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Re: STICCY Z NEW DISS TRACK

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 22nd, '08, 02:33

djblue wrote:No Offence but your voice sounds better for more rock songs :y:

lol go get my wig and skin tight leather and will do dat shit lol
but yeah i agree im gonna calm down on my voice
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Re: STICCY Z NEW DISS TRACK

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 22nd, '08, 20:48

You so much remind me of an other rapper! But i can't figure out who, fucking frustrating!
Anyway, good track man.

You had some dope lines up in there,but try to step every line up. If you would've done that on this track, it would've been fucking crazy! Your delivery is good, it fits the diss-track-mentality. The chorus could've been better though, couldn't really catch what you're saying, but that's okay, since I enjoyed the track overall!

7/10! :y:
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Re: STICCY Z NEW DISS TRACK

Postby Makaveli525 » Apr 22nd, '08, 21:45

KillahGoat wrote:You so much remind me of an other rapper! But i can't figure out who

He sounds so much like Canibus, I swear...
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Re: STICCY Z NEW DISS TRACK

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 22nd, '08, 22:05

lol people used to say i sounded like eminem...but now people say i rip off tupac in my lyrics...
ive also heard that i sound like a white e-40 =....but yeah i try to be as original as i can
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Re: STICCY Z NEW DISS TRACK

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 22nd, '08, 23:10

well idk bro..but i heard it once...
people always fuckin comparin me and shit...kinda funny to me
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Re: STICCY Z NEW DISS TRACK

Postby Xray » Apr 23rd, '08, 06:07

man you always pick crazy beats, fucken HECKTIK beat that one. flow is very impressive and you've improved alot. best track of yours so far :y: keep at it :b:
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Re: STICCY Z NEW DISS TRACK

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Apr 23rd, '08, 06:09

Xray wrote:man you always pick crazy beats, fucken HECKTIK beat that one. flow is very impressive and you've improved alot. best track of yours so far :y: keep at it :b:


Yeah that beat's fucking ill.
Err did you get it from Shadowville, Sticcy? Cause I heard something like it on his page...
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Re: STICCY Z NEW DISS TRACK

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 23rd, '08, 15:04

yupp got it from shadowville
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Re: STICCY Z NEW DISS TRACK

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 24th, '08, 22:50

Delivery Shines on this track, excelent delivery n emotion dawg

the flow got better, but you need to find your own style...

lyrics are great, and nice wordplay u used there... the punchlines is perfect! good job on that

u need to fix ur writing structure tho'.... so u can find a better flow and rhymin scheme

also, try to fix up your quality!!! thats important

well, nicely done.. good job
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