Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

[Tash8]

well no disrespect but you have a lot of work to do.
it is better to memorize your lyrics because you can just close ya eyes and put all you got into it haha even though i read my lyrics and i bet most of yall cant even tell lol. but ya man get into it. write everyday and you would see yourself improve bro.

and icekilla, good looks on reaching out to up and coming rappers

Thanks man I know i gotta lot of work to do.

@Tash8, lmao. Well wtf am i supposed to say. I rap like im 6, but you rap like your 8?

nothing, how old are you? cuz if ur under 13 or whatever, then i can't help you, you just got get thru puberty, if ur over 13 i can.

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practice practice practice practice practice practice.

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practice practice practice practice practice practice.

stop talking to yourself

[Tash8]

practice practice practice practice practice practice.

wait, what does he have to do?

[Solace]

well no disrespect but you have a lot of work to do.
it is better to memorize your lyrics because you can just close ya eyes and put all you got into it haha even though i read my lyrics and i bet most of yall cant even tell lol. but ya man get into it. write everyday and you would see yourself improve bro.

and icekilla, good looks on reaching out to up and coming rappers

Thanks man I know i gotta lot of work to do.

@Tash8, lmao. Well wtf am i supposed to say. I rap like im 6, but you rap like your 8?

nothing, how old are you? cuz if ur under 13 or whatever, then i can't help you, you just got get thru puberty, if ur over 13 i can.

im 13, so i guess you cant help me.

[Tash8]

Thanks man I know i gotta lot of work to do.

@Tash8, lmao. Well wtf am i supposed to say. I rap like im 6, but you rap like your 8?

nothing, how old are you? cuz if ur under 13 or whatever, then i can't help you, you just got get thru puberty, if ur over 13 i can.

im 13, so i guess you cant help me.

yea, just wait to get thru puberty then work on ur voice, other than just learn to flow by freestyling over beats.

[Solace]

yea, just wait to get thru puberty then work on ur voice, other than just learn to flow by freestyling over beats.

Alright youtube instrumentals here i come

[Requiem]

and icekilla, good looks on reaching out to up and coming rappers

thx man i just saw that shadymademe (epiphany) had a lot of potential to be great. and i'm helping him to discover his own personal flow. it might take a while, it took nearly a year for me to find my flow, but once he discovers it, he's going to be ill.

[Xray]

wackest song i've heard in my life no joke. the beat is pure wack, lol can't believe you even supplying rappers with beats like this, dude you need to work A SHIT LOAD MORE. both of you do. everyone that has started using FL on there first day they've made better beats than this lol. i just can't believe how fucked up the vocals sound. i mean theres no microphone in the world that can possibly sound that fucked up, you musta mixed the track? yeah like boston suggested you both GOT ALOT WORK TO DO!

thats honesty right there. if you think its hate than you don't know what honesty is

[Requiem]

well thx alot u sure do know how to destroy some self esteem there

I know the beat's not that great, but the mic quality isn't that bad. especially second verse. i'm going to remix it, with a much better beat. and i'm taking my time on it...

[Solace]

"Thanks for the support, asshole".


Im sure the lyrics werent the wackest. The quality of the track was bad I can admit that though. Yes, the beat wasnt tops. It was my first track, never recorded before, so i wasnt really comfortable with no breathing, so i kinda fucked my flow. And man, it wasnt the best beat, but Ice has better ones, way better than this. And i wasnt using a microphone so suck it

Thanks for honest feedback, as offending as it was, its honest review, so i cant blame ya Peace.

[Kez]

"Thanks for the support, asshole".


Im sure the lyrics werent the wackest. The quality of the track was bad I can admit that though. Yes, the beat wasnt tops. It was my first track, never recorded before, so i wasnt really comfortable with no breathing, so i kinda fucked my flow. And man, it wasnt the best beat, but Ice has better ones, way better than this. And i wasnt using a microphone so suck it

Thanks for honest feedback, as offending as it was, its honest review, so i cant blame ya Peace.

Tsk.

You can't ask for feedback and then get butthurt when people give it to you.

[Solace]

"Thanks for the support, asshole".


Im sure the lyrics werent the wackest. The quality of the track was bad I can admit that though. Yes, the beat wasnt tops. It was my first track, never recorded before, so i wasnt really comfortable with no breathing, so i kinda fucked my flow. And man, it wasnt the best beat, but Ice has better ones, way better than this. And i wasnt using a microphone so suck it

Thanks for honest feedback, as offending as it was, its honest review, so i cant blame ya Peace.

Tsk.

You can't ask for feedback and then get butthurt when people give it to you.

How was i "butthurt"

i have no problem with his review. i just said im working on it, ice killa has better ones, and i can say the audio is crap quality but the lyrics werent horrible.

[Requiem]

lmao at shadymademe quoting eminem.

I"m working on a new beat, yes. i didn't take my time with this one because i was too busy worried about the beat going at the right speed. but now that i've got the speed right, i can rework it.

and i do apreciate honest feedback, but u don't have to slam it. u could be like "oh, it wasn't very good, here's what u need to work on....." not "wackest song ever" no disrespect to xray.

[Kez]

Im sure the lyrics werent the wackest

And i wasnt using a microphone so suck it

I dunno if these, among others, count as butthurt neccessarily, but what they do say is someone making excuses for every criticism people gave to his song.

@IceKilla: Why sugar-coat it? It all means the same at the end of the day; it's still feedback. Be grateful you're getting it. I mean Christ, 3 fuckin pages, that's more than i had for my last track.