[New] A New Short Track from Bar

[Tornado]

well zshare working now...
different beat to the norm, but variety's good..nothing new to say, but decent lyrics as always and flow is better

and the storm line

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice track! flow was cool, and like killa, I liked the little pauses here and there etc... some nice multies too... pretty much everything was on point... you explained why it sounded hollow so I'm not gonna point it out again lol, but since it sounds hollow, the vocals should have been a bit louder IMO... and some words sounded like they could have been pronounced better, but overall it was good

and the whole vibe was nice, I liked it, keep it up

oh and I didn't have any problem with your accent

thanx man appreciate the feedback

well zshare working now...
different beat to the norm, but variety's good..nothing new to say, but decent lyrics as always and flow is better

and the storm line

thanx appreciate the feedback

[yoshi]

stop bitching about the accent, his accent is the best thing since sliced bread [except for So Real's accent ]

anyway, sick track Tube. lyrics are awesome, so are the rhymes - crazyyy. Bar's the shit.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

stop bitching about the accent, his accent is the best thing since sliced bread [except for So Real's accent ]

anyway, sick track Tube. lyrics are awesome, so are the rhymes - crazyyy. Bar's the shit.

so reals accent aint got shit on me lol


thanx yoshter and i aint been called tube in so long

[Solace]

it was awesome man. the beat was nice, the lyrics were great.

this is my first time hearing a UK rapper

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

it was awesome man. the beat was nice, the lyrics were great.

this is my first time hearing a UK rapper

thanks man its always good to see peoples first impression on my music


and there's lots of great uk artists out there, check out the uk hip hop section to find some

[Big Proof 4ever]

i think that vocals cud be bit louder flow was ok lyrics aswell,and that accent rly makes u unique u can do it better

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

i think that vocals cud be bit louder flow was ok lyrics aswell,and that accent rly makes u unique u can do it better

thanks appreciate the feedback

[Solace]

it was awesome man. the beat was nice, the lyrics were great.

this is my first time hearing a UK rapper

thanks man its always good to see peoples first impression on my music


and there's lots of great uk artists out there, check out the uk hip hop section to find some

I didnt really know you were from UK, i thought you were from The Land of Buckfast

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

it was awesome man. the beat was nice, the lyrics were great.

this is my first time hearing a UK rapper

thanks man its always good to see peoples first impression on my music


and there's lots of great uk artists out there, check out the uk hip hop section to find some

I didnt really know you were from UK, i thought you were from The Land of Buckfast

AKA scotland

[Boston]

well i really haven't heard much of your shit, but i know your up there on trshady as a member ha. but foreal, hearing someone not from the USA is different for me, im just an 18 year old kid bumpin old school american stuff, no disrespect. after listening to you though, even with your accent, i can listen to it and some lyrics (multies as well) attract you into it. flow was alright, and as well as some people on this site, turning the vocals up a tiny bit wouldnt hurt. keep it up

my new track: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=49247 - feed please

[enjinn]

dope rhymes and flow

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

well i really haven't heard much of your shit, but i know your up there on trshady as a member ha. but foreal, hearing someone not from the USA is different for me, im just an 18 year old kid bumpin old school american stuff, no disrespect. after listening to you though, even with your accent, i can listen to it and some lyrics (multies as well) attract you into it. flow was alright, and as well as some people on this site, turning the vocals up a tiny bit wouldnt hurt. keep it up

my new track: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=49247 - feed please

thanc man appreciate the feedback

dope rhymes and flow

thanks man

[Angevilish]

I agotta say it, your accent makes it quite hard to understand you in some lines (where are you from? if you don't mind me asking..)..but that's just the only significant disadvanatge you had. The flow was nice, you rode it well, delivery was tight & could be better if you had a less heavy accent. Lyricism was there, you had some perfectly set dope multis that were not forced at all, they even made the flow more smooth...you have massive potential, & I couold tell that you were just fuckin' around, you can put up even way more lyrical shit, but aparently you were just experimenting through this short track...
Anyways, it's the first track of yours I hear, I'll be looking for more of you...
Good job

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

I agotta say it, your accent makes it quite hard to understand you in some lines (where are you from? if you don't mind me asking..)..but that's just the only significant disadvanatge you had. The flow was nice, you rode it well, delivery was tight & could be better if you had a less heavy accent. Lyricism was there, you had some perfectly set dope multis that were not forced at all, they even made the flow more smooth...you have massive potential, & I couold tell that you were just fuckin' around, you can put up even way more lyrical shit, but aparently you were just experimenting through this short track...
Anyways, it's the first track of yours I hear, I'll be looking for more of you...
Good job

Im from scotland ive came to the conclusion that accent is just what the person perceives it as ya know, im trying better to make it clearer with my words but i prounounce stuff a certain way and i cant change that or i lose the influence of who i am and were im from, but i am getting better prouncation (imo) so imma just keep practicing it

anywae, thanx for the feed and yeh i was fucking around, my tracks like this basically come from sitting with a pen + pad + boredome lol