SUBURBAN HERO PREVIEW - LYRICIST ON THE RADIO

[_Ironic_]

this is just a taste of what's to come on the album...
im really happy with the way this track turned out.

I hope ya'll feel the same. this took over 10 hours to record/mix.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/7150205549eaf918/

[Xray]

God damn, that's what I'm talking about homie. Now THAT'S the type of shit I wanna hear from you, fucking dope song man. Catchy fucking hook, shit got me mad hyped, damn. This track is straight motherfucking fire, real talk. The energy from this song is amazing, its like I just drank a bottle of energy, hype as fuck. Could give a damn about looking for a flaw, cause this shit was straight motherfucking raw for real. DROP MORE SONGS LIKE THIS.

[Spyder]

LOVE this shit man, i wasnt gonna peep it actually until i saw that Xray was pumped with it so i figured it must be good

Flow as great, mixing was superb and i love the beat

i myself wasnt feeling the hook but whatever

song was fuckin dont on the real

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

beat is some hyphy shit...but to be honest i still prefer your south shit
i dont have anything against south like these other cats...cuz i think your cocky/swag voice is priceless...but for what u did it was nice...actually the screaming was a bit out of place for me..
flow was sick again....quality was flawless...
oh there you go...towards the end you shine again
but as i said for what it is its very well done..as sajjad said hook is catchy and does the job
not my fav but but i see variety in your tape so i def cant wait

[Brownwall]

I havn't been here long, but that's the best track I've heard on this forum so far. Real dope, you went in hard.

[Tash8]

the kick is causing my sub to shake wayy to much...i'm listening

i ain't feelin the hook. i like ur flow, hate the beat..u need to work pronunciation but besidese that you got everything needed to be a good rapper, good job man.

[classthe_king]

This is the kind of shit i love to see from you

[Strictt Ame]

Solid drop..like the message behind the hook..radio is gettin rediculous..quality is on point, vocals maybe a tad high but who cares..good work with the de-esser..props

keep it up

[B.A.D.]

damn, fix the quaity on that man, the track needs an urgent mastering

the flow is real nice, the lyrics... well - top notch man
I dont like the type of this track tho, not feeling the beat at all, its completely not my style
the hook is strange hahahah, at first I hated it, by the fourth time I started to develop a lot for it
whos on verse 3? or is it you with diferent voices... sounds hmmm.... diferent

overal, the lyrics are the most impressive Ive heard from you, the track itself was great too, although is not my style of rap, its a catchy track

good luck mayne

take a listen if you can to:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=77238

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

liked the track alot man,i liked the hook i enjoyed the concept, i know this is a lyrical track but feel you lost content a little that is my only negative, infact when you sayed something like "lets turn gangsta" and spoke a little on the gangster type i actually enjoyed the flow more, you killed the beat and i liked the beat.

real hype song, if this is what ya tapes goin to be up to in standard, im looking forward man

[_Ironic_]

wow guys! thanks for the hella feed.

@bar - I said "should I get gangster?" to make ya laugh..and also in the context of radio play by being gangsta. naw mean?

@ax - all 3 verses were me man, the third verse was different sounding because it was recorded on a different day, PLUS I wanted the third verse to have a couple different styles.

@Tash - I need to work on pronunciation? hmmmm. I'll try and curb my ebonics for you bro, :P

@Xray - by far the best feedback I've ever gotten from you..appreciate the love homey, look out for the album if you're feelin that.

THANKS AGAIN EVERYONE FOR THE COMMENTS!! Keep 'em coming.

[Tash8]

@Tash - I need to work on pronunciation? hmmmm. I'll try and curb my ebonics for you bro, :P

[Robbie G]

Dope track, I think the chorus is my favorite part.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8fwBlmxj8go

[_Ironic_]

thanks for the feed bud

[_Ironic_]

good looks...thanks! keep it commin!