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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Vettori » May 31st, '08, 20:16

Chet wrote:Baby Girl - I didn't like it, so I didn't listen to it...not cause u were bad, just not my kind of track.

Devil's Lettuce - Rant "Weed is so fucking stupid, i seriously hate most people who do it, I think they are fucking idiots" End Rant

It was a pretty good track, you came on pretty strong, Nice rhymes and your voice is always strong. The chorus was a little weak, but I bet that's cause u were high lol. Kyle did good, it was a good track.

and mail me a copy of ur cd when it's out...sign it 2, in case u get famous so I can sell it on ebay :shifty:

good job :y:


:O WEEDS AMAZING lmao, anyways. Doing a song about it, Meh. LOL Ive always hated the idea of dedicating my time to a weed song lol.. SO not a big fan of that one...Tho you did seem to enjoy urselves on it, which i guess is a good thing....Liked the other one more tho.
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Steve Spag » May 31st, '08, 22:31

Vettori wrote:
Chet wrote:Baby Girl - I didn't like it, so I didn't listen to it...not cause u were bad, just not my kind of track.

Devil's Lettuce - Rant "Weed is so fucking stupid, i seriously hate most people who do it, I think they are fucking idiots" End Rant

It was a pretty good track, you came on pretty strong, Nice rhymes and your voice is always strong. The chorus was a little weak, but I bet that's cause u were high lol. Kyle did good, it was a good track.

and mail me a copy of ur cd when it's out...sign it 2, in case u get famous so I can sell it on ebay :shifty:

good job :y:


:O WEEDS AMAZING lmao, anyways. Doing a song about it, Meh. LOL Ive always hated the idea of dedicating my time to a weed song lol.. SO not a big fan of that one...Tho you did seem to enjoy urselves on it, which i guess is a good thing....Liked the other one more tho.


Hahaha thanks man. I personally always looked forward to doin' a weed song. I do it enough where it deserves it's own song, lmao. But glad you liked "Young Baby". I'm really tryin' to push that single out there, lol.

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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Xray » Jun 1st, '08, 02:13

The Devils Lettuce:

Beat is catchy and jumpy although i recon this beat is dangerous for those who are high lol might wanna make you jump up than fall down break a bone or something :laughing:

verses were crazy shit, straight fire. your lyrics were tight man :y: kyle spratt was good too. good shit.

chorus is the shit :y:
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Purple23Haze » Jun 1st, '08, 05:45

That was actually worth listening to good job man however you do sound a lil too much like eminem, I"M SORRY BUT YOU DO it's still hot like if I where em I'd put you on maybe but it was hott -k- PEACE Purp
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 1st, '08, 22:37

Xray wrote:The Devils Lettuce:

Beat is catchy and jumpy although i recon this beat is dangerous for those who are high lol might wanna make you jump up than fall down break a bone or something :laughing:

verses were crazy shit, straight fire. your lyrics were tight man :y: kyle spratt was good too. good shit.

chorus is the shit :y:

Haha, thanks a lot man, I appreciate it.

Purple23Haze wrote:That was actually worth listening to good job man however you do sound a lil too much like eminem, I"M SORRY BUT YOU DO it's still hot like if I where em I'd put you on maybe but it was hott -k- PEACE Purp


Do you mean voice-wise, or flow/lyrics wise? 'Cause I don't think my voice sounds like his, but that's just me, lol. But thanks for checkin' 'em out, and glad you enjoyed the tracks :).

Anybody else got any feed?
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Xray » Jun 1st, '08, 22:59

aight time to feed the "young baby" track, sorry for late feed but my net has reached the download limit so it took awhile to download.

Beat: fucken dope man, melody is insane along with some sick ass drums that fits your voice 100% :y:

lyrics, flow & delivery is 100%, by the way good choice on keeping the same flow and style through out all the verses :y:

chorus is good too, matches the rhythm of the song :y:

really good track man, but theres some parts where overlays are missing thats the only mistake i can find. Oh and by the way and you sound NOTHING like eminem, your voice is very different and your style is different too, keep the good shit up :y:
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 2nd, '08, 00:56

Xray wrote:aight time to feed the "young baby" track, sorry for late feed but my net has reached the download limit so it took awhile to download.

Beat: fucken dope man, melody is insane along with some sick ass drums that fits your voice 100% :y:

lyrics, flow & delivery is 100%, by the way good choice on keeping the same flow and style through out all the verses :y:

chorus is good too, matches the rhythm of the song :y:

really good track man, but theres some parts where overlays are missing thats the only mistake i can find. Oh and by the way and you sound NOTHING like eminem, your voice is very different and your style is different too, keep the good shit up :y:

Wow man, thanks a lot. Really really appreciated. Glad you liked this track. I put a lot of effort into this one, so I'm really happy that everyone likes this one, lol.
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 2nd, '08, 01:24

"Young Baby"

first thing I noticed is quality, its not bad but if you want to make a career out of it I suggest you turn it great... the hissing is too loud, and u need more reverb and bass in your vocals.
the hook is excelent, catchy n shit... great one
delivery is your best aspect, its perfectly unique, and u can clearly see the anger in the track
about the lyrics and structre its very basic, but that shouldn't be a problem for you to fix.

"The Devil's Lettuce"
ohhh this is my kinda track, the lyrics are hot, and very creative in this one hahah, again quality is not the best, the hook is amazing, second verse is real hot and delivery there is great. Loving this track, you should love my "Ozone" track, hahaha... but yeah very hot track. Spratt lol hahaha.
overall excelent track, defo my style. and flow is real nice here too.
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Jay-19 » Jun 3rd, '08, 10:59

I got nothing to complain about. Both tracks are sick as fuck! Good job man! :y: :y:
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Kez » Jun 7th, '08, 01:05

Right, finally got around to listening to these:

Young Baby:
Nice beat, could immediately tell it was a KA.
Quality sounds fine
Rhymes are great and concept is typical but good
Flow's good
But i dunno, i was expectin a club track or somethin by a title like that to be honest.
Hook's fine
Good track though

The Devil's Lettuce:
Weird beat, not too much for it; well, i wasn't in the beginning but by the end i liked it, weirdly
Lovin the hook
Lovin the lyrics to this track lmao
Flow again is great
One of my favourites from you :y:
Don't like Spratt's voice as much, his flow sounds a bit too slower compared to yours
His lyrics are good but not quite as good as yours, though some great lines
Flow's fine too

Hope that's "in-depth" enough for you or whatever :p
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Tornado » Jun 7th, '08, 02:11

Young Baby: Nic..though thought voice could use wee bit more emotion but overall flow/ delievery/lyrics were all good

Devil's Lettuce:weird title.... reminds me of eminem/ slim shady shit but u dont sound like him..like the beat....but dunno, lyrics werent as good..spratt had good lines ..liked his verse better..is something wrong with me? :unsure: i dont usually like his shit
neway keep it up
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Robbie G » Jun 7th, '08, 04:23

I thought that was pretty sick so keep it up. :y:

Nothing really that I would want changed..you could re-record young baby and try to get more angry on it but I could definantly get the emotion from that song so it's fine.
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 7th, '08, 05:49

^^
Thanks for the input guys. Very much appreciated, and I'll take that into note and re-recording it. Gonna make it sound better for the album.
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Solace » Jun 22nd, '08, 02:07

Man i listened to Young Baby and its just so good, and well written. Good job, ill be checking out everything else you put out here man. :y: :flower: Just like Shady Babie said, re-record Young Baby with some anger. Cant wait for your album!

edit: oh come on. Kyle Spratt? Lost all respect for you...all of it... No jk. Hes an asshole, but i admit hes one sick rapper. Even i like Slim Sell Out, but it just makes me mad :angry:
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Re: 2 NEW STEVE SPAG TRACKS!

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 22nd, '08, 04:12

shadymademe wrote:Man i listened to Young Baby and its just so good, and well written. Good job, ill be checking out everything else you put out here man. :y: :flower: Just like Shady Babie said, re-record Young Baby with some anger. Cant wait for your album!

edit: oh come on. Kyle Spratt? Lost all respect for you...all of it... No jk. Hes an asshole, but i admit hes one sick rapper. Even i like Slim Sell Out, but it just makes me mad :angry:

Haha thanks man. And yeah, I don't like to talk about this whole thing a lot, but yeah Spratt's my boy, and I'm gonna stick up for him when need-be. People just hate on him 'cause he dissed Em, but I can't change people's beliefs, nor am I trying to, lol.

Thanks for being a fan though and diggin' the music, haha.
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