali, the best hardly/
yet i claim greatness, yes the greatest/
bout to make his-tory, are we?/
or are we, all fallin/
we all fall in, to the same category/
some way or another, same crappy story/
how we cant afford things, still marching forward/
recycled and rewound, we just wanna be renowned/
as the best ever, so much effort/
at what cost, is it chalked as a loss/
say what you want, call yourself a boss/
spittin all the lines bout how you run wit nines/
tell me at what point did your life become a lie/

i say im a prince, and you say you're a king/
doin my thing, yeah i mean on this beat/
you be mean on the street, im just happy to be here/
rappin all the year, just jabbin in ya ear/
say ya have me beat up, i just kick my feet up/
never slow down, dog watch me speed up/
i know ya next move, like a mind reader/
but dont mind me tho, dont want beef yo/
cook me to sterloin, yeah i seen yer boys/
toughest in the world, got me shakin in my britches/
i dont need a girl, cause i got you bitches/
see ya position, watch how it's switchin/
i'd say im a beast, but ya'll dont wanna listen/
and i cant blame, after all that you have witnessed/
see the fakest fakers, claiming on to greatness/
said you'd come beat me, words so weightless/

[B.A.D.]

WOW, who mixed the track???? fuckin studo quality

I love youre swagga, the flow seems great on this track, I love it, also lyrics are simple but do the job very nice, defo worth it to be a win on the tourny

nuttn much to say, but I love it

also mart, the beat is good but this sample has been used by Damn fuckin millions of people hahaha, anyways, I like the drums haha

10/10

[randomghost]

NICE QUALITY good as mixing nice singing...hot beat from mart85

loved the song u recorded this in the studio?

[mart85]

nice song man, quality is indeed great... good to hear someone rapping on that beat, I made that back in 2006 haha... so when Killa asked me for beats for this tourny, I remembered it and sent it to him

also mart, the beat is good but this sample has been used by Damn fuckin millions of people hahaha, anyways, I like the drums haha

10/10

oh really? I didn't know lol, I think it was Coccoa who sent me that sample, already chopped, like 3 years ago and I just added drums to it... I don't deserve much credit for that beat other than the drums

[DelinQuent]

mixed at my house, recorded at my house, just like every other song i do. i did take a little bit more time mixing this time tho.

thanks for the feed.

mart, glad to see you enjoyed what i did to your beat lol

[Rain Matrix]

this song is catchy... it was mixed well all the components of a dope track was their the only thing lacking was your lyrics and not by much - keep doing your thing

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the feed rain, i appreciate it

[Tornado]

kool song, better than most of your mixtape but i personally didn't like the slow flow but it sounded ok

[Steve Spag]

Pretty sick track man, looking forward to battling against you in the next round.
Good luck, and keep it up dude!

[DelinQuent]

thanks tornado i like to think i keep improving lol

steve, fuck you, you're done in this tourney after this round lmfao j/p

good luck to you too man

[Steve Spag]

steve, fuck you, you're done in this tourney after this round lmfao j/p

good luck to you too man

NOW it's on lmaooo.

[Boston]

this is something different from you, usually hear other shit.
i thought it was dope, the type of delivery you had. not the whisper type rap you usually do
it was kind of singing, but rapping? shit i dont know. melodic (if thats a word) delivery. good shit
lyrics were simple, but at first i just read the lyrics and didnt think a lot was going to rhyme but i was wrong so it was nice. the flow was good. average. catchy song. the hook isnt amazing but i also like what you did with it.good luck in the tourny

i wish i did my song :[

[gutawafang]

It's great man. Nice vocals.

[DelinQuent]

boston, thanks for the indepth feed. and yeah i was going for a more melodic type flow/delivery so people would catch on to it better. good that you noticed.

gut, thanks for taking time to listen

[gutawafang]

boston, thanks for the indepth feed. and yeah i was going for a more melodic type flow/delivery so people would catch on to it better. good that you noticed.

gut, thanks for taking time to listen

I am looking forward to more!