Won't Hesitate[SECOND RAP]

[Darkblade44431]

wtf, can u at least give a comment if ur gonna post anything.

[Darkblade44431]

whoah whoah whoah, that slim shady part ticks me off, cuz im not rappin like him, and my lyrics are different than his, and this song was definately faster than most of his songs, he can definately rap fast though. btw, i know, i dont really have a program to work with the beat and my voice like i want to, but i'll be using a recording studio i think in the summer. Anyways...im not copyin him like some ppl(Kez), thats just the way i am. but i really disagree that it sounds like slim shady.
alright, now, i didnt mean for it to come out like i'm not appreciative of the comment, cuz i am, and yeh, i think my voice sounded better in this too. but i had some screw ups, definately need to work with the beat and i know it doesnt fit fast rap like that. umm...dont think im gonna change my lyrical style though, unless the lyrics just suck, but i think they're decent right now.

[<VerbalTouch>]

I didn't say you sound like shady

I said your lyrics are 2 much like his, Your really sounding like a clone (lyrics wise)

and you haven't been here long enough to even know how kez sounds

Chet, kez is in your sig

[Darkblade44431]

i never said, or meant to say, that u said i sounded like shady. i meant about that i disagree that my lyrics are like shady's. cuz im not seein that.
and kez copies him(lyrically), heard one of his recent songs, he really copies him. and he hasnt been in rap long enough to talk about quittin like he did in the song, so im not likin his music.

[Darkblade44431]

great, you're probably gonna compare to his songs, except taking words from each song thats the same word, tryin to make me realize that i copy his lyrical style.
alright, i'll see what you'll do with this.
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now i aint sayin im a gangsta but when you pussies step up to me wantin to start some beef ,thinkin i'm the pussy, well ur gonna get deceived, thinkin i'm the raw meat, well i'ma fuckin show u just how mean i can be.--- my bed's all made, how nice, all clean, but then when you pop shit my skin starts to turn green, i'm goin fuckin crazy. --- i'll cover your face wit the sheet, pull my blade out of its sheath, then when you least expect me, when its dark and you cant see, i'll come out from the shade and fuckin cut out your spleen,--and no i wasnt born in the streets, but i'll still fuck you up just for lookin at me!

you sons a bitches come up to me, just to talk cuz you're lonely, but you ditch me when you're friends come up and act like they own me, and then you blow me off acting like you didnt phone me, see? i may seem discrete, but i hate all you mutha fuckas, none of you even know me. dont even come up to show me that you're sorry, fuck you little bitches, you all will never be my homies!--you shoulda stuck wit ur old friends, now you suck up to new ones, well we were never your friends, we'll leave you in the dust too, and i will show you--that i wont hesitate to fuck up all the friends you made!

Mutha fuckas think that i wont do shit, i'll fuck you up bitch, you'll get a hit ot the stomach, mutha fuckas want it, the bravery to stand up, if you're not gonna do it, bitch, then shut up, otherwise spit out what you was gonna say to me, you little fuckin punk, then maybe i'll take back what i said, dont ever think that i'm afraid of you, now let me say what i was gonna say to you.--- you only talk tough just cuz of who you with, you'll see me on court TV when i plead the fifth, know why? no? well then...lets begin..

This is it, go ahead, walk up to me now bitch! soon as i get my hands on your neck i'ma choke it, i'm more insane than usual, and you're gonna know it, i already got the pot, i got the blunt and i rolled it, come near me again bitch!, you'll get ur fuckin throat slit!, i dont give a shit who finds it, i wont even sow it back to your head, they'll already know that you're dead anyways, and when people come back here, still thinkin i'm playin, that dead man, i'ma show it, i wont give you the warnin to get out of my house, get out now!, i'll get out my gat and i'll load it, let off a clip, now what bitch wants to start it and fuck with my clique?

[Darkblade44431]

haha, who said i acted gangster? that was just my song. and i didnt wanna say gun.
the people that are actually gangster though, they can say it. i hate wanna be gangsters, like i said, thats just the song, i dont act like a w i g g e r, but really, i wont hesitate to fuck you up.(lmao, wasnt talking to you individually).
alright, i MIGHT change my mind if enough of other people agree with you. and thanks for comment of good flow.

[Darkblade44431]

lmao, i said i didnt ACT gangster, didnt say that part of the song wasnt.

[Kez]

and kez copies him(lyrically), heard one of his recent songs, he really copies him. and he hasnt been in rap long enough to talk about quittin like he did in the song, so im not likin his music.

I care.

Really, i'm not someone who bowls around claiming he's the absolute best, but i know one thing: i'm much better than you. At least i can stay on beat.

Really, you didn't get the concept of The End. If you had read the topic before listening, you'd see i said it was The End of my TAPE. Jesus. And even if you didn't read that, it's clear that that's what i'm talkin about. It even says "Universal's come to an end". How thick are some people?

You know, it's a shame e-beef is so retarded, or else i would simply diss you and fuck you off. Cause seriously, if i made a track to you, this is the kind of shit you'd throw back, and everyone would know you were fucked.

And stop this e-gangsta shit as well, it's not funny.

I'm aware of the hypocrisy, how even though i say i don't care what he says i'm still replying, but you know what? Fuck it. I'm not gonna let this faggot go around comparing himself to me whenever people say he's crap.

"Oh, yeah i'm shit, but so is Kez!"



You know, i've just been out, and the instant i entered where they were, all i had was people asking me to rap.

Now, you go tell them i'm crap. Because my music actually stretches further than an Eminem fan forum.

P the fuck S:

[Darkblade44431]

lol, that made me laugh too. i told u i was waitin for the next one.
k, anyways, i got no beef wit you, i never said i was good, i know i'm not, i was only comparing you lyrically anyways, in the fact that you COPY eminem.i wouldnt compare you to me anyway except for that song. you might actually have some good songs, just sayin that one sounds lyrically like eminem, and dont try to say it doesnt by tellin me its the end, cuz you still mentioned stopping hip hop as i remember. and im not gonna change my mind. and if u wanna think we got beef, keep thinkin it, cuz i wouldnt make a diss song about you anways over some stupid beef on the internet that i dont even have with you. And, im not an internet tough guy, im real, not a fake that says he gonna do somethin and wont.

[Kez]

lol, that made me laugh too.

You know i'm pretty certain you're not sat in front of your computer actually laughing.

I don't think you got the message; e-beef is fuckin stupid. But if you say one more piss-taking thing then i will have to make a track just to own you, for lulz.

Nobody else on this whole forum has ever said i copy Eminem. So i don't believe a word of that shit, cause i really don't hear it.

[Darkblade44431]

Actually, believe it or not, i was laughing. And go ahead and make a track about me, i dont give a shit. just shows that you're emotional over somethin stupid like this, like i said, u might have some good songs, was just talking about one song, and the comment wasnt even that bad, i basically just said i think ur lyrics are copying eminem. So go spend a few hours rummaging through eminem songs to get your lyrics and make a diss song about me.

[Kez]

Actually, believe it or not, i was laughing. And go ahead and make a track about me, i dont give a shit. just shows that you're emotional over somethin stupid like this, like i said, u might have some good songs, was just talking about one song, and the comment wasnt even that bad, i basically just said i think ur lyrics are copying eminem. So go spend a few hours rummaging through eminem songs to get your lyrics and make a diss song about me.

It really doesn't make me emotional though, i'm just doing it to pwn you.

'course, you won't believe me, but the other people reading this and wondering why you're being so stupid might.

And i'm off now, because i'm not staying up any further arguing with some gay.

I'll be looking for others' opinions on whether i should own you or not, so you can sit and wait

[Darkblade44431]

Ok then, i'm guessing you wont be back on for a few weeks now due to depression. then maybe a few more weeks after that, i'll get to hear your sweet diss song about me.
oh, and only computer nerds say pwn. what kinda normal person says that anyway?

[<VerbalTouch>]

K ive seen enough here im gonna put my say in it...

Darkbladded Kez is better then you chets beter then you hell I'm probably better than you..

But really this is kind of like mine and DQs thread but we talked and were all cool now, I see now it gets annoying to argue on forum if you cant take it then fuck up ignore the bad comments or laugh at them, Damn this is what I mean when I say dont take E-beef or anything on a forum serious it just causes problems kez would probably rape you in a rap battle. If Chet or Kez gets emotional over these kinds of threads then all respect i ave for them gone same wit you. I understand the fact your a new artist and hell i admit you were better then me at startin off. but god damn stop the bull shit I thought TRshady was suppose to be a friendly place to get feed from. Damn wheres all the love

[Darkblade44431]

Thanks for that djblue.
But i'd have to say i still think i'm better than you.
Also, i have no problem with chet or kez. Kez thinks we have a problem, well maybe he does, but i dont.
and if u get pissed off at me for sayin that, djblue, ur just gonna cause more problems for this thread. Just dont get hyped up.