Solace - Distress Signals (Feat. SajN)

[Solace]

Wow Solace you're good bro. You have a very different voice than I imagined, you sound very confident on the mic, real good bro. Hook was aight, nothing special though. A better hook could of made the song better, but the song is still dope!

Thanks man, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yeah I agree with you about the hook.

[Eedee]

Nice lyrics, Solace. Nice voice. Nice delivery. Nice flow. I'm gonna listen to this a lot and try to learn off you so I can get better (I've had troubles with my flow and delivery).

SajN, the lyrics were great, just work on emotion and delivery! I know you're from Norway but just keep practicing and it'll make perfect.

Regards,
Eedee.

[Solace]

Nice lyrics, Solace. Nice voice. Nice delivery. Nice flow. I'm gonna listen to this a lot and try to learn off you so I can get better (I've had troubles with my flow and delivery).

Thank you man, I posted feedback on your track. Hopefully I didn't seem too harsh. Glad you enjoyed it! If you actually did listen to this track a lot, it'd be crazy dope 'cause no one 'cept MC Anonymous (banned member) and DerdyPK listen to me lol.

[B.A.D.]

'cause no one 'cept MC Anonymous (banned member) and DerdyPK listen to me lol.

Ahemmm

[Solace]

First of all, I'm in love with this beat, the concept is great, lyrically both of you were very good though I slightly prefer Solace's lyrics, Solace your voice is great and have amazing mic presence, SajN, IMO your accent actually gives more to your part, it's not a negative by any means, the chorus fits the song perfectly too
Now I see I've been missing out great songs from this audio stage. Keep at it

Trust bruh, there are so many more talented artists in this section Thanks for peeping this

'cause no one 'cept MC Anonymous (banned member) and DerdyPK listen to me lol.

Ahemmm

I know you give feedback on all my tracks, but what I meant by listen to me was actually replay my shit and enjoy it for more than 4 spins. Do you do that lol?

[Kez]

Alright

First of all, the glaring thing I noticed about this track is your deliveries. Solace yours is perfectly clear, but your voice sounds like it lacks any real emotion for a track like this. SajN, you mumbled pretty much through the whole thing and if I wasn't reading the lyrics I would have found it hard to understand. The only part you showed any real emotion in was the line about the girl being out of your league.

Solace your flow was pretty smooth, although there were a couple parts where your lines ended a bit early and there was a tiny pause that sounded a bit awkward to me. SajN your flow was way off lol it sounds like it was mixed off beat by someone inexperienced. Barely any flow in there.

The hook is strange. Well-written for sure, but the structure is a bit weird and on my first listen it took a bit of getting used to. I did like how you ended it though by cutting it off at the "never mean to-" at the end of the track. Don't need to really critique the lyrics because they were both well-written, it's the actual rapping that needs work.

Overall, Solace your verse was good if a bit too "standard", like it sounded like it could have gone on any track really and fit because the flow was a very typical one. SajN you definately need work lol, your delivery sounded way too bored, you didn't have much flow and just in general it lacked. But considering this is your first track for so long and you barely rap as it is, I dunno how anyone could really expect to hear anything else.

[Solace]

^These are all just lil practice tracks I'm doing, why else would I be writing the same shit over and over in different ways lol. You're right that the flow is a standard simple one and my verse could fit on any track and not this. I get that. I'll work on the realistic delivery, most of my tracks I pull a Recovery if you know what I mean. I appreciate the actual feed, thanks for listening.

[Kez]

^These are all just lil practice tracks I'm doing

Well to be fair I didn't know that, so I judge everything posted in here by the same criteria. But fair enough.

[Solace]

Yeah I understand and that's a good thing tbh, I mean wouldn't it be lovely if my practice tracks were as good as something with hard work put into? I guess that would be the case if they were judged with the same criteria as any maybe like album track etc.

[B.A.D.]

I know you give feedback on all my tracks, but what I meant by listen to me was actually replay my shit and enjoy it for more than 4 spins. Do you do that lol?

Belly Of The Beast & Disintegrate where really fucking awesome, I gave those two way more than 4 spins, this one I've heard it at least 3 times for the Pure Joy Of It.

You have nothing to worry about man, you are good and actually [missing word, synonym of relevant, lol ] (couldnt find a word to describe it)

but you see my point.

keep practicing and working at it man, youre dope

[Solace]

Holy shit, you liked Belly of the Beast and Disintegrate? That's crazy. I thought those were tracks given a spin once and only for some feedback. I appreciate it man. I will keep practicing. In fact, I have a short collaborative effort with MC Anonymous coming out soon under the name Chaos Theory and I think it'll be just alright. Nothing generic like the tracks I've been putting out the past couple weeks. Look out for it, I think you'll enjoy it if you actually like my other stuff. Oh and a collab with Ice Killa haha Keeping myself productive in the last days of summer before school starts.

[Ka0t1c]

nice song, solace, you were smooth but maybe its my computer but audio was low for me on my highest setting. it was a very emotional beat, you fit the piece best on this one.

[Solace]

Hey I appreciate it, thank you.

[Tranquil]

Alright, first off I LOVE the beat, Ive been looking for beats like this but just never found any lol. Anyway, your lyrics are really good. I can feel what your saying and you also managed to kinda paint a picture but still keep it lyrical, big props on that. Your delivery was good, at points it kinda sounded a little generic, if you put a bit more emotion into it it would've brought the track to life even more. The hook took me a little bit to get use to, at first I wasn't really feeling it but it has grown on me with each listen. Now SajN, I like the lyrics but I just couldn't get into the delivery which made me not really enjoy his verse, the flow, the lyrics were all there just not the delivery. Overall good track and I can see you ripping shit up if you keep dropping tracks, I'll be checking your shit!

[Solace]

Thanks man. Lol@this getting to a third page. You haven't posted in a while, where you been at? We gotta collab sometime in the future. Anyway, just note these lyrics were written way over a year ago and I recorded it in 10 minutes or so and the hook was on the spot more or less. I've got better stuff coming (I hope it's better lol...). Post some shit up man, you were sounding good last time I bumped