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TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » May 20th, '08, 14:49

wont breakdown track by track
just overall you had a dope flow .... like tornado said..somtimes u put too much words in one line
beat choice is crazy man...loving all beats...and flow matched great
delievery: everything was great...no complains...nuttin sounded boring :y:
quality....is damn good...no complains aswell
topics are pretty good...propz on that
umm wut else....defo an improvement from Jotted Notes...(in my opinion)... :worship:
btw...did Mr.Porter do this track just for you..did u have to pay Porter for that? :unsure:
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 20th, '08, 23:29

Air them out - Flows pretty good overall, some lines sound a little rushed but it doesnt hurt the track, Lyrics were nice, was a good chorus, only thing is the beat i think its my headphone's or something but it sounds out of balance, i dunno the bass feels over the top lol thats the producer though so nothing you can do, woudl rpobly sound fine on a better sound system, good track over-all.

DIMS - i listened to this track that much that i cant really leave feed for it again lol the flow on it is good some rushed lines but it doesnt bother me and actually sounds good at some points, the way the concept is done is awesome imo, the story telling is really good and has some nice lyrics for this style, chorus is excelent.

V1.5 - another dope track, and again i been listening to it for ages, flow is great takes about 30 second for it to get right into it but once it does its dope, great chorus, and some sick lines.

TBAM - nice choice of beat and dope hook, flow was excellent on this especially on the second verse, lyrics were good and the concept was nicely done, dope track, if you werent changing style id say to get this track about because of the mr. porter name, shoudl probly re-do the track once you got into the new style and releasing songs with it to make full use of the publicity porter would get you.


Life of hers - really sick beat, you do the concept really well and keep nice lyrics, delivery is great, chorus is great and works well, favourite track so far :y:

On The Road - good track, flow and lyrics are good by you, cant listen to my parts coz of the accent and shit makes me cringe now :sweating: is still a good track though :happy:

Physco - great beat, really sick hook nice mixiing on it, lyrically its really good but the structure sometime feels off, like i think i know what your goin to rhyme with then you dont and rhyme with a different part of the line, lol it only happened a couple of times in the first verse the rest is fine, flow is good not the ebs ton the tape but it works for the beat, delivery is fine, and again dope lyrics :y:

TOP - dope track, had this oen for ages and been lsitening to it regualry, no complaints great track :y:


twist in my sobieriety - your voice sounds kinda weak on this, flow is fine goes to the beat nicely, good lyrics, un-expected hook lol wasnt expecting that sort of sample lol works though, second verse is a real highlight flow is really good and lyrics are good aswell, good to hear new tom, thought he was dead :p lol , lyrics are dope by tom good flow energetic flow sounded off at the start but ti works as it goes on, dope verse.


overall good tape to say goodbye to the style lol, story telling is deifantly a great aspect of it but pure lyrical power comes out as times as well so its nicely done. cant wait to hear the new stuff from you, goin by the progress overall your stuffs starting to really come together nicely man :y:


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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Tash8 » May 20th, '08, 23:42

TMW Crew - The Manliest Women Crew
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Kosovic » May 20th, '08, 23:53

IS someone jealous?
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Unscarred » May 21st, '08, 01:58

downloading :y:
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Kosovic » May 21st, '08, 14:14

Killa wrote:
Tash8 wrote:TMW Crew - The Manliest Women Crew


your putting a crew together? how nice :y:


Why dont u let me bash him instead? Its funnier.
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Xray » May 22nd, '08, 08:54

great mixing and quality bro :y: tracks are pretty good :y:
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Nu Syd » May 22nd, '08, 12:27

the word " bash " in kosovics world means to force sexual conduct, it originated with farm animals but kosovic doesn't like to follow guidelines, so its fair game no matter the species.
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Kosovic » May 22nd, '08, 19:41

Nu Syd wrote:the word " bash " in kosovics world means to force sexual conduct, it originated with farm animals but kosovic doesn't like to follow guidelines, so its fair game no matter the species.


Exactly. So...when do i start?
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Nu Syd » May 23rd, '08, 15:03

get in line,im not done with these sheep yet :smoking:
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Kosovic » May 23rd, '08, 15:50

Ok, i am patient.
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Kosovic » May 23rd, '08, 16:07

Poo C?????????? LMFFFFFFAOO
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Xray » May 23rd, '08, 16:39

syndickhead :laughing:
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Re: TMW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Including killa collections vol 2)

Postby Kosovic » May 23rd, '08, 16:42

Poo C sounds more awesome.
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Postby Kosovic » May 23rd, '08, 20:30

I did it on my pants now. Poo C, lmao.
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