Durex - Kez (new)

[Boston]

lol kuniver, sorry i had to come back in here and post after i seen that, so this is for kez.

not to knock UK rap, but i usually do not like it or i really cant find myself enjoying it because some people have accents where you really cant understand (im from the US. might be the same for you lol.) but you are one of the few UK rappers i can listen to, and you do not suck. i actually look forward to more shit if you keep coming up with creative stuff or anything like this. your lyrics dont suck, you do have an accent but aye, you know how to control it when you rap. much props. just had to share that so negativity wont bring you down (im mad picky on some shit to ha, so good shit bro)

[Jay-19]

Fuck Kuniver!

This shit is actually really good! Some very creative rhymes and the flow is dope.
Only problem I have with this is your accent in some words, but I've learned to pretty much ignore accents since I registered on TR, because a lot of people on here got really strong accents. So as long as I can understand what you're saying (which I do) I won't have a problem with it!

Good job on this man!

[kuniver]

Fuck Kuniver!

Fuck you bitch. Why is your name KillahGoat, cuz after you kill goats you rape their dead bodies...Is that what you do in Sweeden, god damn!!

[Jay-19]

Fuck Kuniver!

Fuck you bitch. Why is your name KillahGoat, cuz after you kill goats you rape their dead bodies...Is that what you do in Sweeden, god damn!!

If that is the first thing that comes to your mind, then you must be mentally ill dude.

[Kez]

Hey


hey

Kuniver, or should i say Makaveliwhatever






fuck you, i don't care

[enjinn]

dope beat...im feeling this track...real original...you had a nice flow and there was some funny shit in your verse...rhymes were on point...i just wish it was longer!...dope track

[Mc Cubz]

good effort kez - because of this style of writing and delivery its hard for me to criticize all I can really do is comment really - its such a unique style as far as I know I've not heard anything like it before.

It seems like your trying to go for a random style - ending lines in ways that are really unconventional with things we dont expect to hear - unless I'm just not getting some of the humor. You shouldn't really have to post the lyrics but I understand why you did - despite what some of the people here are saying I can hear what your saying I don't need to read while I listen - because your style is so colloquial i.e. it sounds like spoken word with rhythm rather than really complicated flows. I think while your delivery is good there are some words that kind of hide behind the music - alot of that is just the quality us amatures have to settle for - a good producer would bring them quiet words to the front of the mix more so they stand out - but If you could I'd recommend you make sure you can easily hear whats being said given the type of lyrics your saying - It's not quiet as important in say dnb mcing over faster bpms because thats just as much about sound/rhythm than meaning but here I really want to be able to follow whats being said - maybe you should listen to some mike skinner to see what I mean. I think maybe you should also try and add some charisma to your style - all a rapper has in these songs is the quality of lyrics and the story-telling techniques in his delivery - I think maybe rap abit more powerfully and pronounce certain words differently to add interest rather than rapping the whole verse in a monotone. Also maybe you should do songs abit longer - but thats purely opinion - its also useful to do short songs if your trying to practice and improve without doing massive songs.

hope this is useful man!

[Call Me Pik]

i listened to this be4 but forgot to give feed imma listen again n tell u wat i think ......instrumental is weird ....lmao verse is weird too lmfao uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i mean i have to listen again h.o...i like it i think itll deff keep u listening to what u have to say good job on approaching the track 8/10

[stevethetruth]

good choice of beat i really liked the flow and from what i remember of you your game has def stepped up i liked the song good job

[Kez]

good choice of beat i really liked the flow and from what i remember of you your game has def stepped up i liked the song good job

Wow, Steve, haven't seen you around for a long long time. Where've you been?

And thanks Pik, meant to reply earlier

[SajN]

Pretty dope short track
Nice rhymes and dope flow!
Nice accent


Greaat job!

[Xray]

Damn I feel like such an asshole cause I didn't feed this track. Sorry.

Concept is original, lyrics are good enough to let us understand the concept and the idea of the song. Flow and all was good, but the delivery needs work. You sounded a bit bored you know? for a track like this you should have sounded happy/cocky know what I mean? Heard better from you, keep it up though.

[Kez]

Damn I feel like such an asshole cause I didn't feed this track. Sorry.

Concept is original, lyrics are good enough to let us understand the concept and the idea of the song. Flow and all was good, but the delivery needs work. You sounded a bit bored you know? for a track like this you should have sounded happy/cocky know what I mean? Heard better from you, keep it up though.

Cheers you fohkin twat

Yeah i suppose the delivery should have been different but i was trying to go for one consistent voice throughout the song; suppose i was wrong and this wasn't the right song to try it on.

Oh well, cheers anyway

[mart85]

I didn't have time to feed this track either

it's a sick short verse... everything is on point... as far as the delivery, a little more attitude, like xray said, could have been cool but it's not bad either

anyways, nice work

[Kez]

Thanks Mart