The beat is cool as fuck, really funky, if you produced that your production is really coming along
Concept aint my thing but you have a good atmosphere on the track
The hook is a great idea haha, i liked that
In terms of pronunciation i could understand most of it fine, but there were a couple times where you went with a fast flow that a few words got lost in translation
Speaking of the flow i think it's great throughout the track. I liked how you switched it up in the second verse to keep it interesting
The lyrics aint complex but there's still some good punches in here which makes up for it and suits the idea more
So yeah overall, i can see improvement in many aspects from previous stuff, this song sounds much more sharpened, like you took time on it to perfect the flow and, again, if you made the beat, it's a huge improvement, i liked the little touches like the intensifying drumbeat which appears at times and the drops you had. Nice track
