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Postby gutawafang » Oct 12th, '09, 02:05

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Track Listing:
01.Drugged
02.Misery Business
03.Alisah
04.He Who Destroyed Us
05.Despair

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zshare: http://www.zshare.net/download/66826180ecaa4a55/
filefactory: http://www.filefactory.com/file/a0g18fe ... inutes_rar

I basically want to know my standards before I produce a better album. So I made this so called mixtape or demo tape. It doesn't matter what you call it. :happy:

I basically rapped one verse for every song in the list, except Despair, the sinlge I made LONG AGO. :sweating: I put it on there because Paramore put Decode on Brand New Eyes too. :whistle: So why not? And I'm sorry if you wanted to hear more. :sweating:

Anyways, as you can see, I mixed everything myself, so pardon me if the quality ain't good. Furthermore, I didn't use a proper mixing software. I used Audacity, an editing software. I don't know how to use other softwares. :p

All I did was adjust the volumes, rap over a rap, etc. Oh, and I used Samson Usb Mic.

That's all man. I hope you guys would check this out. I need constructive feedback to know my standards. Thanks ya'll. :flower:
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 12th, '09, 02:30

fuck yeah!!!
checking it out right now...
i like it :worship:
really loving Misery Business & Despair
keep dropping audio my sinapore brother :p
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby classthe_king » Oct 12th, '09, 02:37

:o Downloading now
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby gutawafang » Oct 12th, '09, 02:39

DerdyPK wrote:fuck yeah!!!
checking it out right now...
i like it :worship:
really loving Misery Business & Despair
keep dropping audio my sinapore brother :p

Love you man. Thanks a lot for checking it out. Means a lot to me. :happy:
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby FAME » Oct 12th, '09, 02:41

AHHH, I'm so dumbfounded, how do I convert rar files again? :sweating:
I really want to listen.
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby classthe_king » Oct 12th, '09, 02:46

The beats are either way to loud or your rapping is way to soft. Couldn't understand anything you said on all the songs. The only song i could understand was despair. And on that song you really need to work on your delivery. You slur alot of your words together and you sound really bored while rapping. You need more energy.
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby Solace » Oct 12th, '09, 02:46

FAME wrote:AHHH, I'm so dumbfounded, how do I convert rar files again? :sweating:
I really want to listen.

you dont convert it you open it.
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby gutawafang » Oct 12th, '09, 02:47

krayzy wrote:i actually liked the songs, just seemed real unique, and your lyrics were real dope, thanks for providing them with the songs :flower:

Lyrically everything was on point, pretty dope to me

but the quality, it wasn't that bad, but sometimes a little hard to hear, you can do better mixing with audacity i once used that, you just need to turn your vocals up more, i know its good to blend them in with the song, but its its mor important if can hear you clearly, just turn the vocals up a little more when ya mix

the editing was okay, but could be improved, maybe have someone else try editing for you? or just work on it yourself

your flow was pretty straight, i liked it, never really fell off you did a good job with that, the delivery was great imo, but, your pronounciation could be worked on, but then again, i could just be your accent i hear, but yea work on that if possible, its not bad tho

overall i really actually liked all this, i did enjoy listening to each song eager to hear the next, basically studio shit and lke the production just needs to be worked on, mix'd better, like i said turn up the vocals a bit, their not too bad, but would help, you'll eventually get that all sorted tho once u rly start getting into it more, and minus production , just work on your pronounciation if possible, and you'll be set :)

and yea, longer would of been nicer :happy:

Really seeing good shit form you so far, keep it up :flower:

thanks a lot for the constructiveness! :toocool:

I'll definitely take those advice into consideration. :beerchug:
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby FAME » Oct 12th, '09, 03:09

Really good! :y:
Misery Business is my favorite out of the bunch. Drugged is kind of hard to hear what your saying, most likely because of some mixing issue, since you said you weren't that great at it. Even though its short, its really great :worship:
Makes me want more!
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby gutawafang » Oct 12th, '09, 03:11

FAME wrote:Really good! :y:
Misery Business is my favorite out of the bunch. Drugged is kind of hard to hear what your saying, most likely because of some mixing issue, since you said you weren't that great at it. Even though its short, its really great :worship:
Makes me want more!

Thank you so much for checking it out FAME. ;)
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby FAME » Oct 12th, '09, 03:13

gutawafang wrote:
FAME wrote:Really good! :y:
Misery Business is my favorite out of the bunch. Drugged is kind of hard to hear what your saying, most likely because of some mixing issue, since you said you weren't that great at it. Even though its short, its really great :worship:
Makes me want more!

Thank you so much for checking it out FAME. ;)


Thanks for helping me actually be able to listen to it. :thumbsup2:
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby gutawafang » Oct 12th, '09, 03:14

Thanks for bumping FAME. :worship:
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby gutawafang » Oct 12th, '09, 04:36

Bump. :8)
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby enjinn » Oct 13th, '09, 23:15

man ill peep this soon as i get back home...which will be in a week or so...sorry i cant review right now...but ill most def get to it...holla!
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Re: 5x1 Minutes

Postby gutawafang » Oct 14th, '09, 01:32

classthe_king wrote:The beats are either way to loud or your rapping is way to soft. Couldn't understand anything you said on all the songs. The only song i could understand was despair. And on that song you really need to work on your delivery. You slur alot of your words together and you sound really bored while rapping. You need more energy.

Thanks for the honest feed homie. I promise I'll improve.
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