Acapella (freestyle)

[Rapsoldier101]

everybody already pointed the ending eminem comparison but other than that it was pretty good for a freestyle at the beginning u sounded a lil off tho

[Requiem]

^thx for all the comments, for a freestyle, i think it's pretty good. i think i'm going to make a new beat for it, one that sounds better. just for a filler for my album, or at least an EP or something
cuz i'm buying a new mic the first day i get paid from my job

[<VerbalTouch>]

its up ur ass

[Tash8]

i dont understand the word "filler" for an album

that is the stupidest thing ever thought of... you make an album you make a bunch of songs and you pick the ones that you feel would fit best, putting fillers is just retarded and whoever puts fillers in their albums doesn't deserve to rap, each song should have a purpose or a reason for being on there...

especially when your not signed to a label and you don't have a fuckin deadline, jesus christ, you think anyone's gonna wanna download your album when you have shit like this on it?

i'm done playing nice, this track is awful, the beat is worse than djblue's first ever made beat, and not just that you bit a line and you still made it wack... holy shit, why are you workin on album? step up your game, quit half assing, oh this will just be a fuckin filler on my album.. why? because your too lazy to do another song? if so then why the fuck are you even making an album?

answer all those questions.... if this track or any other fillers are on your album, i'll personally start a boycott against people downloading your album.

now that i'm done venting, have a nice day.

[Requiem]

^

if the redone beat is insanely awesome, then hecks yes i'm going to put it on my album. and i was having a nice day till ur comment.


"i thought we was cool, why u want me to die homie..homie..." 50 cent, Many Men (Wish Death)....

[Tash8]

^

if the redone beat is insanely awesome, then hecks yes i'm going to put it on my album. and i was having a nice day till ur comment.


"i thought we was cool, why u want me to die homie..homie..." 50 cent, Many Men (Wish Death)....

no, you could put the most amazing beat under that, and i promise you one thing, it won't be worth listening to... you obviously have your bar set real low to allow a track like that on an album...

honestly man? what's the reason your doing an album, give me a few good reasons?

[Requiem]

you just don't notice me

chet who?

lmao, Chet Starr, of course i know who u are, because it's me, u, and shadymademe who's going to take over TR.

here's a rapidshare link- http://rapidshare.com/files/154126027/A ... _.mp3.html

i'm going to redo it sometime, so this is just it for now

btw, if u got msn mess. pm it to me

@ tash8. it's a freestyle, and it's kinda dope. like those skits off of D12's album. when Bizarre freestyled, it's only a break between groups of songs with alot of impact.

like i've got some insane songs, but i'm not going to release them until the whole album's done. this is just a way to get my name on here so people can look forward to an album. my first single was supposed to be lime light. now it's going to be Soon You'll See. that tracks finished. and Chet and Shadymademe can vouch that it's better than this Acapella skit.

besides, a whole album isn't perfect. Dr. Dre's Chronic 2001 had maybe 3/4 that were pretty perfect. the rest were just "good, not replayable, but nice to have on a collection".

i don't want beef, i'm not hungry right now. i've never said i was the dopest rapper alive. i'm just making an album for my own purposes. so chill out man

[Tash8]

if you think it's kind of dope then whatever man, like i said you have real low standards for yourself, i could understand if your willing to improve and if that's the case then you wouldn't shadow yourselves by calling your tracks "dope" when in reality i'd rate it lower than 1/10....

let me ask you this? you want to build hype for your album? and your doing it by releasing a horrible freestyle over an awful beat? please dude, at least release a listenable songs, the 2 i've heard from you have been awful and it don't seem like you want to listen to anyone...

[Requiem]

nothing's wrong with a low standard as long as u super excel it. i'm working really hard to improve in every way. and i work every day. my beat's are shaping up, cuz i'm getting the hang of fl, thx to u!
my rhymes are looking better, i freestyle every day, i'm improving in many ways. and if u get rid of ur worst crap first, then ur final product ends up looking better, u know what i'm saying?

[Tash8]

nothing's wrong with a low standard as long as u super excel it. i'm working really hard to improve in every way. and i work every day. my beat's are shaping up, cuz i'm getting the hang of fl, thx to u!
my rhymes are looking better, i freestyle every day, i'm improving in many ways. and if u get rid of ur worst crap first, then ur final product ends up looking better, u know what i'm saying?

aite well, i hope that your next song is better...

[Requiem]

thx man, i'll try and make it the best i can make it. so it can live up to ur standards cuz if i can impress u, then i can impress anybody.

[Tash8]

thx man, i'll try and make it the best i can make it. so it can live up to ur standards cuz if i can impress u, then i can impress anybody.

you shouldn't try to live up to my standards, but what i was trying to the say whole time, is ur creating an album for the wrong reasons, your best interest right now is to make tracks and post them and get feed (then out of all the feed you get, take notice to who actually gives you the right feed, not people who say not bad keep it up or awesome 10/10 or people who come in and say 1/10... cuz that doesn't mean shit) once you figure those people out, instead of just releasing tracks, pm them, talk to them how you can improve, and what you could do... then when you feel ur constantly improving post them...

i used to be same way, every time i made a beat i posted it, even when i didn't think it was all that great, for some odd reason, i thought posting it made me seem like i was a pro or something, it doesn't... i've created about 30 beats in the past 2 month, i've only finished 2-3, i've only posted like 1 or 2 of them, i don't post them unless i feel their an upgrade over my last... you dont have to do the same, but imo, once you get to that stage when you can figure when to post or not to post then you officially can feed your own stuff...

[Requiem]

wow that advice goes deep... u hit a couple of great notes that i hope ALL of tr is paying attention too. cuz i do wanna know how to improve, and stuff. i'm trying! alot of people seem to forget, and just post stuff up saying "oh, it's dope, check it out"

i'm like "feed it," and like ur saying "give me ways to improve on it" kind of inspirational