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Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

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Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

Postby Xray » Jan 19th, '10, 07:39

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December with no Christmas, live life as lynches
I'm sicker with a vengeance, my gift packs a sentence
Lyrical side, my pride means to death wish
Diggin up a Nile, I smile "you need to rest this"
Syllables slide, when you ride, you slid this
Flows so smooth, that drive you, conditions
Nuts, its crazy, its no one can save me
so you rush to save friend, and end up on sale b
In a burger shop, on a real minced roll
in another mans stomach and only your spouse know
that you're missin, soon to join a sibling in mission
she calls up and listens, scared to death and visions
descriptions of killings of her loving and her husband
soon to realize, she's next and she's bugging
So she calls the police, her niece, she's scared, she needs
and I'm sittin on the roof top at the scene looking stream like

Chorus
No one can see me, no one can be me
Lust unleashed the desire to be free
Kill to cease and cease to kill
He's sick and he's tired, the perfect season to flee
Two minded, he's blinded, he's lushed and unleashed
two thoughts at a time, all he speaks is decease
Kill to cease and cease to kill
Who does really want? he's comin for you


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I don't know whether to finish this song or not, so need your help. And if I do finish it, then I might put it on my tape if it turns out good. Feed is appreciated.
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Re: Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jan 19th, '10, 07:43

flow is awesome damn dude this shit is dope as hell
the beat, the chorus, its all there please finish it
this is ipod material for me :smoking:
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Postby B.A.D. » Jan 19th, '10, 09:28

ok... when you get on msn holla at me and you gonna tell me step by step how the fuck you mixed this..

this Is the quality Im looking for nikka :wave:

the song is.....

a- fucking- mazing!!... nice story-like parts too.... the flow is great.. diggin the style on this
I think you should finish it

the beat is a great choice for this too

on the hook... I like the parts on the background when you sing along or whatever it is called..
I like it

all hot... so... finish it bra
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 19th, '10, 10:21

you know your flows dope you know you upped your lyrics so i wont repeat.


always find it hard to feed your stuff coz i just anjoy listening to ya so thats sorta what it is for me, but your voice is seeming even stronger than before and you got distinction in your words, good verse and hook man :y:
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Re: Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 19th, '10, 10:49

well ya tracks are all dope bro , so no point of feeding ya ,, but here i did'nt like the hook ,, it can be better ,,, but ya verse is sick and teh mixing and producin part aside with da quality are all dope ,, liked ya flow and delivery through out the track ,, dope shit man ,,,,,, keep em comming ,, :y:
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Re: Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 19th, '10, 11:05

yea i peeped, this shit , said it back then...sayin it now big brotha
FINISH THIS BITCH

you did the mixing realllly well, the flow and lyrics are top notch homie..sick shit

question tho: that "kill to cease and cease to kill " line
sounds like "Killin season" and "seasin to kill"...is that on purpose?,lol
but yea homie, i think once finished this shit IS DA BOMB,lol
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

Postby i4ill » Jan 19th, '10, 11:52

a perfect 10 for this...I couldn't honestly find one flaw about this. Flow was solid and delivery was amazing, but what really shines in your style is your sick lyricism...your multies and inners are ridiculous, sraight sickness...
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Re: Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

Postby RAB » Jan 19th, '10, 13:23

This track was dope without doubt. I usually like to give some constructive criticism, but the song was, pretty much, on-point in every facet. Keep doing your thing, broaden your lyrical boundaries, and shit, the production was wicked. Great stuff.
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Re: Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

Postby Beckford » Jan 19th, '10, 13:25

Didn't really like the lyrics. But it sounded alright.
sometimes in life things don't work out, but that doesn't mean the ending has to be negative
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jan 19th, '10, 13:51

i agree quality was good here..your flow was dope
but you can do way better
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Re: Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

Postby _Ironic_ » Jan 19th, '10, 17:22

beat in: very epic sounding


im feelin the delivery...HOWEVER. I'm not feelin the fact I can hear you take breathes when you change bars..not cool..work on that.

flow is kinda shaky at first...i dunno not really feelin it too much.

hook is NICE. catchy and hard hitting, i fucks with it.

just work on your breathing..maybe punch-in a couple times (unless you think you're too cool for that). but either way its a pretty good track..pretty short though. :y:

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Re: Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 19th, '10, 17:38

dope track no need to tell you the flow and delivery were good,so yeah fuck yes finish this track ;)
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Postby Most-Hated » Jan 20th, '10, 05:15

Very Very well mixed which is why most people consider you the best artist here

Best? can be debated
Smartest? I would say yes...

Because anyone who is just an average listener to you immeditaly hears that perfect clarity and incredible mixing...

It makes you want to freaking cream your pants.. Or atleast me...

I think this was an average song coming from you... But as always you make it awesome with incredible mixing...

Great job
she takes me on a journey, to a place called hell,
she showed where she stays, she show me where she dwells,
theres an errie saddness, commin from the room,
its as if its a funeral, but were all doomed,
death all around, but i feel more comfort,
blood rained skies, you could say im covered,
the feelin from her, is like no other
dont wanna say it, but the demon i love her
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Re: Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

Postby Xray » Jan 20th, '10, 08:17

Wow thanks for the feedback guys, really appreciate it lol. Didn't think it would be looked at like that from the majority lol, but that's great. And Ax I'll tell you what I did, on msn 2morrow. :y:

Thanks again for the feed. :worship:
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Re: Sajjad - Lust Unleashed

Postby Tornado » Jan 23rd, '10, 17:01

Fuck You For Using This Beat..

but damm shit's dope, especially with the quality this time around. I only heard one slur when you said "spouse" but yeh. Lyrics sounded abit random though, maybe have a concept/story for this beat but dope short shit
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