Ice Killa- Lime Light (prod. by Big Ax-D)

[Xray]

your voice sounds very young bro.

i respect you trying to be lyrical but it doesn't sound good. cause there complex but not effective. flow is pretty good for a beginner. delivery will adapt as time comes. you got potential stay up

big ax-d did good on the beat. just needs some bass

[Requiem]

^ thx tash. i'm definitely working to improve. this is only my 3rd recorded track. but i thank everybody who commented, and i'll work on those things people wanted me too.
lol, my voice sounds like a middle schooler. but i'm almost in college

[Tornado]

firstly, your voice dont sound good quality, i dunno whether its the mic or the mixing so i'll just move on. i felt bored when listen like no emotion coming from you like Tash and Kez said. Needs an injection of energy and also if your a newcomer, i'd adise you not to be too lyrical and say rhymes just for the sake of it,...beat was alright from ax

[<Stiiccy>]

beat: sucked, sorry ax i hated it lol

lyrics: some parts were ok, sounded like you could care less about what you were sayin, you just wanted to spit multi's...which is retarded and half the shit you said was stupid

flow: was umm horrible, you have none..

your voice is shit..you sound like your 14 and incredibly white

hook was horrible and didnt make sence

quality was very very very bad

delivery was not there

you got a long way to go kid

[Requiem]

as quoted from eminem ^ "thanks for the support, asshole"

i'm working to get better tho

[<Stiiccy>]

lol no doubt man...
the mulit's were tight tho..
just didnt sound good

[Requiem]

^thx for the feedback tho. even tho it was kinda .

i mean, this isn't meant to be a serious track, so don't take it so seriously. and i'm just spitting multies, not trying to break ground, just showing rhyming skill.
plus, this is only one track off of my album, so u can't judge my skill/talent off of one song. i'm just making a name for myself. so people know who i am when i finally release my LP on TR.

[<Stiiccy>]

^thx for the feedback tho. even tho it was kinda .

i mean, this isn't meant to be a serious track, so don't take it so seriously. and i'm just spitting multies, not trying to break ground, just showing rhyming skill.
plus, this is only one track off of my album, so u can't judge my skill/talent off of one song. i'm just making a name for myself. so people know who i am when i finally release my LP on TR.

how was my feedback bad when i everything i said was true...i was no more harsh than anyone else was

[KDEWolf]

mixing was awful, beat was nice but i it needs more... drums got boring fast

your flow is alright, it seems like your reading off your paper...

don't do that.

also

height, fight, light, kite, highlight, twilight

tell me what the hell are you rhyming

ight, ight, ight, ight, ight aren't rhymes, they are the same things.

opposition, composition, aquestion, intermission, again ur rhyming is awful.

keep it up

ahhahahhahhahahhahhahahahah Tash u crack me up. lolz

[Requiem]

sticcy, ur feedback is good. ur review is bad. i mean no offense by it, i appreciate the feedback

[Boston]

it sounds like you just started recording kind of, because you need to put some more emotion into it. work on your delivery by just spitting your verse, try putting emotion into it. you need better quality. your lyrics are straight but when you rhyme try to let each bar follow up with each other. kind of make sense with them. you know. your flow is not bad, seems to be off at times though. keep it up man. good beat by the way haha.

feed my new track Make It, please. thanks.

[Mc Cubz]

nice style but too un-convincing - need to sound lie you believe in what your sayin so the listener can.