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Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Tash8 » Oct 5th, '08, 16:41

shadymademe wrote:
Boston wrote:well no disrespect but you have a lot of work to do.
it is better to memorize your lyrics because you can just close ya eyes and put all you got into it haha even though i read my lyrics and i bet most of yall cant even tell lol. but ya man get into it. write everyday and you would see yourself improve bro.

and icekilla, good looks on reaching out to up and coming rappers

Thanks man :y: I know i gotta lot of work to do.

@Tash8, lmao. Well wtf am i supposed to say. I rap like im 6, but you rap like your 8?


nothing, how old are you? cuz if ur under 13 or whatever, then i can't help you, you just got get thru puberty, if ur over 13 i can.
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 5th, '08, 16:45

practice practice practice practice practice practice.
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Oct 5th, '08, 16:46

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:practice practice practice practice practice practice.


stop talking to yourself :angry:
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Tash8 » Oct 5th, '08, 16:49

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:practice practice practice practice practice practice.


wait, what does he have to do?
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Solace » Oct 5th, '08, 17:01

Tash8 wrote:
shadymademe wrote:
Boston wrote:well no disrespect but you have a lot of work to do.
it is better to memorize your lyrics because you can just close ya eyes and put all you got into it haha even though i read my lyrics and i bet most of yall cant even tell lol. but ya man get into it. write everyday and you would see yourself improve bro.

and icekilla, good looks on reaching out to up and coming rappers

Thanks man :y: I know i gotta lot of work to do.

@Tash8, lmao. Well wtf am i supposed to say. I rap like im 6, but you rap like your 8?


nothing, how old are you? cuz if ur under 13 or whatever, then i can't help you, you just got get thru puberty, if ur over 13 i can.


im 13, so i guess you cant help me.
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Tash8 » Oct 5th, '08, 17:03

shadymademe wrote:
Tash8 wrote:
shadymademe wrote:Thanks man :y: I know i gotta lot of work to do.

@Tash8, lmao. Well wtf am i supposed to say. I rap like im 6, but you rap like your 8?


nothing, how old are you? cuz if ur under 13 or whatever, then i can't help you, you just got get thru puberty, if ur over 13 i can.


im 13, so i guess you cant help me.


yea, just wait to get thru puberty then work on ur voice, other than just learn to flow by freestyling over beats.
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Solace » Oct 5th, '08, 17:07

Tash8 wrote:yea, just wait to get thru puberty then work on ur voice, other than just learn to flow by freestyling over beats.

Alright :y: youtube instrumentals here i come :happy:
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Requiem » Oct 5th, '08, 19:29

Boston wrote:and icekilla, good looks on reaching out to up and coming rappers


thx man :y: i just saw that shadymademe (epiphany) had a lot of potential to be great. and i'm helping him to discover his own personal flow. it might take a while, it took nearly a year for me to find my flow, but once he discovers it, he's going to be ill. :8)
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Xray » Oct 5th, '08, 23:18

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wackest song i've heard in my life no joke. the beat is pure wack, lol can't believe you even supplying rappers with beats like this, dude you need to work A SHIT LOAD MORE. both of you do. everyone that has started using FL on there first day they've made better beats than this lol. i just can't believe how fucked up the vocals sound. i mean theres no microphone in the world that can possibly sound that fucked up, you musta mixed the track? yeah like boston suggested you both GOT ALOT WORK TO DO!

thats honesty right there. if you think its hate than you don't know what honesty is :p
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Requiem » Oct 5th, '08, 23:22

well thx alot :'( u sure do know how to destroy some self esteem there :y:

I know the beat's not that great, but the mic quality isn't that bad. especially second verse. i'm going to remix it, with a much better beat. and i'm taking my time on it... :8)
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Solace » Oct 5th, '08, 23:29

"Thanks for the support, asshole".


Im sure the lyrics werent the wackest. The quality of the track was bad I can admit that though. Yes, the beat wasnt tops. It was my first track, never recorded before, so i wasnt really comfortable with no breathing, so i kinda fucked my flow. And man, it wasnt the best beat, but Ice has better ones, way better than this. And i wasnt using a microphone so suck it :sweating:

Thanks for honest feedback, as offending as it was, its honest review, so i cant blame ya :sweating: Peace.
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Kez » Oct 5th, '08, 23:40

shadymademe wrote:"Thanks for the support, asshole".


Im sure the lyrics werent the wackest. The quality of the track was bad I can admit that though. Yes, the beat wasnt tops. It was my first track, never recorded before, so i wasnt really comfortable with no breathing, so i kinda fucked my flow. And man, it wasnt the best beat, but Ice has better ones, way better than this. And i wasnt using a microphone so suck it :sweating:

Thanks for honest feedback, as offending as it was, its honest review, so i cant blame ya :sweating: Peace.


Tsk.

You can't ask for feedback and then get butthurt when people give it to you.
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Solace » Oct 5th, '08, 23:43

Kez wrote:
shadymademe wrote:"Thanks for the support, asshole".


Im sure the lyrics werent the wackest. The quality of the track was bad I can admit that though. Yes, the beat wasnt tops. It was my first track, never recorded before, so i wasnt really comfortable with no breathing, so i kinda fucked my flow. And man, it wasnt the best beat, but Ice has better ones, way better than this. And i wasnt using a microphone so suck it :sweating:

Thanks for honest feedback, as offending as it was, its honest review, so i cant blame ya :sweating: Peace.


Tsk.

You can't ask for feedback and then get butthurt when people give it to you.


How was i "butthurt"

i have no problem with his review. i just said im working on it, ice killa has better ones, and i can say the audio is crap quality but the lyrics werent horrible.
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Requiem » Oct 5th, '08, 23:48

lmao at shadymademe quoting eminem. :laughing:

I"m working on a new beat, yes. i didn't take my time with this one :( because i was too busy worried about the beat going at the right speed. but now that i've got the speed right, i can rework it.

and i do apreciate honest feedback, but u don't have to slam it. u could be like "oh, it wasn't very good, here's what u need to work on....." not "wackest song ever" :whistle: no disrespect to xray.
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Re: Burn You Down- Epiphany feat. Ice Killa

Postby Kez » Oct 5th, '08, 23:48

shadymademe wrote:Im sure the lyrics werent the wackest


shadymademe wrote:And i wasnt using a microphone so suck it


I dunno if these, among others, count as butthurt neccessarily, but what they do say is someone making excuses for every criticism people gave to his song.

@IceKilla: Why sugar-coat it? It all means the same at the end of the day; it's still feedback. Be grateful you're getting it. I mean Christ, 3 fuckin pages, that's more than i had for my last track.
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