Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

[WesTMusiK]

First off the beat is hot, I like the melody, the only thing its that is missing composition man, its too plain, seems like nothing goes on except the piano and when it does its not noticeable. You need to get more stuff going and blend it in a perfect way to not make it sound overcrowded, like for instance, the hook could use some trumpets that go along with explicit's hook, specially to compliement his terrible singing (no offense). and maybe some high full strings for the outro u know?.. make love to the beat haha.

Explicit - your rhyme scheme and the way you flowed your verse was unique and demonstrated an elevation and improvement you should be proud off. Really the only thing you need to do is perfect your mixing and have consistency, if you keep on practicing you will be able to do amazing things. now that you can nail the mutlis and create an original flow it only a matter of time before you step a level enough to be considered "one of the dopest" you know? lmao.... (and change your rap name)

WesT - very different of what I've heard from you before. There's just 2 things I didn't like, 1- your voice, its not very ear-friendly, and kinda lacks emotion. 2 - your style, I dont think I am the only one thinking this but that is 100% Eminem man, and these days you are going to get a lot of shit for that. Now on the good note, your breath control and syllabic writing is top notch, you now perfectly the amount of words you can rhyme without fucking up the structure, plus you display great technique in rapping. You need to expand the vocab a bit, for this type of songs you need to show as much complexity as possible, beacuse thats one of the distinguishable aspects of Horror-core tracks.

excelent performance.

Now THIS is feedback, damn! Thanks alot, homie! Only thing I don't fully see is the 100% Eminem style ... Is it the rhyming is use? The kind of horrorcore character I portray?

Anyways, I'm not taking anything to heart, I'm just curious to what it is you mean. Again, thanks alot for the feedback, man, it really means something to me that you took the time and really picked shit apart.

[Solace]

I'm where the darkness is, I'm makin' out with dead carcasses/
I come off as normal but ooo boy, I'm way too far from it/
I cut my wrist and stitch it up just so I can rip them out/
Put on a dress and some make-up and then I hit myself/
And when you're dead, I, color you up with red eyes/
Strip you naked and myself and then it's off for bedtime/

Was the best part of this track, real well done. Explicit, boring verse and boring chorus. Well written chorus though, you just didn't deliver that well. I like the double time on the beginning of West's verse. Flow was straight forward on Explicits, but that was part of the reason why it was boring. Mixing was pretty decent, no complaints.

[Tranquil]

I'm where the darkness is, I'm makin' out with dead carcasses/
I come off as normal but ooo boy, I'm way too far from it/
I cut my wrist and stitch it up just so I can rip them out/
Put on a dress and some make-up and then I hit myself/
And when you're dead, I, color you up with red eyes/
Strip you naked and myself and then it's off for bedtime/

Was the best part of this track, real well done. Explicit, boring verse and boring chorus. Well written chorus though, you just didn't deliver that well. I like the double time on the beginning of West's verse. Flow was straight forward on Explicits, but that was part of the reason why it was boring. Mixing was pretty decent, no complaints.

Thanks for the feed man, glad that you were honest. Im gonna start practicing different flows and shit soon, so ill try to improve that

[Tash8]

haha creepy track guys, but i like...the first verse was real nice overall, had that creepy effect from the very first word. second verse had a wicked flow, like the change up. It was a great contrast to the first verse. Nice song, though the hook was awful, the first line wasn't too bad but then the rest was just completely off, maybe just rapping it with a hint of a melody would suit better.

would appreciate your feedback on this or This, please n thanks.

[Tranquil]

haha creepy track guys, but i like...the first verse was real nice overall, had that creepy effect from the very first word. second verse had a wicked flow, like the change up. It was a great contrast to the first verse. Nice song, though the hook was awful, the first line wasn't too bad but then the rest was just completely off, maybe just rapping it with a hint of a melody would suit better.

would appreciate your feedback on this or This, please n thanks.

Thanks for feeding man Glad that you liked it, and yeah i know the hook was awful hahaha, but awell Ill check them songs out now brah

[Mr. Chambers]

ex-your verse was pretty cool. the flow was solid, tho there was something about it that i didn't really enjoy. i dunno what it was. but the lyrics and delivery were pretty good. you are improving very quickly. so propz on that...

chorus wasn't good at all. your singing isn't there yet lol. but keep doing it it'll get there.

west-your flow was pretty sick. kinda took the spotlight from this track. delivery is just as dope and lyrics were pretty good. not really my favorite subject, but you can't always win lol


beat was pretty sick too