The Election-John or Barack?

[<VerbalTouch>]

Emadyville are you the type of person to take teh internet serious like if i were to say you sucked ass or fuck you in the ass you would go take half the day to record a diss on me?

[Solace]

Listening right now...

Beat is nice. I think you too way too long to start rapping. And i cant even hear, so maybe you could turn the acapella louder?

And its really low, like i can only hear the voice and not even close to words. So im gunna comment on the lyrics you posted. The lyrics were good, pretty much consistent. I liked this line "If John wins there better be a federal inspection," and these "Freedom of speech is gone not to mention habius corpus,
I could be locked up before they play me a chorus,"

Overall 7/10

Seriously fix the volume. I coudl then comment on flow and delivery.

[<Stiiccy>]

song was ok..
delivery still isnt all there but you'll grow into it..
flow was ok nothing incredible

lyrics were great...

overall i think you have gotten better but you still need some work on the delivery

[Emadyville]

song was ok..
delivery still isnt all there but you'll grow into it..
flow was ok nothing incredible

lyrics were great...

overall i think you have gotten better but you still need some work on the delivery

Thanks man. That's what i needed. I'm glad you saw the improvement. And I will continue to bring it more on each track.

[randomghost]

vocal bit loud...beat is nice..flow and delivery is ok....mixing could be better...nice concept....lyrics are good.....nice track though keep it up bro ...lookin forward to hear more

[Emadyville]

vocal bit loud...beat is nice..flow and delivery is ok....mixing could be better...nice concept....lyrics are good.....nice track though keep it up bro ...lookin forward to hear more

Thank you man appreciate that. Yeah I've been improving, new song soon tho so you will hear more.