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The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby Requiem » Feb 5th, '09, 01:20

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This is my first album, and i hope you all enjoy it. please feed honestly, and track by track if u can. I want to thank everyone who made it possible, for hte full list of shoutouts, please see http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=29&t=55379
TR, u r all awesome :worship: i feel lucky to be counted amongst u.

btw. check out Pre-Mic if u want to hear some of my old shits. even if for just comparison, from then and now. ;)
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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby Robbie G » Feb 5th, '09, 02:42

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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Feb 5th, '09, 08:01

If Ur Happy(intro) - haha..wow..I don't know if this is a good way to start off an album or what. I guess a laugh isn't so bad. No comment.

Soon You'll See - Cool beat. I like the angry voice. The lyrics are crazy once again and I like that. Nothing really to say. The flow was okay. The hook could've been put together better.

Breaking Boundaries (feat. Alysha) - Volume is too low on the voices. It's a good track though. It has a good point. No real complaints here ya'll just speaking the truth. Lyrics and flow were intact. Alysha's not bad at all. :y: I like this song

Takeover (feat. Chet Starr) - I like the intro of the beat. It does make it sound like a takeover is coming. I like your lyrics Ice Killa, but the only problem I had was how you would rap multi syllable rhymes and then end it with one..for example deliverance, ventriloquist --> miss ..I don't know, just didn't care for that :tounge2: lol..overall you had a good flow and lyrics none the less. Lyrics were crazy on your other verse. Chorus fit well. I liked it for the track it was. Chet..did you add an effect to your voice?..It wasn't bad it just reminds me of something I can't think of...lol anyway..lyrics were okay. Rhymes were kind of everywhere. Decent flow. I've heard better. I still wanna collab though.

Out of Control - I know it wasn't supposed to be humorous, but I chuckled a bit on the opening ginger bread lines. I like the crazy lyrics. "It ain't over till the fat lady sung..that reminds me where's your mom?" <-- I lol'd at that. I didn't like the sudden pause at the end of the first & second verse and then letting the beat ride out for a few seconds. You should've either added a chorus to this song or just rapped the entire track. Your flow was on an off.

Kid Kanniff (Skit) - No comment, lol.

Iller Than Average - Lyrics aren't bad. They're actually pretty good I just didn't enjoy how they were put together/rapped at first, but it picked up half way. MC Anonymous went off on this with a nice long flow and good lyrics. Ice I thought you spit a short verse after MC, but I realized that was the hook after I re-listened to the track. You couldn't tell because it seemed out of place. I think you need to work on your hooks. Add a little extra something to them like background vocals (which I can tell you do, but mess with effects, panning or experiment) Just something so it doesn't seem like it's one verse.

Not What It Use To Be (feat. Alysha) - I like the beat and the intro you did along with it. Alysha is pretty good. Good flow..she ain't too bad. This is probably your best quality sounding track. Your flow on this one was there. It was much put together than the previous songs. I like how you pointed out examples of what the rap game is like now. Definitely my favorite track so far..as far as mixing goes.

You Don't Even Know - I didn't like the beat. Some of the instruments didn't mesh together well. They either need to be removed or fixed. It was too simple. It really takes away from the rapping. The chorus is nice and it's kind of catchy. Rhymes are simple, but the lyrics have meaning. It seems like this could've been a better song which could've been made into a story since you it starts from how could you cheat? to murdering the new guy. Just a better, more dramatic beat and more emotion on the track. Not bad though :y:

Problematic (feat. Alysha) - Lyrics are okay, but simple. Hook is boring. it's like you know how you want to rap, but you don't know how to put everything together correctly. Let the beat ride again before the chorus. It's not a bad thing, but it takes away from the verses when you stop and I have to wait a few seconds for the hook. Tracks alright..not your best.

Kid Kanniff (song) - I like the feel of this beat. It's dark. But wow I don't know what to say about this track haha. The lyrics are nuts and I understand why, and why it's rapped the way it is..but..haa I dunno the hook is extremely weird. The voice sounds like Pennywise The Clown from IT. No comment on this song, lol.

(Outro) Denace the Menace Freestyle - Very nice. Short, but the flow was there and the lyrics were decent. It was a good 'freestyle'. I guess not a bad way to end the album..

All in all it's not bad for your first album. In time you're going to learn more and pick new things up when it comes to mixing and recording and how you want a song to be done. You just need to work on a few things and that will all come with time. We're in the same boat. If I showed you my first rap song ever to my current one you'd be amazed at the change. So keep it up :y:
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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby Tash8 » Feb 5th, '09, 08:08

upload to something other than megaupload, i can't use that.
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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby Robbie G » Feb 5th, '09, 12:38

Tash8 wrote:upload to something other than megaupload, i can't use that.

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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby Solace » Feb 5th, '09, 21:40

Chet Starr wrote:I'll feed this very soon :y: :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:

Same here, oh and let it be known that some of the voices on the kid kanniff skit are me and chet.

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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby ShAdY CaPo 08 » Feb 5th, '09, 22:11

i wanna hear this but i cant. everytime i click to DL it from either mega or rapid it just saves to my comp. as icekilla.rr or somethin and willnt open. fuck.
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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby Requiem » Feb 5th, '09, 23:11

ShAdY CaPo 08 wrote:i wanna hear this but i cant. everytime i click to DL it from either mega or rapid it just saves to my comp. as icekilla.rr or somethin and willnt open. fuck.

download a winrar freetrial :happy:

@ Dbeua, THX ALOT MAN great feedback. that's what i like to see. i thank u for ur honesty, and i will work on them chorus's, and flow/delivery, etc. and thx for appreciating my craziness :shifty:

@ Epiphany, LMAO, i was going to keep it confidential. but yes Chet Starr and Epiphany do feature in the Kid Kanniff Skit :happy:

@ Chet, can't wait man :smoking:

@ Shady Babie, i'm still waitin for ur feed :angry: jk :p thx for helpin tash out btw :8)
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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby ShAdY CaPo 08 » Feb 6th, '09, 05:50

alright lets seeeeee...hmmmmm....
did you make your own beats? iller than average, out of control, and not what it use to be are the beats i like all the others ones i was into too much. you lyrics are pretty basic and flow is a little choppy or just not there yet. i know it will get better tho. keep writing and keep spitting it out loud, im sure that'll help. your friend alysha sounds good...damn, for real she can spit and she sound good too. she was deff. a good feature to throw on your ep. mc anon was okay, i think his lyrics or w/e were good but just needs to keep workin with recordin, flow, and sound. im not feelin the ep cover or the back of it...im not understanding much of it...the back looks way too much like T.E.S... and the kid kanniff stuff should kinda go too... i liked the intro tho lol that was pretty unique or creative..i gotta say out of all ppl who release their ep's or mixtapes on trshady i never care to listen to their shit. actually you are the first one i ever downloaded. i can tell you put good effort in this and i got a feelin you're gonna get better and you'll (we all) see a difference. i was curious to check out your shit. hopefully one day i can get enough motivation to put together somethin like this.. kinda pumps me up in a way lol .. we should collab one day too, seriously. glad i DLed it, hope to hear more from you soon
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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby Requiem » Feb 7th, '09, 00:09

ShAdY CaPo 08 wrote:alright lets seeeeee...hmmmmm....
did you make your own beats? iller than average, out of control, and not what it use to be are the beats i like all the others ones i was into too much. you lyrics are pretty basic and flow is a little choppy or just not there yet. i know it will get better tho. keep writing and keep spitting it out loud, im sure that'll help. your friend alysha sounds good...damn, for real she can spit and she sound good too. she was deff. a good feature to throw on your ep. mc anon was okay, i think his lyrics or w/e were good but just needs to keep workin with recordin, flow, and sound. im not feelin the ep cover or the back of it...im not understanding much of it...the back looks way too much like T.E.S... and the kid kanniff stuff should kinda go too... i liked the intro tho lol that was pretty unique or creative..i gotta say out of all ppl who release their ep's or mixtapes on trshady i never care to listen to their shit. actually you are the first one i ever downloaded. i can tell you put good effort in this and i got a feelin you're gonna get better and you'll (we all) see a difference. i was curious to check out your shit. hopefully one day i can get enough motivation to put together somethin like this.. kinda pumps me up in a way lol .. we should collab one day too, seriously. glad i DLed it, hope to hear more from you soon


damn man, thx for the feed :y: and thx for ur honesty, and yea, i will be working to improve on my shit. and defnitely man, let's collab. pm me a beat u want to work on, or i can make something.
btw, edik amin made iller than average, and out of control. I produced Not What It Use To Be, tash helped me mix it tho :happy:
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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby Robbie G » Feb 8th, '09, 06:12

Intro – Pretty funny, and a good way to start off the album. Should have been louder though, it seemed like it got really quiet.

Breaking boundaries – I thought the beat was nice, at least it was catchy enough. Flow seemed a little meed/ forced at times but it wasn't that bad. Also I think alyssia goes well with you because you both have somewhat younger sounding voices.

Iller than average
– flow was a lot better on this than the first song, not amazing but pretty good. Mc sounded weird when his verse started, and his pronunciation could have been better. Rhymes sounded pretty tight though. Cool song overall.

Ked Kanif Skit – Funny shit, but a little weird knowing it was chet and epiphany :p

Ked Kaniff – hahah..pretty damn funny song. I liked the beat for this more than the previous ones. Rapping was alright, not great at parts but it was funny.

Not what it used to be
– alysha's verse on this is better than the previous one. I thought the chorus was pretty catchy but I didn't like the effect you used on it.

Out of control – lmao at going from gingerbread man, to gangster. Nice change of tone, but just a little hard to take serious. :smoking: beat was cool.

Problematic
– Pretty average track. I kinda liked how you changed your voice on the chorus because it usually sounds the same. Not much else specific to say.

Soon you'll see – Chorus was great with the beat here. I didn't like the verses that much, it just seemed to flow weird. It had it's moments though.

Takover
– This song just shit's on the rest of the album. Chet's verse starts out a little odd but gets awesome after that. Good job, shits on my mp3. :smoking:

You don't even know – One of the best on the album. I thought you had really good flow in parts and the chorus was catchy.

Pretty good for your first album man, your definitely improving. At times your voice sounds pretty young and nasally....but I guess there really isn't much you can do about that. :sweating: You have potential just keep doing your thing and find your style.

sorry for basically shit feed but I'm tired, I'll think about it tomorrow at work. :y:
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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby Requiem » Feb 8th, '09, 06:26

^thx for the feed man. much appreciated! :worship:

glad u liked takeover man. hell yea me and chet owned that shit. yup, and as i continue to grow as an artist. i'll eventually just fall into my own style. i think i kinda showed it on soon you'll see. and out of control. but kid kanniff just ruins my gangster image :smoking:
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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby MoBrat » Feb 8th, '09, 10:56

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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby Kez » Feb 8th, '09, 13:14

Chet Starr wrote:3 Knights taking over this bitch!


Sorry, but if you class Ice Killa as a "knight" of TR rap you must be doing LSD.

Didn't like the album. You're decent, but you need improvement. You need to stop acting like you're a fucking king and that everyone on TR should include you in "best of" lists. Do you think the fact you've made an album means you can now be classed with others who have? Seriously, go away, improve a bit, then come back. If you reach MCMaybe or SaJJad's level, then you can brag.
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Re: The Ice Killa EP (Album)

Postby Kez » Feb 8th, '09, 18:19

Chet Starr wrote:
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Chet Starr wrote:3 Knights taking over this bitch!


Sorry, but if you class Ice Killa as a "knight" of TR rap you must be doing LSD.

what the hell is a knight of tr rap :laughing:

It's just a name dude, need to just calm down :smoking:


Well is that not what you were trying to imply when you called him "a knight taking over"?
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