Big Ax-D - The Dream

[B.A.D.]

yo!! people
this is the first song I make in Australia!!!
Quality is not perfect, I need to re-make all my custom presets and shit for cool edit.
plus I had to do beat on FL Studio cuz I can't seem to find a decent download for REASON 4 (any help is appreciated), but I think for a first beat on FL is not that bad
but anyways, Ill try to refix my quality when I can so for now... enjoy!!

TITLE: The Dream
ARTIST: Big Ax-D
PRODUCED BY: Big Ax-D
LINK: http://www.zshare.net/audio/70520042fb55d0c7/

LYRICS:

(verse 1)
As long as Im alive I will find a way to live
As long as I am skilled I will try to feed my greed
As long as Im a monster on beats and writting skills
I will fill up the dream with out spills, live with thrills
livin outta mexico, in melbourne city here we go
take control of every moment, let it roll, so hear my song
hear my voice, its my choice to leave my ancient home
to find a new life, a new story, a new bomb
to explode, first song in australia, gettin loud
I miss my country, miss my friends, miss my house
but remember me as I am, cuz as a man I will change
nigga turn the page, feel the rage, be a legend
cuz as long Im a rapper or producer I'll compose
cuz music's what I choose, hope I'm close to makin shows
my new music just rose, cross the line, no flaws
no mistakes, live your live, be your boss!!

(hook)
Everyday is holiday, Living your life like everyday
Live the dream, look for no pay
live your life, you wont explain

Eveyday is holiday, every dream is on your way

(Verse 2)
Damn, I love this city, time to meet me some birds
time to set a public warning, show em mexican works
two thousand fucking ten, big ax-d make em love me more
Im the same as before, plus my karma owes me gore
Im so crazy but you know me, let me show you how Im storming
forming bonds with muthafukcaz who dont care where I am from
they say its an adventure, life is full of oportunities
I venture to the only place that place me on inmunity
against hate, from my past, agaist all the odds
I will keep on forward without looking at pause
Blitznext nigga, try to fuck with us now!!!
let us on the top, hand us three diferent crowns
pounds of wounds, but my sound's gettin me pounds
I mean dollars with my name on, storming diferent towns
my name is Big Ax-D so, you can't control your body
now everyone allow me, to tell you whos your daddy

(hook)
Everyday is holiday, Living your life like everyday
Live the dream, look for no pay
live your life, you wont explain

Eveyday is holiday, every dream is on your way

[Tranquil]

im downloading now

[Tranquil]

all i can say is.............dope

The beat is great, i like it, You sound really good on this track, you can tell you have an accent, but its kinda fading, like i can understand the words on this track alot clearer then you other ones. Overall this song is dope, to me, there is no complaints, apart from it being a bit short, one more verse would of been great. But overall i loved it

[Slim Zaddy]

i liked the beat bro ,,,,,it's,, sick, lyrics, were good , you flowed, good,,,,,, i enjoyed it ,, good track ,, 8.5/10 ,, keeep it up

[Le Tunisien]

im downloadin now

[GibbzyTrShady]

feeling this

Downloading''

[Emadyville]

Damn, beat was mad different but I really liked it. Your little intro kinda set the mood for that, flow was nice, delivery was good, was real on the second verse. The hook I really liked as well, what you did with the "Live the dream, look for no pay live your life, you wont explain" second time around was pretty cool. You spit fast as hell, a lot faster than I can so props. O, mixing seemed real good too from what I could tell

[Le Tunisien]

i was waiting for this
finally some new axD music

flow was on point ,i liked your delivery too,lyrics are right good song !i enjoyed it
but yeah you shouldv done a 3rd verse,

hit me up if u want good beats

[Xray]

That's one chill fucking track, the beat, the raps its all very chill. It went well together, the beat sounded basic/amateur as hell but you managed to make a good song from it. Good work man, but you gotta download vsts and drums if you want to make more professional beats cause the normal FL kits are bad quality unless you're a EQ king. Good track.

[randomghost]

nice start on fl studio...by da time u will get better at producing there......good 2 hear ya back.....love ur flow..nice lyrics....delivery is amazing....man da hook is awesome verse 2 is good...love this song bro

[Tash8]

great track dude.. i like the beat and i really like the lyrics.. hooko could be sang better but the idea was there.. keep it up, i'm def feeeling this, looks like you've settled pretty well man.

[B.A.D.]

@Emienmislegend - thanks man, glad you liked it, very appreciated

@PINK - thanks a lot girl, really glad you liked it too haha

@Slim Zaddy - thanks a lot man, good that you enjoyed it man

@gibbzy - great man haha, thanks for listening

@ Emadyville - word!!!hahah, thanks man, I didnt think the intro was going to work at first but i think it did well hahaha, thanks a lot man

@le tunisien - big props mayn, glad you liked it

@Xray - I owe this beat to you, thanks for all the help on fl studio hahaha, thanks for listenin, glad u enjoyed it

@random ghost - hell yeah man, we can work on some beats now hahahah! thanks a lot for the feed

@tash - thanks man, I think Im settled down good now, I appreciate that a lot man, gonna work on the hooks more, thanks a lot for the feed man

[Tornado]

For FL, you gotta edit the hell outta them stock sounds. It's easier finding drum packs and downloading vst's like crazy

The chorus reminds me of Dizzee Rascal's holiday. For your first beat on FL it's not bad but it felt empty, i could picture the stock sounds but your rapping made up for this. Your smooth delievery with a fast flow worked, pronoucaition is crystal clear and is a cool track to vibe to. I give it a 7/10 cous with a better beat, this could be a great track and since i'm assuming you're back, we should get to working on something

[jba1me]

if that was your 1st beat on fl and i was feeling the lyrics good job. gonna d/l this

[Nick. Y]

Agree with Xray - chill track.Nicely done