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No Sucka MC's Competition - The Dark Wanderer

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Re: No Sucka MC's Competition - The Dark Wanderer

Postby 12characters » Jan 23rd, '13, 20:23

Just heard it. You sound different.. I think I liked your older delivery a little bit more.

That being said, you still sounded comfortable as fuck on the beat.
Like you sounded in sync with the beat, but you still stood out.
And of course all the stuff you do outside of the actual rapping itself is highly welcomed (like the adlibs, and when you 'fucked up', or your leveling up at the end).

I liked your writing; great rhyming and stuff. I can't remember if your older songs were this horrorcore oriented though. Either way, you still has some great lines in there (especially the opening bars).

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Re: No Sucka MC's Competition - The Dark Wanderer

Postby Willy » Jan 23rd, '13, 20:52

I appreciate it man. I'm not trying to give off this evil/horrorcore vibe.. I think that's why I make sure my adlibs are light hearted because I don't want people to box me in that category. I do think I have a darker sense of humor and it spills onto the tracks. Either way, I'm going to get a lot better and will be beastly in a few years..till then I'm just leveling up
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Re: No Sucka MC's Competition - The Dark Wanderer

Postby CrashBand » Jan 28th, '13, 21:51

Ah, another born-in-the-90's-em-influenced-rapper.

Your rhyming was really great. Often switching up the schemes, sounding natural while doing it.

At times, your flow sounds very Hopsin-esqu. Which isn't a terrible thing.

Overall, for a freestyle, this was sweet man. How did you go in the competition?
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Re: No Sucka MC's Competition - The Dark Wanderer

Postby Willy » Jan 29th, '13, 06:24

Thanks for checkin' it out .. appreciate the kind words.

As far as the competition I have no idea, the contest ends in a few days so they'll mostly likely let people know the winners shortly after. I'm not too sure of my chances or whatever, just trying to get better at this point. I keep experimenting with my voice - I'm not naturally this high pitched but it's fun to experiment.

And yeah, I really want to separate myself from Em. Hopefully I can slowly develop my own identity and make some of the illest shit the world has ever seen. Give me a few weeks, lol.
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Re: No Sucka MC's Competition - The Dark Wanderer

Postby Trimss » Jan 30th, '13, 02:32

You killed it. It was pretty funny and I love your delivery, no lie. Good rhyme schemes too, and I like how you rhymed something else than what I expected you to (like someone already said.)

The ending was pretty funny too. Great job. Hope you win!
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