Elision - Shady 2.0 Cypher

by **Elision** » Nov 10th, '11, 17:42

Master Chief wrote:Your perspective on writing Hip Hop is contorted and incorrect. Hip Hop shouldn't be about writing the most puzzling, multi-syllabic rhymes of all time.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Objectivity_(philosophy)

by **Willy** » Nov 13th, '11, 10:16

Dope man, the only thing I would say is to maybe add some variation to your tone. Otherwise your voice sounds excellent, very clear and demands my attention.

by **Words** » Nov 15th, '11, 20:00

Already posted my feedback, but I'll give you some here too.
Really good job on this, lots of impressive multies and lyricism. Though, like Solace said, sometimes when you switched up your delivery it threw me off a little bit. That is minor though in the scheme of things. You did waaaaay more things right than wrong in this piece. Good work :y: