Dropping a Verse For The '09

[dbeauluvswomen]

Titled "My Imigination". I may finish it. I'm not sure.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/57039913e56285c0/

[AspirinE]

U must finish it... Its great... for real... The typa shit id listen to.

never checked out ur tracks before.. but i sure will check out more.

edit:

To be more specific.

Flow - perfect
Lyrics - very unique
Quality - well it could be mixed better but thats about all the - i can think of.

[dbeauluvswomen]

Thanks for the feed Asp ^
I'll try and mix it better. I hardly have time for myself, but will get around to completing it! Really appreciate it

[AspirinE]

how about a trio colab?

[AspirinE]

how about a trio colab?

That would be Rosie O'Donnell in short shorts. (hot).

Am i a loser for not knowing Rosie o'donell?

[AspirinE]

*beats offf*

[dbeauluvswomen]

^ haha
Thanks for the listen McMaybe. I will definitely send you the final copy! Appreciate it

[Jay-19]

Yeah, it's been said already but, flow was perfect man!
I really enjoy listening to your stuff! You're without a doubt one of the top 5 rappers on this board!
This verse gave me some old school vibes, but still very well mixed with some new school.
Don't know if that makes any sense at all, but that's what I feel.
Lyrics are top notch!

Awesome job dude!

[<Stiiccy>]

god damn that was good...

[dbeauluvswomen]

Jay-19. Thanks for taking time to listen. I think I understand what you mean. The feed was much appreciated!

Thanks for the listen sticcy z!

McMaybe, I may send you a file later. A verse for this collab I did and another being a song. I gotta go to work though. Thanks

Peace

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

oh man the lyrics were sick....your flow very decent...
ASP & Maybe & DBeau collabo *squirts*

[Tash8]

your stop n go flow is really annoying, learn to spit it in one take it'll make it a lot less choppy.

[Solace]

Damn man with all the commotion i dont wanna check this out until its finished!

[randomghost]

nice lyrics good flow....nice delivery am feelin it i used the same beat for ma upcoming album good verse...nice stuff..lookin forward to hear the full version

[Xray]

It wasn't bad, needs a lot of work. Delivery was boring, you didn't care for your words, not much emotion put into it, which turned me down. You delivered the entire verse with a cocky delivery IMO, it was also monotone as hell. Flow was also monotone, every line was delivered exact same way, bored me out. The overlays were loud as hell, which caused your flow to sound choppy, cause the overlays kept ending exact same time a new line started so it made it sound like you took several takes instead of a one take. I say you should re-record this most definitely, with more emotion in it. I didn't feel the lyrics because of the delivery. Honest feed like always my man.