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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jul 8th, '08, 18:00

Thanks for the heads up on this man, downloading now, will leave feed after I give it a few listens :y:
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Solace » Jul 8th, '08, 19:01

I can't do really good reviews, so I'm sorry that it's a little too short :(

It's All Clear Now

I liked it a lot, until the ending. The ending was really annoying, you repeat "Bitch put the mic down, it's all clear now" a lot, and other variations. I also liked the beat :y: 4/5

Trapped In A Plague

The Trapped In A Plague beat was pretty good, but I didn't feel the beat. I liked the lyrics though :y: I'd give it a 3/5

666

I really liked this song, it has to be my favourite, along with It's All Clear Now (excluding the ending :P). This song was pretty cool. I liked how there was like a dark devil voice at the beginning saying "We Have Been Expecting You" (i couldnt understand what it said before that though) I give this song a 5/5

Bump

I loved how the beat began! I really don't know what else to say about the song other than I like it :unsure: I give this song a 4/5. The chorus was annoying a bit, but theres nothing wrong with it, i think you could have said something at the end of it.

Filthy Beast

I liked the flow of this song. The beat was a little too plain for me. The song got me thinking of White America...But I thought it was too short. 4/5 on this song.

Trapped In A Plague (REMIX)

I liked this one a lot better. I think the beat fits better. This one is more listen-able than the first one, to me. 4/5.

Overall

I give this album and overall of 4.5/5
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Vettori » Jul 8th, '08, 22:31

1. Its All Clear Now
I enjoyed the beat....Not a big fan of disses. But you definatly brought what was needed.
The very end had a few wierd sounds, but overall i enjoyed it, and The qualities comfortable, i could understand it..
7 / 10

2. Trapped In A Plague
To be honest the beat isn't Great, Very plain. But Tash is definatly improving.
Tash you need to make The transition parts smoother, and Maybe a nice intro beat to ur beats
As for the song, because the beat was like that it took away from it. I listened to it all, but Sounds Boring....
3 / 10

3. Six Six Six
Beats Wierd, and all over the place lol.
The concept matched what You were sayin, but
Chorus didnt match the Verse, or the beat much,
The first track is definatly the most impressive as of this point.

I give this a 5 / 10
Cause The lyrics were good, But the way it was delivered Not so much
and the beat Didnt have me bumpin

4. Bump
Now this is what i like haha....Not to be banged in a club, But when ur sittin down,
and want somethin to put you in a Good mood, this will do it....Tho the chorus was way to Short, and repetative.
Sayin Bump in the backround of a sick chorus overlaying it, would sound amazing... Would have made it a fav song for me..,,,,, Second best track on this Tape.
8 / 10


And ill finish My review later. Gotta go
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Xray » Jul 9th, '08, 05:30

Replying to all that left feedback :y:

thanks alot, i deeply appreciate every word you typed :worship:

and some of you didn't like the chorus for bump...so let me tell you bout the song...it was the last song i mixed and for some parts recorded. had no time to work on a better chorus...and nothing came to me for a chorus...i had a few ideas but none of them seem to work on the beat. so i just went with the pattern of the chorus and made it simple thats why i just say bump...cause believe me. sometimes simple is better than forced flow :y: and yeah i agree i should make more songs like these (lyrics wise).

filthy beast 50 bars i agree with c-riz it is abit hollow but thats because i mixed it poorly.

and thanks alot to everyone. :y:
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby KDEWolf » Jul 9th, '08, 05:50

I only like Bump and All Clear now. Ur flow was good and the production was sollid. Actully the Hook on Bump sucked but what ever. but ya i digged the flow esp. ALl clear now
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Xray » Jul 9th, '08, 06:09

KDEWolf wrote:I only like Bump and All Clear now. Ur flow was good and the production was sollid. Actully the Hook on Bump sucked but what ever. but ya i digged the flow esp. ALl clear now

cool man, glad you liked a few songs at leat :y: uppin for more
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Xray » Jul 9th, '08, 06:36

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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Speech » Jul 9th, '08, 07:33

damn man here i go :


IT'S ALL CLEAR NOW
damn loving the multies in the beginning..not gonna say nothing bout the diss cuz i'm cool with both of you
hook is catchy
only thing i guess you did, made this a short track to play with your new quality a lil, this shou;d have been longer...showing off in this track was ok but didn do it's job 100%
4/5

TRAPPED
gave feed before i think haha

SIX SIX SIX
hmm not my fav but it's all cool...the way you talk to the "almighty" haha
nice well the devilish talks gets annoying after a while....hook is kinda catchy there yeah
first verse is one part where you had to rush a line
quality is ace once again man
last part was annoying lmao...but listenable, once haha
3.8 / 5

BUMP
this hooooooook damn catchy(bump bump bump....) :y:
well first verse starts off with devil talk again hmmm not so my thing
and yeah coacco is right all the vtz beats sound the same, hard hitting or incredibly pussy-like..this one is the hard-typo....
2. verse was more enjoyable
4.25 / 5

FILTHY BEASY
started with a nice intro....straight jump into the track was cool
but you the big guy too much here...but your flow was so damn stable it made it fun to listen to for real
hmm..performance killed the lyrics
4.25 / 5

TRAPPED RMX
hmmmm...nah don do a rmx of a track on a six track cd..this beat sounded too "happy" for the lyrics i think...but oh well there was a reason for you doing this, lyrics and performance wise you know what i think :y:
2.5 / 5

ALL IN ONE
nice tape deffo worth the dl, lil short...maybe 10 trax would have been better..lil more time of music you know
the rmx wasn necessary (sp?)
quality was nice and even... :y:
keep that up...stop being the devil, devil is evil, your not evil, you a vegy...lol kiddin...but don fuck with the devil too often, gets boring....like once or twice an (16-track) album it's cool but it was too much for a 6-track thing

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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Xray » Jul 9th, '08, 08:08

Speech wrote:damn man here i go :


IT'S ALL CLEAR NOW
damn loving the multies in the beginning..not gonna say nothing bout the diss cuz i'm cool with both of you
hook is catchy
only thing i guess you did, made this a short track to play with your new quality a lil, this shou;d have been longer...showing off in this track was ok but didn do it's job 100%
4/5

TRAPPED
gave feed before i think haha

SIX SIX SIX
hmm not my fav but it's all cool...the way you talk to the "almighty" haha
nice well the devilish talks gets annoying after a while....hook is kinda catchy there yeah
first verse is one part where you had to rush a line
quality is ace once again man
last part was annoying lmao...but listenable, once haha
3.8 / 5

BUMP
this hooooooook damn catchy(bump bump bump....) :y:
well first verse starts off with devil talk again hmmm not so my thing
and yeah coacco is right all the vtz beats sound the same, hard hitting or incredibly pussy-like..this one is the hard-typo....
2. verse was more enjoyable
4.25 / 5

FILTHY BEASY
started with a nice intro....straight jump into the track was cool
but you the big guy too much here...but your flow was so damn stable it made it fun to listen to for real
hmm..performance killed the lyrics
4.25 / 5

TRAPPED RMX
hmmmm...nah don do a rmx of a track on a six track cd..this beat sounded too "happy" for the lyrics i think...but oh well there was a reason for you doing this, lyrics and performance wise you know what i think :y:
2.5 / 5

ALL IN ONE
nice tape deffo worth the dl, lil short...maybe 10 trax would have been better..lil more time of music you know
the rmx wasn necessary (sp?)
quality was nice and even... :y:
keep that up...stop being the devil, devil is evil, your not evil, you a vegy...lol kiddin...but don fuck with the devil too often, gets boring....like once or twice an (16-track) album it's cool but it was too much for a 6-track thing

peace

cool man....thanks for the feedback....appreciate the honesty and lol its an ep not a mixtape :p

thanks again :y:
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby mcZu » Jul 9th, '08, 18:52

It's all clear now:
Great lyrics, flow was nice, delivery could be a bit better
Overall a nice song :y:
4/5

Trapped in a plague:
Flow was ok, didn't understand all words, some rhyms didn't rhyme well, but the concept was great :y:
3/5

Six six six:
Flow kinda fitted the beat :y: , lyrics were not bad :y: , again I couldn't understand some words, delivery was ok
3/5

Bump:
Flow great :y: , Lyrics were great :y: , delivery was nice :y: , I DID understand all words this time so your delivery and pronunciation are great :y:
5/5

Filthy beast:
Flow is nice, lyrics ok :y: -Somehow I didn't realy feel this track like ''Bump'', maybe I will feel it when I hear it some more times-
4/5

Trapped in a plague remix:
First beat was better, didn't feel it that must, but still a nice remix :y:
3/5

-The beats-

It's all clear now:
Kinda an agresive beat, suites the lyrics, a nice beat :y:
4/5

Trapped in a plague:
As I said before, this beat is awesome, I realy like it :y:
It has some strange feeling to it, chill but still a bit agresive, nice :y: :y:
5/5

Six six six:
Liked the intro, the beat is kinda horor-like, an awesome sound to it, nice :y:
4/5

Bump:
Nice beat, kinda agresive, yet catchy and a good feeling to it :y: :y:
5/5

Filthy beast:
Intro was ok, a glory like beat, almost sounds like a ''winner-beat'', I liked it, nice :y:
4/5

Trapped in a plague:
Liked the first better, but still, it has some kind off chill, lay-back feeling, it's ok :y:
3/5

--EP: 3,7/5--

Really a nice EP, keep up the good work, my favourite track is prolly ''Bump'', that one is nice :y:
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Xray » Jul 9th, '08, 18:56

mcZu wrote:It's all clear now:
Great lyrics, flow was nice, delivery could be a bit better
Overall a nice song :y:
4/5

Trapped in a plague:
Flow was ok, didn't understand all words, some rhyms didn't rhyme well, but the concept was great :y:
3/5

Six six six:
Flow kinda fitted the beat :y: , lyrics were not bad :y: , again I couldn't understand some words, delivery was ok
3/5

Bump:
Flow great :y: , Lyrics were great :y: , delivery was nice :y: , I DID understand all words this time so your delivery and pronunciation are great :y:
5/5

Filthy beast:
Flow is nice, lyrics ok :y: -Somehow I didn't realy feel this track like ''Bump'', maybe I will feel it when I hear it some more times-
4/5

Trapped in a plague remix:
First beat was better, didn't feel it that must, but still a nice remix :y:
3/5

-The beats-

It's all clear now:
Kinda an agresive beat, suites the lyrics, a nice beat :y:
4/5

Trapped in a plague:
As I said before, this beat is awesome, I realy like it :y:
It has some strange feeling to it, chill but still a bit agresive, nice :y: :y:
5/5

Six six six:
Liked the intro, the beat is kinda horor-like, an awesome sound to it, nice :y:
4/5

Bump:
Nice beat, kinda agresive, yet catchy and a good feeling to it :y: :y:
5/5

Filthy beast:
Intro was ok, a glory like beat, almost sounds like a ''winner-beat'', I liked it, nice :y:
4/5

Trapped in a plague:
Liked the first better, but still, it has some kind off chill, lay-back feeling, it's ok :y:
3/5

--EP: 3,7/5--

Really a nice EP, keep up the good work, my favourite track is prolly ''Bump'', that one is nice :y:

awesome bro :worship: glad you liked bump :happy: appreciate the breakdown :b:
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 10th, '08, 03:47

you have a great voice, i think your lyrics are tight man... i definitely did not expect your guys' shit to be this tight, i am very impressed and also at the same time jealous, lol, jk i'll record some day

i give this shit an A+ overall b/c damn, that shit's gotta be hard work... 1 week, time zone, and whatever else...

great album art too!!! :worship: :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby randomghost » Jul 10th, '08, 04:47

shit...downloading now..feed soon :8)
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby Xray » Jul 10th, '08, 07:44

Kaotic wrote:you have a great voice, i think your lyrics are tight man... i definitely did not expect your guys' shit to be this tight, i am very impressed and also at the same time jealous, lol, jk i'll record some day

i give this shit an A+ overall b/c damn, that shit's gotta be hard work... 1 week, time zone, and whatever else...

great album art too!!! :worship: :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:

awesome man :y: really glad you checked the EP cause i think its the first time you check my work right? haha appreciate it man. and yeah it was tough work, but someones gotta do it, ain't that right Tash? :smoking:

and yeah thanks to mc maybe he made that cover so damn quick yet its awesome as fuck, thanks again bro :worship:

randomghost wrote:shit...downloading now..feed soon :8)

looking forward to your feedback :b:
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Re: [ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

Postby randomghost » Jul 10th, '08, 18:53

1. It's all clear now: hot beat....loved the flow...specially in the beginning.....ur dissing axd in this or ???/ after still URD....ur voice sound more mature and powerfull..and it has more energy....loved the song..but it gets boring at some parts....4/5

2. Trapped in a Plague: i left feed for this before..hot production from tash...hot song....5/5 :y:

3. SIx Six Six: wow loved how the beat started,..nice production....loved the track...hot delivery.....flow is gettin better each track....hook is not that good here...but it def. a good track to listen to when am mad :y: 4/5

4. Bump: i really loved the beat here...awsome production....flow is hot....lovin the energy on it....hot hot hot.. :y: 5/5


5. Filthy Beast: its an ok beat...not really ma type.....flow is good,,and its on point..nice mixing.....3/5

6. Trapped In A Plague (Remix): hot remix....i think this one sound much better than the original :y: :y: keep them beat comin tash :y: :8) 5/5

overall hot EP...i really enjoyed the productions...specially most of them track produced by tr shady members..which is something good...like a connect or bond that is linked :happy: ...ur voice sajjad beacme more powerful and sounded different than before ( thats ma opinion)...but def. sound much better....i loved ur flow on most of the tracks....hook was not good on all...but some was ok...good job on the EP... :y:
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