Only One Thing - Tash8

[Tash8]

Listen:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/7610429920894a1c/
http://usershare.net/4347182axicz

See I'm reachin for the stars set my feet up for the fall
get to leapin into mars and feel the feelings of afar
I got the wheels, I got the car, I got the weed and all ya'll
will never see me slip n fall cause gravity's reversed for me
--I'm birthed to be the first mc with such diversity
rappin with an urgency and certainly he won't let up
if he does he's coming with the W like two vendettas
just like that yup I'm back been impatient waiting infact
fuck a car--I'll use this flow to race you on a track
better yet, I'll flip a bitch and just erase you off this track
The reason that I rap, I say with such great certainty
so I vent out verbally thoughts that keep on irkin me
workin me, quit your chirpin, shittin 'n' running your mouth
you might run a marathon with the crap that your spewing out

[chorus]
Only one thing, better than the cream
Music, and the things that it brings
I'm a sing it like this oh oh oh
Live it up like this oh oh oh

I'm always down for fun and games but my music comes first
haters stand in line first come is first served
devious assault with words, noun, adjectives and verbs
predicates with proper etiquette, the baddest of the jerks
i get a rnb singer you would think I'm washed up
so i dry myself down sing it for you damn fucks
it's kinda scary ain't it when you think statistically
I'm ten songs in and only now just got my versatility
and it just occurred to me unless of an emergency
I'm destined to contest the best the legends' and their legacy
extravagantly adamantly battlin' em all
standing swiftly so I'm ready set to damaging em all
--I blow the radiation's gonna be enormous shit
I place c-4 in my mouth i spray out some explosive spit
set up a perimeter don't you dare get close to it

[chorus]

you'll never see me wear a hat, never see me wearing chain
but you'll find me in the crowd with my city playing there
I know it's silly like I care, it's kinda chilly in the air
I guess the wind is coming--
good, don't you love when life's a breeze? ha funny
Some day one day, when I'm where it is I want
I'll leave you fuckas dumbfaced suckas looking punk'd
some place one day when we're all dead and gone
it'll be the music and the songs that will keep us living on

[chorus]

I don't really care, what it is you think
leave me alone, and let me do my thing
I don't really think, ya'll would even care
I'ma do my own thing and you know I'm here to stay


all feed is appreciated, thx

[Emadyville]

This is definitely your best song, hands down.

Hook is amazing, simple but powerful, love the melody too. The flow is pretty flawless, and everything you say is real clear, mixings dope. Rhymes are sick, sound great with the flow, content is strong, and like always your delivery is great.

Message in the third verse, to fit the concept of the song by your hook, was well fuckin done. You def pulled off the "i'm a do this and fuck you if you don't like it" and followed it with the "when im gone my music will still be here", was a dope combo for that verse.

I really liked the ending too.

Straight to my ipod, keep it up homie

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

really good track... catchy...crazy flow in the verses... tho 2nd verse was choppy to me...
rhyme sheme is awesome..nice track...

[Arabian Shady]

I digg the chorus man, well done, it doesnt sound like you tried to force a chorus, it seems like it came naturally
Flow is nice, something peeps can definately rap along to if they wanted.
Nuthin wrong whatsoever, wiked track B
Thnx for the heads up!
Peace!

[Banks]

I liked the track, good flow, voice is very good too, the beat is dope.
You just need a better quality of recording.

[classthe_king]

Amazing track The hook is good and you're actual rapping has never been better. Lyrics are great too.

[Spyder]

was was ehh for me, the lyrics of the hook i wasnt feelin but the sing song vibe made it ight

good flow and delivery on this one, kinda mellow which i was feelin

lyrics are pretty good

id give this 8/10

[Tash8]

thanks a lot for the feed guys!

[MC Anonymous]

Um....

First off, the chorus to me was bad, I didn't enjoy the singing at all, and it was boring to me

I listened to this track two times thoroughly, and I noticed that you sacrifice grammar for flow when you say you use ''etiquette''. Now that can be comedic irony if you were going for that route, but I think it's safe to assume you didn't. So, as I listened, the mistakes kept bothering me, so much in fact that I had to read the lyrics with it to make sure that I was hearing correctly what I thought I was hearing. This should not be allowed, even though it IS rap music and a lot of the people who make rap music are illiterate, but you're not in that majority. You shouldn't sacrifice grammar for flow, although I get you did it for syllable structure, but you could have used different words to substitute the syllable count instead of doing what you did.

The flow was good, although, some parts were weird to me seeing how you didn't end some of the lines with rhymes, and when you did that the next line didn't have an internal rhyme to keep my ear up with the flow you were doing. I'd fix that up a little bit, try adding more internals when you suddenly switch the flow and it'll transition a lot more smoothly.

Delivery was clear and cohesive. Emotionally; not so much. You sounded bored.

Production wise, this has always been your vocal point, so I don't need to tell you it's good.

6/10 for me, keep at it bro, and work on those things I mentioned.

[Tash8]

I listened to this track two times thoroughly, and I noticed that you sacrifice grammar for flow when you say you use ''etiquette''. Now that can be comedic irony if you were going for that route, but I think it's safe to assume you didn't. So, as I listened, the mistakes kept bothering me, so much in fact that I had to read the lyrics with it to make sure that I was hearing correctly what I thought I was hearing. This should not be allowed, even though it IS rap music and a lot of the people who make rap music are illiterate, but you're not in that majority. You shouldn't sacrifice grammar for flow, although I get you did it for syllable structure, but you could have used different words to substitute the syllable count instead of doing what you did.

love the honesty, but seriously what the fuck are you talking about? show me proof where what I said doesn't make sense. Etiquette fits perfectly flow-wise and grammar wise...
that line:
devious assault with words, noun, adjectives and verbs
predicates with proper etiquette, the baddest of the jerks

what doesn't make sense to you in this? I thought this was pretty obvious. I can attack you with words (hence: nouns, adjectives, verbs, and predicates) and I do it with proper etiquette (what society considers ethically ok); which is why i'm the baddest of the jerks...

edit: and where didn't I end with rhymes dude?

[Emadyville]

^^ I was wondering the same thing, especially since I thought you pronounced everything really well, that words weren't cut off and the accent that sometimes affects this didn't, so I'm curious as well

[MC Anonymous]

I answered him on MSN.

[Tash8]

yeah he did

[Le Tunisien]

the flow was nice...i really liked ur lyrics on this track..the hook was
one thing i didnt like is how the verses end

good track

[Tash8]

the hook was

you lose your train of thought?