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Lyrikal Killer

Postby Mr. Chambers » Sep 22nd, '09, 17:06

i haven't did much since i dropped my tape as far as rapping.......i been working on producing............and whatnot......but i been having this kid dissing my on a different forum i'm on.......so i figured it'd be a good way to step in..............i'ma be back on my shit soon...... :y:

still looking for collabs and shit.......

http://www.zshare.net/audio/65959423a39f8391/
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby Tranquil » Sep 22nd, '09, 17:09

Yo man, nice track, im down for a collab if you want, check out my first single off of my upcoming mixtape: http://www.limelinx.com/files/0b747a080 ... f3ebaf83be, hit me up if you want to do a collab :)
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 22nd, '09, 17:20

:o FUCK JARED!
whoever he is he got lit up :worship:
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby *MIRANDA* » Sep 22nd, '09, 17:20

hes a freakin repeater :rock:
not only u dissed him, but with those snippets he totally owned himself aswell rofl
genius diss song :worship:
yo flow be amazing :flower:
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby Mr. Chambers » Sep 22nd, '09, 17:38

thank you thank you thank you.....yall are far to kind............
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Sep 22nd, '09, 18:11

that acapella part was neat....nice quality....nice laidback/cocky delivery haha...lyrics came hard already...flow was very steady for an acapella...
beat: kool...matches the concept (?) flow gets even better...
pronouncation: no problem with me....hook is niiice and catchy...
good track :y:
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby DelinQuent » Sep 22nd, '09, 18:19

into was dope, lmfao. sometimes your pronunciation was a bit weird, but thats forgiven, lyrics were dope.

shit got way better when the beat dropped. flow is dope, lyrics and rhyming is dope too.

not into the hook, thats the only bad part so far.

second verse is dope too, really not much to say. volumes are a bit low.

as for the samples of his shit, they sounded pretty good to be honest lmfao.

you don't sound like asher or budden though, at all.

anyway, dope track, for real, keep it up.
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby theJFKshow » Sep 22nd, '09, 18:22

My name is Jared wtf
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby Solace » Sep 22nd, '09, 21:41

Fucking sick track man. Clever and funny fucking punches and the intro was dope as fuck shit. Love ya multies too. Nice beat, at first it reminded me of Forever haha. Chorus was dope too, make me wanna sing with it (even tho id rather not lmao). Still only 4 minutes through which aint even half and I find this dope as fuck. :y:
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby Drama Setter » Sep 22nd, '09, 21:47

damn 21 MB for only 1 track? am realy into it and will feed back when it's done :y:
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby Solace » Sep 22nd, '09, 21:48

drama setter wrote:damn 21 MB for only 1 track? am realy into it and will feed back when it's done :y:

11minutes bro and dope quality too
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby Mr. Chambers » Sep 22nd, '09, 22:13

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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby Solace » Sep 23rd, '09, 13:16

Btw on Super Chambers Bros is the track Im The One a diss to him? Seems like it would fit perfectly against him so just asking since the entire track is in the form of a diss.

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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby Mr. Chambers » Sep 23rd, '09, 17:47

funny how your the only one to have picked that up......even he didn't................ :shock:
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Re: Lyrikal Killer

Postby Xray » Sep 23rd, '09, 17:54

Cool song, nothing spectacular but decent. Thought it was WAY to long, specially the beginning waiting for the beat to drop. You made the beat? cause if you did you should put it in your first post man, I'm curious to how your beats sound cause you mentioned that you make beats.
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