RedZek - You Crossed The Line

[Le Tunisien]

Redzek - You Crossed The Line ( U Got Nothin to Do )

Was lookin for a collab but well ill post it up
http://www.zshare.net/audio/5635212059dfcf33/

I Do like my song lol,dunno what u gonna think just be honest dont do like i said on the lyrics ...

Lyrics:

Verse1:

been betchin so long,dunno whats wrong
i couldnt get along,i cant go on
ill sing this song,so u get among
Im pissed enough,got no mood
i feel the hate ,it aint good,
gettin hit for every step i take
gettin sick from every breath i make,
feel the earthquake..
fkn faggot....made me racist
u made me mad,i wont fkn pass it
because im white,u think i aint right
turn on the light,u know u might
took look in a mirror?,see the sight
of an ugly retard,tryna be smart
i do have a heart,but fault apart
its too dark,to survive this part
u wont spark,ur dark as a dart
ur so complicated,ur life is hard
ill stabb u with a knife in a fkn park
At night,i pray bfore i close my eye
wishin this motherfuckin james would die
u fkn sucker,ur names could cry
i have to diss u?lame,should i ??
but ur black ,u do not attract
Just say:
Chorus :

"My life is so gay
i watch tv all the day
it is ok,but if i get lonely
i stick to my homie,notpad and tr shady
oh yea baby , got nothin to do ,i aint u
im just a fkn fool,got no friend at the end
it aint so fkn cool
from school to home,from home to school
i wont go out to the hood,at house its all good"

Verse 2 :
fkn FeedBacks,Lies and Lies
I do Attacks, i Make u Cry
Fkn Big Axe,Fkn Lame Tracks
Fkn James R,Fkn Dame Fags
You Both are,in Same Bags
Axe In One,James in Stacks
its just truth,in my comments
its a proof, but no offense
ur dick riders,in ur Defence
u pulled a ross,im 50 cent
thats what i meant
u dont understand
Didnt matter at first,
what colour you was
Id murder u ,hear all the applause
u Aint nothin to me but a fkn Sauce
Decent?no,u aint even close
why diss you??,i had a cause
But i suppose,you'll fall down like a fkn rose
all in his side they like to Dick Ride
Foolish Pride,They got no life but hide in this site
Big Axe D,u a fkn punk,aint no G,but tryna be,
a sweet EmCee fkn try me,ull fkn Bleed, Sayiiiiin

Chorus:

"My life is so gay
i watch tv all the day
it is ok,but if i get lonely
i stick to my homie,notpad and tr shady
oh yea baby , got nothin to do ,i aint u
im just a fkn fool,got no friend at the end
it aint so fkn cool
from school to home,from home to school
i wont go out to the hood,at house its all good"

[Boston]

the quality is absolutely ass along with the beat. some lyrics were bad forthe most part, but some were okay at the most i guess. i dont know why you bolded some parts, multis? do you really have to do that. in my songs i have more multies in 1 line than you have in your own song muaha. flow is bad, but is on at some parts. idk what to say. i dont like it
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[SajN]

Wow, take out whatever you have in your mouth before you start recording. It's impossible to hear your lyrics.
The lyrics weren't any special. veery simple. Not a good diss.

You have NO delivery and NO flow.
It seems like you've just had a mouth operation or something, cuz that's the way you sound when you are "rapping". Seems like you can't open your mouth.

The hook/chorus sucked sooo badly, that I actually had to skip it the next time.
You need so speak clearer. and the quality was shit too.



If you don't think this was honest, then I don't even know what this was.

[Le Tunisien]

the quality is absolutely ass along with the beat. some lyrics were bad forthe most part, but some were okay at the most i guess. i dont know why you bolded some parts, multis? do you really have to do that. in my songs i have more multies in 1 line than you have in your own song muaha. flow is bad, but is on at some parts. idk what to say. i dont like it
1

Ok np

[Le Tunisien]

Wow, take out whatever you have in your mouth before you start recording. It's impossible to hear your lyrics.
The lyrics weren't any special. veery simple. Not a good diss.

You have NO delivery and NO flow.
It seems like you've just had a mouth operation or something, cuz that's the way you sound when you are "rapping". Seems like you can't open your mouth.

The hook/chorus sucked sooo badly, that I actually had to skip it the next time.
You need so speak clearer. and the quality was shit too.



If you don't think this was honest, then I don't even know what this was.

hmm that was quiete honest,ye thats how i sound since its not my language not that easy to rap in foreign language ,well ye the quality wasnt that good cuz i record with a normal mic not in a studio lol and i dont aggree about the delivery and flow thing

[SajN]

You doubled posted .... again.


Hmm, if that isn't your language you need to practise the words before you start rapping. (I have the same problem).
The thing is, it seems like your mouth is only 2 centimetres open.
You need to open it more.

Don't worry about the quality though.

But I still think the delivery and flow was shit.

[Le Tunisien]

You doubled posted .... again.


Hmm, if that isn't your language you need to practise the words before you start rapping. (I have the same problem).
The thing is, it seems like your mouth is only 2 centimetres open.
You need to open it more.

Don't worry about the quality though.

But I still think the delivery and flow was shit.

i take this as an advice

[randomghost]

1st of all i wont feed this...coz its a waste of ma time ur askin me to collab wid u for dissing X & James??!! for dissing arabs....no one dissed arabs here...dont try to get me involved in this coz if i did i'll be against u....its true am arab...but i dont see nobody hatin here.....ur the one who is hatin for being racist shame on u *but ur black ,u do not attract*........AS I SAID DONT GET ME INVOLVED COZ IF I DID..ASK PEOPLE ABOUT ME HERE THEY WILL TELL U....


beside: big axd is ma homie since i joined this site...so dont think ama turn on him

[randomghost]

What the fuck was that?

am askin ma self the same question

[Le Tunisien]

What the fuck was that?

It Was a Song in Mp3 Format lol

[mcZu]

What the fuck was that?

It Was an Song ear-rape in Mp3 Format lol

Exactly

[B.A.D.]

lol

I am actually surprised you responded... either way it wasn't strong enough... so.. learn to rap, then afterwards you can diss me

racist faggot

[Le Tunisien]

lol

I am actually surprised you responded... either way it wasn't strong enough... so.. learn to rap, then afterwards you can diss me

racist faggot

im actually not racist but i just said it to piss him off,i have friends who are black but this one such a gay one lol

[Solace]

It didnt seem like he was pissed off, it seemed like he laughed at it ^

Anyways, its good to see your taking advice instead of telling everyone theyre a hater when they say you really suck. Your lyrics are still quite bad...I'd say drop in CW til you get the respect you expect, and then start the dropping of songs til people say your actually decent.

[Le Tunisien]

It didnt seem like he was pissed off, it seemed like he laughed at it ^

Anyways, its good to see your taking advice instead of telling everyone theyre a hater when they say you really suck. Your lyrics are still quite bad...I'd say drop in CW til you get the respect you expect, and then start the dropping of songs til people say your actually decent.

just doin it for fun,i wouldnt need people to tell me that im decent or somethin,havin u hearin my song is actually Nice for me