[NEW]C-Riz ft SajN-We Stand

[Tornado]

1st verse- unclear much, plus the breath is on at the end of each sentence should be controlled..
2nd verse...for a newcomer, not bad but lacks emotion and delievery
3rd verse...better/ clearer and i feel ur pain
hook..started great but fades out

[mart85]

nice vibe for the track

C-Riz: I prefered your 2nd verse (well the 3rd one) it had better flow and sounded clearer to me. It had more emotions than the first one too... Good job on that 3rd verse

SajN: Not bad at all for a beginner, like others said, you need more practise (flow, lyrics, delivery etc....) but it wasn't bad, just keep practising

Overall it was a nice serious track had some flaws, but still enjoyable... keep it up guys

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

many many thx for checkin mart....

[SajN]

Thanks for feed guys!


NOTE: I will feed the new tracks in Audio Stage, but I can't do that while I am in Pakistan .
Whn I get back to Norway I will feed. So wait for my posts

[Epidemik]

nice track!
beat is dope!
flow is really good..
i havnt heard alot of german raps but this is one of the best iv heard.
lyrics were really good. chorus was dope.
a pretty thought provoking song man.. definitly a good track!
hopefully here more soon

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thank you man
and wutchu mean with "german raps"...dont u mean "..german rapping.." lol
thx for checkin again

[SajN]

Thanks for checking Epidemik


NOTE(again) : I will feed the new tracks in Audio Stage, but I can't do that while I am in Pakistan .
Whn I get back to Norway I will feed. So wait for my posts.


And PM me your new songs, so I remember it!!

[C-Game]

oki i got to know whos who on da versess...

as i told NS da start strings were very kool.... who ever composed did a great job

and da best verse was da 3rd verse.. good job on dat

NS dis is da second song im hearin from u .. so i can c ur improvin .. good qlty on da mic man.. kiu
u sound as if ur talkin at certain times ..work on dat..

chris.. hella improvement.. da chorus sounds very nice
Good Job...

[SajN]

Not bad. Chorus was a bit skethcy, verses were a tad unclear but didn't bother much. Pretty decent track, I liked.

8/10

Thanks for checking out man

oki i got to know whos who on da versess...

as i told NS da start strings were very kool.... who ever composed did a great job

and da best verse was da 3rd verse.. good job on dat

NS dis is da second song im hearin from u .. so i can c ur improvin .. good qlty on da mic man.. kiu
u sound as if ur talkin at certain times ..work on dat..

chris.. hella improvement.. da chorus sounds very nice
Good Job...

Thanks man, will work on it
Beat is from Rapitfly Beats.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx u both means a lot

[Jay-19]

Track is pretty tight. I feel the lyrics and think it's a good concept. Tough C-Riz sounds a little jumpy, but that's already been pointed out, so I'm not going to babble more about it. But the third verse isn't as "bad" as the first.
SajN also did good on it, considering he haven't been rapping for so long. But I agree with some previous posts, you need to put more emotions into it. I get what you're saying about all that I-just-don't.give-a-fuck-voice, but I think it would be 10 times better if you put down some emotions in it. Other than that, it's good. You have a flow, and not all "newbies" have that when they start rapping. You got some real potential homie, true talk.

So yeah, you both did good, but you definitely can do a lot better in my opinion.

[SajN]

Thanks for checking this out homie, thanks for feed

You gotta get ur verse recorded soon

[Jay-19]

Thanks for checking this out homie, thanks for feed

You gotta get ur verse recorded soon

I'm on it dawg, I'm ordering a mic on Monday so I don't have to wait for my friend to get some free time!

[Requiem]

love the beat, mixing was pretty good, vocals quality was good too. lyrics were aight, third verse was best. chorus was good up until the end.
overall, 8/10, the beat's incredible.
btw, 2nd verse need more emotion

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

mega propz for checkin guyz
and yep Sajn did really good for a "newbie"