its good - impressive flow! I prefer one or two of the older neff songs - but that may be more to do with the instrumental rather than the lyrics - I loved the complexity of some of the themes.
I've never used that recording technique of doing such short sections at a time bcos it always sounds obvious when I play back but its sounds really good on your recordings - it is just my inconsistency rather than equipment - its just my voice never sounds exactly the same in any two recordings?