Sentus- This Means War

[Mr. Chambers]

I heard the John and Kate line. I'm not sure by who possibly eminem. And that snickers line, I've heard plenty of times. Like I said, not accusing you of biting, but they are really played, and that's the box you gonna put yourself in with making pradominately "bragging" punchline filled tracks. I'm not trying to start shit but I also ain't gonna lie to you. This isn't a serious problem for you, but most of the time your dope punches are dope. But there are times where you just say some overplayed shit. But it's cool, your technique is improving and that Indian line was funny.

[mdemaz]

I wasn't dissing the Indian line just so you know Class..
It had high WTF factor is all...

Just wanted to clear that up.

[Tornado]

Alright little verse, mixing seemed to miss some high end which woulda helped it stand out again. Lyrics were cool, except for the indian line, i din't get it but overall, nice little track

[classthe_king]

Thanks for the feed. They're called filler bars though, not every line is going to be a killer punchline, most of the punches in this probably went over peoples heads anyway. And you're high if you think I bit Eminem lmao, I haven't listened to him in forever.

[Mr. Chambers]

^I never accused you of biting. I'm saying If Your going to be an artist focussed on Punchlines you need to make sure your bringing something fresh. Def not "filler" bars. Learn to link the set up bar and the actual punchline/pun.

[classthe_king]

Haha I gotchu, thanks for the feed. I'm not going to be focused on punchlines my whole career...just right now. The song I sent you isn't a punchline song

[Mahmoud48]

Very meaningful song I can tell there is such passion in ur voice that it blends with the beat the flow was riding the beat so smoothly and the punchlines seemed so natural good job on this track I would love to hear more from u in the future

[classthe_king]

Thanks man

[classthe_king]

Bumppp

[Solace]

Overall I really liked this. This beat destroys the old one that you had on before, just saying. The punchlines were pretty good, even though you know these aren't my style of tracks. I didn't mind your delivery, forced or not, it sounds alright.

[B.A.D.]

That was cool, I like your previous ones better, this one just doesnt sound good. punches are good, and like everyone says, the indian babies stands out.

just the flow, delivery, mixing don't just do the job.

I'm interested to see you on a full complete and concept track. that would be nice

[BILI]

I like it man,the verse is fucking dope,its just your flow that you need to improve,but I love your voice

[classthe_king]

Thanks guys

[Vettori]

pretty good verse. I remember hearing it a few times now,,, as chambers said a few lines have been Played out before..but that's most likely not by fault...just avoid the obvious as much as possible..
If your aiming for punchlines. "which you said this was one of those songs where you didnt use as many", Your gonna run into lines that have been said.. so im never one to really harp on it...but others won't be so kind.

Fillers are good, when your Only on the beggining stages of the song...Always edit after and make sure you analyze every lyric.
Your voice is good, but you need more mic time. (experience)

Not to sound offensive but atm, i much more enjoy reading your material, then hearing it...But your heading in the right direction

Drop a full song, and really take your time on it.. and ill be glad to Check it out.

[classthe_king]

Thanks for the feed man