
yoshi wrote:even after all those years.. So Real > Jesus
Darkblade44431 wrote:you creamed your parents when you saw her
yoshi wrote:even after all those years.. So Real > Jesus
Chet wrote:$0 R3@L wrote:Darkblade44431 wrote:you creamed your parents when you saw her
insest?
that line freaked da shit outta me
something has gotten misplaced
$0 R3@L wrote:pretty bad im afraid,good atempt but; word skill,flow content was nil.
Keep trying
Darkblade44431 wrote:I couldn't listen to all of it, but since it was you i wanted to give you feedback. I just hate love songs, i only like eminem's because, well, lol, they aren't your normal love song. Lyrics and flow were good. oh, and that line, you creamed your parents when you saw her, that was soooo funny, you might wanna keep it more serious for a love song.
I would never do a love song or club song, that sickens me to listen to that shit.
Mc Cubz wrote:I dont know how hardcore your reputation was before but after that track I would say you sound the opposite of hardcore!
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