Collie California [First Single (A Day Alone)]

[Tash8]

Yes... pretty soon, I guess. Me and k-block are working on an EP now. Also, I'm moving to Cali in a few weeks (or so). We should work on some music.

cool man, k-block from what I can remember was a good rapper so that should be interesting. and yes, I'm always down for music, where about cali are u moving to?

its easier than you think. (Indy and underground deals)
the question is, do you have the enough passion & dedication for it?

I have enough passion and dedication for the music, but not much passion for getting signed. I'll save that for when I think I'm worthy of a deal.

Wow, i really like this beat. You have a really smooth voice man, and your smooth flow, you just glided all over this track man

I have nothing bad to say about this song 5/5

Thanks man, I was hoping to come off like that with my flow, glad you noticed. Hit me up when you post up a new track!

[B.A.D.]

its easier than you think. (Indy and underground deals)
the question is, do you have the enough passion & dedication for it?

I have enough passion and dedication for the music, but not much passion for getting signed. I'll save that for when I think I'm worthy of a deal.

intelligent words

[Tash8]

intelligent words

thanks man, I try..

[Jay Tunes]

Flow - Chill... just a lil better delivery is needed
Lyrics - Dope.. couple lines caught my attention
Other - Didnt like the beat THAT much, but you handled it well.. Hope to see some of your own hooks when ur mixtape? drops

[Scrubz]

Whos singing? PRetty good! Beat is mad chill. Flow is good in parts, chopy at others. didnt effect the song to much. Liked the chill delivery! Bridge is ight. I liked your lyrics but didnt really dig the rhyme scheme, seemed a little slop imo. I think you may need to some how get more emotion in your voice.

All in all it was decent song, a tad boring. Your skills personally were good and the beat was great.

Keep droppin hommie, this section is getting brought back to life by people like yourself!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

your voice sounds expired (dunno if thats the right word)...like u was whispering almost..
overlays are placed wrong...somtimes you hear them when you shouldnt...

production is improved since i last heard of you...
guitar and piano go nice with each other...
volumes sounds good to me...

[Tash8]

Flow - Chill... just a lil better delivery is needed http://www.forum.trshady.com/
Lyrics - Dope.. couple lines caught my attention
Other - Didnt like the beat THAT much, but you handled it well.. Hope to see some of your own hooks when ur mixtape? drops

I ppreciate that man

Whos singing? PRetty good! Beat is mad chill. Flow is good in parts, chopy at others. didnt effect the song to much. Liked the chill delivery! Bridge is ight. I liked your lyrics but didnt really dig the rhyme scheme, seemed a little slop imo. I think you may need to some how get more emotion in your voice.

All in all it was decent song, a tad boring. Your skills personally were good and the beat was great.

Keep droppin hommie, this section is getting brought back to life by people like yourself!

thanks man, the singer is Slighty Stoopid this samples Collie Buds

your voice sounds expired (dunno if thats the right word)...like u was whispering almost..
overlays are placed wrong...somtimes you hear them when you shouldnt...

production is improved since i last heard of you...
guitar and piano go nice with each other...
volumes sounds good to me...

chris, glad to hear from you.. thx for the feed man...I dont understand what u mean overplays are placed wrong? I placed them wherever I felt I wanted them...

[B.A.D.]

I got your msg on msn. here it is. to avoid confusions lol

the beat is interesting, I dont know how to feel about it haha.
your mixing is good cuz it sounds clean, clear and the effect application is great, but the volumes are weird, the track overall is too low, but it wont get fixed by just pulling the volume up, you have to adjust the db of the whole track separately.

the flow is really good, the overall feeling is great, smooth as a mafucka. What I'm not comfortable with is your voice, sounds extremely monotone, like if you were 100% stoned and no emotion at all. other than that, lyrics are great, singing has improved, originality and creativity dominate the track, and works perfectly as a single. My only recommendation is to re-record it with double the emotion and fix the volumes.

overall =

[Tash8]

thx ax

[Emadyville]

This is the shit I fuckin love, cause these real laid back tracks aren't done that often in general, but laid back with real, truthful lyrics...

Love this beat,this sample is sick, enough said.

This is up there with your Impossible track, love the laid back delivery and really stands out at the very end of this song with the "call me crazy, call me what you want" ...till the end. It makes the lyrics stand out because with how you sound, it shows you mean what you're saying, which adds that little extra to the track, authenticity

Gunna be bumpin this thats for sure, good offset to amnesia as well, can't wait for the full tape

btw-can def see this beat being used for like a 4 verse feature track, i guess one feature with your 2 verses and theirs, or you one verse and 3 features, cause of the laid back feel and hook, just sayin

[Mr. Chambers]

ok...beat was ok. not really my type of thing, but it was cool.

first verse was pretty cool. i think it was a lil monotone but with a little more energy i think it coulda been really good song, remind me of some 90's pop/rap song. i think your flow still needs some work, but it also still works, just a lil more fine tuning here and there.

2nd verse tbh was really boring. just seemed like just very dry content wise, along with your monotone voice. made me wish the song was over. no offense, but that might of been one of your worst verses i've heard.

[Tash8]

This is the shit I fuckin love, cause these real laid back tracks aren't done that often in general, but laid back with real, truthful lyrics...

Love this beat,this sample is sick, enough said.

This is up there with your Impossible track, love the laid back delivery and really stands out at the very end of this song with the "call me crazy, call me what you want" ...till the end. It makes the lyrics stand out because with how you sound, it shows you mean what you're saying, which adds that little extra to the track, authenticity

Gunna be bumpin this thats for sure, good offset to amnesia as well, can't wait for the full tape

btw-can def see this beat being used for like a 4 verse feature track, i guess one feature with your 2 verses and theirs, or you one verse and 3 features, cause of the laid back feel and hook, just sayin

cool man, well i'ma keep my first verse and rework my second verse, u can get the third if you like.

ok...beat was ok. not really my type of thing, but it was cool.

first verse was pretty cool. i think it was a lil monotone but with a little more energy i think it coulda been really good song, remind me of some 90's pop/rap song. i think your flow still needs some work, but it also still works, just a lil more fine tuning here and there.

2nd verse tbh was really boring. just seemed like just very dry content wise, along with your monotone voice. made me wish the song was over. no offense, but that might of been one of your worst verses i've heard.

thanks man, I appreciate your honesty.