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Re: NEW STICCYZ TRACK

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 18th, '08, 19:07

i listened to this awhile ago, thought i gave you feed, guess not lol. gotta listen again.

flow was good, sometimes it fell off.

lyrics were decent, did not like the wigger line, just made you sound ignorant :n:

your voice sounds like your trying to sound like that, try a more natural voice. i think it would turn out better.

overall, a good diss track but nothing more. good job, keep working :y:
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Re: NEW STICCYZ TRACK

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 18th, '08, 19:18

thanks for the feed yall,
and DQ who doesnt sound ignoret in a diss track? lmao
and plus i think ive been called that enough to have a right to say it
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Re: NEW STICCYZ TRACK

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 18th, '08, 19:47

first I gotta say emotions are great from you

the mixing is terrible lol, but yeah u can still enjoy it

lyrics are simple, but you have a couple good punchlines there

keep workin bruh, there's a big future here
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Re: NEW STICCYZ TRACK

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jun 27th, '08, 15:35

The lyrics could use some work, but the flow was for the most part pretty good. Good beat. I gotta ask you this though, did you grow up to be all gangsta and shit, cuz if you didn't, just my opinion, i don't think you should do gangsta rap. Well i guess i didn't listen enough to all your tracks to know, it just seemed like it to me. voice could be a bit better sounding imo, but it'll probably work for this. Keep at it man. Good job.
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Re: NEW STICCYZ TRACK

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 27th, '08, 16:52

Darkblade44431 wrote:The lyrics could use some work, but the flow was for the most part pretty good. Good beat. I gotta ask you this though, did you grow up to be all gangsta and shit, cuz if you didn't, just my opinion, i don't think you should do gangsta rap. Well i guess i didn't listen enough to all your tracks to know, it just seemed like it to me. voice could be a bit better sounding imo, but it'll probably work for this. Keep at it man. Good job.

I grew up in the southern United States, broke as fuck, and dumb as fuck...idk if thats gangsta nor do i give a shit...i just try to bring good music just from broke ass white boys perspective...
thanks for the feed man
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Re: NEW STICCYZ TRACK

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jun 27th, '08, 17:08

Ok, just wondering.
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