1st time I heard u rap
and it sucked donkey gonads in my opinion
ok this is why i say not everyone should rap
especially ones that cant naturally get on the beat
i mean like rhyme on beat
white folks and their lets invent a new beat in a beat type shit
lmao
lyrics were cool but ummmm u need delivery
delivery is number uno u ass
lmao u should work on that delivery in front of people other than ur frinds who r obviously tellin u that u got talent when u dont
practice in front of people who will make u get better
if u dont get better
get a new hobby that u can succeed at
and while ur at it
listen to The Sex Files because dammit me rhyme well
http://www.zshare.net/download/5186144334852c56/and u can learn a thing or two about delivery
ya dig!!!