Bar - Get On The Game

[Xray]

really dig the beat man....delivery is good but can be improving....i recon you can spit those lyrics much better lyrics straight dope man, fire for real. *ignores the ax-d line* mixing is not bad. but hardcore mixing isn't required for these type tracks. good job to both of you

thnx man, apreciate the feedback and yeh i probly cold have given a bit more, im not makng esxcuses but i got to watch my recordings coz i ain got a pop filter right now and if i go to much and emphasise my quality gets messed up alot, once i get money and get a filter i can go all out thx again

oh no wonder, i feel your situation. once you get that filter its pop up time

[B.A.D.]

"and let your voice be free even big ax-d couldnt auto tune me
a fought aroon three of these pussy's i see
then i make them flee then i make there flow lower
bringing out there vocoder then they go go flop"

why don't u just added on your "side note": "I'm dissing Big Ax-D, and what??"... (yeah man, it is a diss)

sad to hear man, you should've told me on msn u had a problem with me and stuff

I had a great realtion with you since 2006, so I'm just gonna ignore that

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

"and let your voice be free even big ax-d couldnt auto tune me
a fought aroon three of these pussy's i see
then i make them flee then i make there flow lower
bringing out there vocoder then they go go flop"

why don't u just added on your "side note": "I'm dissing Big Ax-D, and what??"... (yeah man, it is a diss)

sad to hear man, you should've told me on msn u had a problem with me and stuff

I had a great realtion with you since 2006, so I'm just gonna ignore that

like i said take it as you will, i only refer to you using auto tune, its like refering to eminem being white or 50 cent being rich. any "problems" ive had with anyone ive told them when i give feedback

[mcZu]

Lyrics are great, flow is sick
Really a nice song

[SkinNBlista]

Yeah i like this,
I neva heard a scottish rapper before!
Am I right your scottish?
I love the accent...
Pair play its a good rhyme

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Lyrics are great, flow is sick
Really a nice song

thanx man, apreciate it n glad you liked it

Yeah i like this,
I neva heard a scottish rapper before!
Am I right your scottish?
I love the accent...
Pair play its a good rhyme

yeh im scottish, not alot of people on here love the accent so thanx and thanx for checking apreciate it

[Robbie G]

I liked it.

Flow was fine, didn't love the beat but it was pretty good and you went well with it. Still had trouble understanding parts but for the most part it was pretty clear.

Good job, if this is what got rejected from bloodline it's looking pretty good.

[SawtootH]

Ye man i liked that alot. its the best lyricism i think ive heard out ov scotland (alothough i have 2 admit i aint heard that much). nice beat aswell. not in2 the gun shots that much but still very nice . btw feelin the ova track aswell bruv, very nice chorus. jus thought id say that coz i didnt get a chance 2 comment last time. peace

[<Stiiccy>]

good shit man...
kinda hard to understand you at times..
very unique

[B.A.D.]

Awsomness really. Kez picked up on the "eaten ya wors abit" thin so wont reapet it but your oing what people need to do here. the tracks are actually worked on nicley and you speak your heart and mind instead of doing "club" tracks. Whats actually rediculous is people taking critisism to hardy. Whats even sader is the fact people act so imature to the crtisism. Who gives a fuck if you speaking your mind pisses a few people off basicly. Nice track.

don't worry dude... you can Say Big Ax-D, don't be scared.. I don't bite


already spoke to bar, and he explained it to me perfectly... so Its all good, and I got his point

[randomghost]

old skool type beat...mm..the flow was good...delivery was ok....cool short track...keep them comin

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

damn, good shit here.

quality didnt seem to be an issue to me. the punch on autotune was sick, robocop lmfao.

good flow, good lyrics. 9/10 for skill 7/10 for personal enjoyment.

thanks man apreciate it

I liked it.

Flow was fine, didn't love the beat but it was pretty good and you went well with it. Still had trouble understanding parts but for the most part it was pretty clear.

Good job, if this is what got rejected from bloodline it's looking pretty good.

thanx man aprciate the feedback, ill keep working on mty delivery and prnouncation, thanx again

Awsomness really. Kez picked up on the "eaten ya wors abit" thin so wont reapet it but your oing what people need to do here. the tracks are actually worked on nicley and you speak your heart and mind instead of doing "club" tracks. Whats actually rediculous is people taking critisism to hardy. Whats even sader is the fact people act so imature to the crtisism. Who gives a fuck if you speaking your mind pisses a few people off basicly. Nice track.

yeh true talk man, thanx for checking it

Ye man i liked that alot. its the best lyricism i think ive heard out ov scotland (alothough i have 2 admit i aint heard that much). nice beat aswell. not in2 the gun shots that much but still very nice . btw feelin the ova track aswell bruv, very nice chorus. jus thought id say that coz i didnt get a chance 2 comment last time. peace

thanx, and waoah that a compliment well i understand how you aint heard alot we aint exactly got the biggest rep but there are some seriously dope guys around, respek Ba is a really strong lyrical mc great abttler aswell, then ya got loki who has a diverse style but is (imo) one of the best lyracist i every heard, it takes a while to respect his style though but it is sick, lots of other guys aswell but those 2 are the ebst if you aint heard them you shoudl check them out on myspace or if you go to the UK hip hop section i posted a bit about them and some track, thanx again for the feedback appreciate it and thanx for the comments on permit my sins, pretty old now but still apreciated also if you every up for a ft get in touch, really liked your style in that track you posted so if you up for getting on track let me know

good shit man...
kinda hard to understand you at times..
very unique

thanks man, like i said still working on spitting clearly lol, thanx again

old skool type beat...mm..the flow was good...delivery was ok....cool short track...keep them comin

thanx man, apreciate it

[B.A.D.]

Awsomness really. Kez picked up on the "eaten ya wors abit" thin so wont reapet it but your oing what people need to do here. the tracks are actually worked on nicley and you speak your heart and mind instead of doing "club" tracks. Whats actually rediculous is people taking critisism to hardy. Whats even sader is the fact people act so imature to the crtisism. Who gives a fuck if you speaking your mind pisses a few people off basicly. Nice track.

don't worry dude... you can Say Big Ax-D, don't be scared.. I don't bite


already spoke to bar, and he explained it to me perfectly... so Its all good, and I got his point

Actualy im talking several people but if you wanna be on the list then be my guest

hahahahahahhaha

several ppl?? .... ummm who?, I'm the only one who does club tracks and uses autotune (except sicily's best, but no one even listens to his shit)... so I guess u did spoke about me haha

anyways, I don't care if i'm on "your list" ....... (lmao)

anyways,,, bar knows I support every move he makes, cuz I know him, he cool..., so... u get my point

stick to your stuff bro ...

[Tash8]

ay, how about this, if you don't like autotune or club beats just don't listen to the tracks, simple as that

the only reason i was mad, is becuase i like ax-d as artist, and it's disappointing that i won't be able to enjoy his tracks as much as before, but hey his choice.

[<VerbalTouch>]

[quote="Tash8"]ay, how about this, if you don't like autotune or club beats just don't listen to the tracks, simple as that

[quote]


Exxactly