I like your voice, you can make gold track with such voice on a dope beat. You got potential I can see. Flow needed some work, due to the different approach you were using, I give ya props for tryin' to be different, that's always nice. Lyrics were simple, try more complex shit.
overall, this wasn't bad at all, seems like you were experimenting, so it's cool...keep doin' what you do man.
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Thanx in adavance...