Tash & Zaddy & Redzek - MotherFuckers Stare

[Slim Zaddy]

Yeah ,, slim zadddy ,, redzek

http://www.zshare.net/audio/7082339037f5bff8/


[Chorus]

(Tash) X2

is this a dream,is she the queen
left in between,see what i mean?
u just dont care,i am aware
life is not fair......you motherfuckers stare?!!

[Verse 1]

(slim zaddy )

Now here is zaid ,here le , grap a chair and sit and see
when we spit , when we rap , it’s all about how we sang
If I Pull the trigger back, that bullet might ignite
if it does,,,,,,, then Good night, ya see ya on next life
but i only got a click, so common raise your dick
it doesn't sound nice, are u afraid of how small is it
Pull me back , where is that . I don’t know to this fag
Where is my track I want it back , ohh girl keep suck my dick
No , then go ahead,,, and tell me where this fag bitch
zaddy is like Russian roulette, you gamble with ya life bitch
no shits, no debt's, here is zaid , I’m ur fate
crime rate is raised , ohh guys it’s da new age ,
Now this verse so far has been written with one bullet
let's put 2 in and see what happens when i pull it
You want your life bitch then stopp acting as a snitch
Switch which it , hey bitch where is my cigarette


[Chorus]

(Tash) X2

is this a dream,is she the queen
left in between,see what i mean?
u just dont care,i am aware
life is not fair......you motherfuckers stare?!!


[Verse 2]

(Le Tunisien)

i kill the tracks every time i spoke
when my pen hits the pad its like a Crime i wrote
everytime i inhale the smoke up in ma lungz
fire starts spittin off the top of my tongue
i wanna bring hip hop back to the game
91 was the birth,Yeah remember that name
as a kid growin up,Cursed with the urban feel
i was blessed with this fukin mic of steel
spittin my deadly rhymes all the fukin time
imma start from the bottom,go for the rapid climb
hit the fucking top as my long loved dream
every lyric i spit is above the extreme
i am killin the beat on every damn note
Straight from my heart to the pen that i wrote
im not gonna stop,Yeah i need to succeed
i'll do it all day till cuz i Got to proceed


(Tash) X2

is this a dream,is she the queen
left in between,see what i mean?
u just dont care,i am aware
life is not fair......you motherfuckers stare?!!

[Verse 3]

(le tunisien)

my lifes is so dark,this fight is so hard
my light doesnt spark,its just right to argue
with myself i aint crazy,please help im faintin
in this quick sand,i just keep on failin
oh shit some-one please unlock this ceiling
pussy u'r insane when u know my cock is waitin
i feel like quittin,dont think im bullshittin
i be sittin while spittin,slittin while sittin

shit is so pissin!


(slim zaddy)

i dont fit in this life, but i just try to fit in
damn,my life sucks balls,and even sucks at suckin
i fail so hard,these obstacles...im stuck in !
i keep gettin haunted by these dreams everynight
my schemes are so tight,im fighting for my right
to speak,my right to cheat my soul with a beat
i am too hungry to eat..so i go peep and creep


(Tash) X2

is this a dream,is she the queen
left in between,see what i mean?
u just dont care,i am aware
life is not fair......you motherfuckers stare?!!




all feed will be returned

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

damn tash mixed this bitch very well... love how he hits the melody...(talkin about the hook)
zaddy---u lack pronouncation big time work on that...watch some american movies in english or somthing...your flow is umm....crowded...no hate but your delivery is funny also sounds very very VERY soft...almost gay really no hate...
tuna---u actually did better with pronouncation..flow was kool too....u can tell the experience between all three artists...haha
umm aite track..with better quality i defo re-listen more often but its not your fault so
hang in there!

[Le Tunisien]

damn tash mixed this bitch very well... love how he hits the melody...(talkin about the hook)
zaddy---u lack pronouncation big time work on that...watch some american movies in english or somthing...your flow is umm....crowded...no hate but your delivery is funny also sounds very very VERY soft...almost gay really no hate...
tuna---u actually did better with pronouncation..flow was kool too....u can tell the experience between all three artists...haha
umm aite track..with better quality i defo re-listen more often but its not your fault so
hang in there!

thx c riz, and yeah tash did a very good job,
tash did mix his hook,and its dope,the rest of mixing is by me
u know i just got the idea of how the hook should sound like and sent it to him and he did it PERFECTLY,
i love the hook

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

hooks sick except the last line is rushed.


zaddy, work you flow and goin along with the beat space your rhymes out and try keep the consistent on the beat.

redzek, you got the flow on control more, keep working at it.

[Slim Zaddy]

damn tash mixed this bitch very well... love how he hits the melody...(talkin about the hook)
zaddy---u lack pronouncation big time work on that...watch some american movies in english or somthing...your flow is umm....crowded...no hate but your delivery is funny also sounds very very VERY soft...almost gay really no hate...
tuna---u actually did better with pronouncation..flow was kool too....u can tell the experience between all three artists...haha
umm aite track..with better quality i defo re-listen more often but its not your fault so
hang in there!

hhahahahah , gay ,, aight lol,, next time ,, i will not make myself sounds soft, lol , thanks ,, for checking it out ,,

hooks sick except the last line is rushed.


zaddy, work you flow and goin along with the beat space your rhymes out and try keep the consistent on the beat.

redzek, you got the flow on control more, keep working at it.

thanks man ,, i will on next track

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Now here is zaid ,here le , grap a chair and sit and see
when we spit , when we rap , it’s all about how we sang
If I Pull the trigger back, that bullet might ignite
if it does,,,,,,, then Good night, ya see ya on next life
but i only got a click, so common raise your dick

Pull me back , where is that . I don’t know to this fag
Where is my track I want it back , ohh girl keep suck my dick
No , then go ahead,,, and tell me where this fag bitch
zaddy is like Russian roulette, you gamble with ya life bitch
no shits, no debt's, here is zaid , I’m ur fate

sorta comin in out of no were when it should be more structured. im giving you the advice and breakdown a rapper on heer (mc cubz) gave me.

if you structure your rhymes right ANY verse can flow to ANY beat.

i didnt choose to be me man thats just how it is
i wish i was somone else with more reason to live

^ very simple but thats how anyone starting out should rhyme this builds flow confidence and udnerstanding of how you are goin to a beat.

blew up to stardome my raps are hard done
fucking the whole game with my 6 inch harddon

then adding more rhymes into your bar should start of simple like that.

it has 3 syllables (blew up to) then a 2 syllable rhyme (stardome), then 3 syllables (my raps are) then a 2 syllable rhyme (hard done)

then on the second line it has 8 syllables (fuckin the whole game with my 6 inch) then a 2 syllable rhyme (hardon)

and each line has 10 syllables in tottal making them fit nicely to hit the 4 snares (on your average tempo) on beat.

basically i got told this and my head went "what the fuck i got to cont all my words" but it becomes really naturual after a while and you wont even notice you are getting your syllables perfect each time.

this is by know means what everyone should do, i dont do this constant but its the basic skeleton for you to then expand on.

once you got that locked and syllables are getting perfect and you got your rhymes hittin in the same places is when creativly as an artist you can start attempting to really play about and have people thinking "wait..how the fuck did he get that in there, how did he flow that wow!" and obv. thats what we all want right ?


oh yeh, im not doin this to preach or say im better i know what im doing,i dont, but the way you flowed reminded me of problems i had when i first started and this helped me alot.

[Slim Zaddy]

Now here is zaid ,here le , grap a chair and sit and see
when we spit , when we rap , it’s all about how we sang
If I Pull the trigger back, that bullet might ignite
if it does,,,,,,, then Good night, ya see ya on next life
but i only got a click, so common raise your dick

Pull me back , where is that . I don’t know to this fag
Where is my track I want it back , ohh girl keep suck my dick
No , then go ahead,,, and tell me where this fag bitch
zaddy is like Russian roulette, you gamble with ya life bitch
no shits, no debt's, here is zaid , I’m ur fate

sorta comin in out of no were when it should be more structured. im giving you the advice and breakdown a rapper on heer (mc cubz) gave me.

if you structure your rhymes right ANY verse can flow to ANY beat.

i didnt choose to be me man thats just how it is
i wish i was somone else with more reason to live

^ very simple but thats how anyone starting out should rhyme this builds flow confidence and udnerstanding of how you are goin to a beat.

blew up to stardome my raps are hard done
fucking the whole game with my 6 inch harddon

then adding more rhymes into your bar should start of simple like that.

it has 3 syllables (blew up to) then a 2 syllable rhyme (stardome), then 3 syllables (my raps are) then a 2 syllable rhyme (hard done)

then on the second line it has 8 syllables (fuckin the whole game with my 6 inch) then a 2 syllable rhyme (hardon)

and each line has 10 syllables in tottal making them fit nicely to hit the 4 snares (on your average tempo) on beat.

basically i got told this and my head went "what the fuck i got to cont all my words" but it becomes really naturual after a while and you wont even notice you are getting your syllables perfect each time.

this is by know means what everyone should do, i dont do this constant but its the basic skeleton for you to then expand on.

once you got that locked and syllables are getting perfect and you got your rhymes hittin in the same places is when creativly as an artist you can start attempting to really play about and have people thinking "wait..how the fuck did he get that in there, how did he flow that wow!" and obv. thats what we all want right ?


oh yeh, im not doin this to preach or say im better i know what im doing,i dont, but the way you flowed reminded me of problems i had when i first started and this helped me alot.

thanks alot man ,, it's helps alot bro ,, i will try to do what u have told me , and put em on the next song,, ,, i think yeah ,, i had a problem ,, with the syllable ,,, so yeah ,, nice point,, an thanks alot for the long,, feed man ,, mcuh appreciated,, i will start working on it,, from now ,, and yeah ,, you're way much better than me,, .....

[Tash8]

thanks for the feed guys, big improvement guys than the last one.

[gutawafang]

Tash, I fucking LOVE your hook man. It's perfect and it suits the beat. I mean, the beat is awesome in the first place man. The whole song is fire, totally guys. I love tunisien's parts the most. It's kinda inspiring to me.

Zaddy, your echoing does not synchronize to the beat hence it breaks the flow. I think it should flow if you dont have the echoes. But your accent is kinda not suitable for this collab man. No offense. I still like the lyrics you wrote though. Pretty solid.

Overall, fucking great. Improve the quality. HAHA.

[Le Tunisien]

Tash, I fucking LOVE your hook man. It's perfect and it suits the beat. I mean, the beat is awesome in the first place man. The whole song is fire, totally guys. I love tunisien's parts the most. It's kinda inspiring to me.

Zaddy, your echoing does not synchronize to the beat hence it breaks the flow. I think it should flow if you dont have the echoes. But your accent is kinda not suitable for this collab man. No offense. I still like the lyrics you wrote though. Pretty solid.

Overall, fucking great. Improve the quality. HAHA.

haha nice,yeah man, tash rocks the hooks =p hehe
and glad u liked my verses, really! much appreciated man !

[B.A.D.]

wow, this is some good raw shit

takes me back all the way to 2005 when the real raw hip hop was on tr hahaha

greatness, and this beautifull beacuse I can actually feel the passion
although, zaddy, I suggest changing your rap name lol hhaha

I love the fact that the verses are unmixed on this one and only the hook does
see that brings the ghetto sound to this and with a good gook, turns out great

Tash did an excelent job on the hook, only the last line i didn-t liked it, maybe a bit rushed

zaddy & redzeck went for it, but you gotta work on that flow, try to catch the beat, dont make the beat, let the beat make you (not production wise lol, but methaphorical)

keep on the good practice

and about the quality... keep it raw, until you think it is necessary to upgrade it

[Le Tunisien]

wow, this is some good raw shit

takes me back all the way to 2005 when the real raw hip hop was on tr hahaha

greatness, and this beautifull beacuse I can actually feel the passion
although, zaddy, I suggest changing your rap name lol hhaha

I love the fact that the verses are unmixed on this one and only the hook does
see that brings the ghetto sound to this and with a good gook, turns out great

Tash did an excelent job on the hook, only the last line i didn-t liked it, maybe a bit rushed

zaddy & redzeck went for it, but you gotta work on that flow, try to catch the beat, dont make the beat, let the beat make you (not production wise lol, but methaphorical)

keep on the good practice

and about the quality... keep it raw, until you think it is necessary to upgrade it

the hook was dope ye,and about the last line you didnt like when he says " you motherfuckers stare!"
i thought it would bring some agressivity to the hook, hmm k

and thx for feedback really appreciated,and i see what u mean by "let the beat make u" ok thx =P ill work on ur advice homie,thx for checking again ! =)

[Le Tunisien]

Tuni, you were probably the better one of this track Zaddy, you got a dope verse but it's hard to hear you at times, well for me at least. Tash, the hook is perfect.

thanks alot menzo

[Slim Zaddy]

aight ...thanks everybody ,, ,,, next track ,, will be different for me ,, i will make ya change da way u think bout me ,, ,, thanks for checkin it out

[Emadyville]

zaddy I liked your lyrics, more so your first verse then your second but it's just hard to understand sometimes with pronunciation, just keep workin on it. Another thing would be the flow and delivery, christ said you sounded "soft" and I understand what he means, u kinda did, no hate or anything it just brings down the delivery some. keep workin

tuni your verses were alright, the quality of your mic or whatever showed but like big ax-d said it kinda made this more raw, and cut from the hook which made it pretty cool. your voice was very scratchy/robotic sounding, not sure if that was all quality or how u actually sounded, but that was kinda weird. Your flow was pretty good, not great but not terrible, you paused well at some places, at least showed u have an understanding of what u should be doing over a beat. keep workin

tash excellent job mixing this. hooks nice, except like people said the last line being slightly rushed, but overall great work homie