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Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby B.A.D. » Jul 4th, '10, 23:58

hey what up
I need some feed people, I'm tryna work on pronunciation and that stuff, so if you could feed me on all that, u know, words slurrings, flow, lyrics etc...
I appreciate all the feed good or bad. :y:

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I'm not posting the lyrics for the reason that I want to know if everything is understandable smoothly, ya know?, so let me know what up :y:
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby BILI » Jul 5th, '10, 00:00

You alive? :o

Will download now,send my lyrics via pm tho ;)
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 5th, '10, 00:05

cover turned out good man!
flow is smooth man...slips couple times..actually everytime the beat fades out after 4-8bars
u know what i mean...
and mixing is clean..but could be more fancy..its really basic..especially after I Like That you could put some echo and shit...you know..but from the basics (overlays,quality) everything is okay
pronouncation was good overall...i understood it :y:
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby BILI » Jul 5th, '10, 00:35

I like it man.Flow was nice and as Chris said when beat fades it does kinda fucks up.I loved mixing :worship: ,I love all your mixing,lol.Hook was kinda simple but it worked for me.And verse were dope 2,some crazy lines :y:
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jul 5th, '10, 02:34

beat is fucking piff!

ok the flow was overall decent....it was a lil stretched at times....and other times it was rushed....i think its cuz your used to laying down a faster paced flow....
delivery was ok..nothing spectacular.....
the lyrics were cool...once again nothing jaw dropping but they did their job.
i really didn't have much of a problem with your pronunciation....there were a couple times i went "what?"...but then after listening could pick up what they ment...

overall not a bad song....i liked it...had a real summery/chill on the front porch and listen to it feel.
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby gutawafang » Jul 5th, '10, 03:12

Blahahahahahaha at the beat. It sounds very Thailand. LOL.

The lyrics fit the beat damn well. Somehow your voice here lacks the energy I expected. The words are clear I think. Chorus is so weak due to lack of energy. :y:

But overall, it's pretty good man. I look forward to gangsta shit like Mercyless ft. Sajjad. :worship:
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby Kez » Jul 5th, '10, 04:47

The beat is cool as fuck, really funky, if you produced that your production is really coming along
Concept aint my thing but you have a good atmosphere on the track
The hook is a great idea haha, i liked that
In terms of pronunciation i could understand most of it fine, but there were a couple times where you went with a fast flow that a few words got lost in translation
Speaking of the flow i think it's great throughout the track. I liked how you switched it up in the second verse to keep it interesting
The lyrics aint complex but there's still some good punches in here which makes up for it and suits the idea more

So yeah overall, i can see improvement in many aspects from previous stuff, this song sounds much more sharpened, like you took time on it to perfect the flow and, again, if you made the beat, it's a huge improvement, i liked the little touches like the intensifying drumbeat which appears at times and the drops you had. Nice track :y:
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby B.A.D. » Jul 5th, '10, 08:43

thanks, I'll work on everything being said

I find my problem with the flow to being always too much, so I'm gonna try to do more slow paced flows next time.

thanks for all the feed, I appreciate that

if anyone wants rtf, drop a link :y:

gutawafang wrote: I look forward to gangsta shit like Mercyless ft. Sajjad.


we got a lil somen' planned for ya'll, dont worry bout that. :y:
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby gutawafang » Jul 5th, '10, 08:44

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gutawafang wrote: I look forward to gangsta shit like Mercyless ft. Sajjad.


we got a lil somen' planned for ya'll, dont worry bout that. :y:


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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby FAME » Jul 5th, '10, 09:03

this is going to be very disjointed because I'm half asleep but here I go

lyrics are understandable, very good mixing here and flow is on point.
The beat is amazing in my ear, i like the background noise that sounds like some xylophone or something
did I miss the hook, oh nevermind it just didn't have one, i like that because you kept going on and on and damn had some great punches through the whole song. Very enjoyable to listen to nice job. :y:
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby B.A.D. » Jul 6th, '10, 00:04

thank you, I did had a KIND OF hook lol, but its not meant to be outstanding

thanks for the comment :y:
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby ChronicJon » Jul 6th, '10, 00:49

I like the beat it´s extremely funky. You´re production here is really dope. You´re voice defintely fits the beat. Though, your pronounciation isn´t really that of an average english-speaker (I can tell you´re not American or English) it´s understandable. Unlike others I enjoyed the hook a lot.

I liked it man it was realy dope :y:
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby B.A.D. » Jul 6th, '10, 05:40

thank you mate. I'm mexican, so thats why the pronunciation is like that.

thanks a lot for feeding and checking, I apreciate that.

the beat is not mine :( .... I can do better :shifty:
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby Xray » Jul 6th, '10, 05:52

Dope track. Really liked the beat, and the flow was dope throughout. Hook was perfect for this kind of song, and so were the verses. Delivery was really good, only thing I could say is keep working on pronunciation you're getting better at it. Keep it up. Dope track. :worship:
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Re: [new] Big Ax-D - I Like That

Postby B.A.D. » Jul 7th, '10, 03:08

thanx playa :8) :y: :worship:
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