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Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

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Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 26th, '10, 02:57

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Wasn't originally planning on letting Anon hop on this but he heard it & wanted to hop on so....
here's the 1st Rhyma Lions installment



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[PK]


she appeared in the smoke with a piece of my heart
she likes to lay in the sun. I like to sleep in the dark
she's my sexy little freak that wanna bite & scratch
I'm her maniac who likes to hit the pipe & laugh
we dont see each other much so we feel mad stressed
but at night i always dream about her in this black dress
I walk on over to her said: baby this is it
your everything I ever wanted aint no other girl like this
I want this shit forever girl im starring in your eyes
they shine like the shooting stars flying threw the skies
I never knew what love was I always thought it was some dumb stuff
but your lovings like a drug leaving me fucked up
& now i need a fix I really hope I see you soon
we can lay inside my room & look outside to the moon
we can stare up at the stars while we blow a smoke cloud
whatever you wanna do im wit it girl you know im down



[MC Anonymous]

Ever since I first saw you, I was lost in a vision
like a moth to the fission of a nuclear division
Cause your shine, In my mind, was something I was missing
In my heart, listen, my lust is only my decision
Trust in him, he will show what he has, how he wants you
If he really needs to, He will find you and pounce too
It’s a different type of obstacle that he is bound to
Sweet dreams, memories, murder and hounds, dude
These things enter me burnin’ like runnin’ pounds off
If I have to tell you I’m yearning then shit will sound off
Every dream I have is me raping you with your top off
When I really tried I was scraping you, then I got soft
This is different, In my mind I thought it’s OK
when in that position, I listened when you said no way
Then you ran away, and I never saw you again
Only time I ever see you is imagery from my pen
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby Tash8 » May 26th, '10, 04:17

you both killed this track...tr is really stepping up with the level of talent.
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 26th, '10, 04:19

Thanks for checking it out Tash :worship:
your the man :y: :smoking:
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby gutawafang » May 26th, '10, 04:20

You know what i think man.

I give it full marks. :flower:
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby wrestler1256 » May 26th, '10, 05:07

Sounded great :y:
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby MC Anonymous » May 26th, '10, 11:53

:worship: :worship: ty
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 27th, '10, 03:52

Thanks for giving a listen homies :flower:
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » May 27th, '10, 14:23

@ PK...your overlays were fucked up... :sweating: work on that
and have to disagree its not really steppin up just kept at a good level....not sayin you did bad..everything was on point...but yeah...hook is legendary..i actually think i have this beat too...or heard it somewhere before....

@Anon....delivery killed it homie...great job....flow was allright...a lil too fast for my liking...you could vibe with the sadness a lil more..like make it slower or some..but thats just me..
mixing was kool... :y:
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 27th, '10, 23:07

I hear you on my overlays Chris
I did my shit up in a hurry & I think I mastered one of my adlibs wrong
plus my mixing on here wasn't too shabby so....... :unsure:
keep an ear open though ;)
no more stuff is getting rushed
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby Mr. Chambers » May 28th, '10, 07:35

pretty solid on both sides....gotta say anon pretty much made this track as far as technique...but PK's lyrics were more heartfelt......
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 28th, '10, 20:52

Thanks for checking it out Tom :flower:
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby classthe_king » May 29th, '10, 17:35

Both of you did really good in different ways. Great song.
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 30th, '10, 01:56

Thank you all....very much
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby dR3 » May 30th, '10, 04:07

That was fucking nuts. I love it.

Great job you two!
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Re: Rhyma Lions - Dreamz (Two Sides Of A Love Story)

Postby Slim Zaddy » May 30th, '10, 12:39

that was sick homie , ya 1st verse,, were tight ,,, MC you have improved a lot bro ,,, really gd job ,, i liked ya verse,,,
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