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New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Mc Cubz » Dec 31st, '08, 02:19

its good - impressive flow! I prefer one or two of the older neff songs - but that may be more to do with the instrumental rather than the lyrics - I loved the complexity of some of the themes.

I've never used that recording technique of doing such short sections at a time bcos it always sounds obvious when I play back but its sounds really good on your recordings - it is just my inconsistency rather than equipment - its just my voice never sounds exactly the same in any two recordings?
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Skorp » Dec 31st, '08, 02:21

flow was nice man; i liked this shit..you can actually rap on beat unlike alot of rappers :whistle:
I liked how you switched from a faster flow to a little slower for the 2nd verse..shits dope homie, keep it up :y:
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Vettori » Jan 3rd, '09, 04:49

Thanks for the feed. And ye Punch ins are helpful. But The main reason You should only use them is if you cant spit out the full Verse without runnin outta breath or when yur "SICK" CAUGH CAUGH to those dumbasses Who think otherwise..But ye thanks for the feed... Ill try be more active and Drop some more songs.... Its about time right ?
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Re: New Song/With Lyrics -Fearless -Nefarious

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 3rd, '09, 13:13

will leaving the concept away .. man this is just sick ,. really dope .. i liked particuallry your flow nd delivery especally when you spit these lines

1st verse

Goof troop, knouse looped, hung and then your threw bitch.
Who snooped, loose hoop, tug and make your crew snitch.
News scoop, found dead, underneath the ground bed.
Graves where your headed, last night i paint the town red.

2nd verse

Better watch your fuckin front, strikin steady in attack mode.
You aint even ready, fightin deadly when i smack hoe's.
Who you think you talkin to, i've listened to your wack flows.
You and me are walkin through, different places the back roads.

nd in general at all .. gd job here man you got a good voice though ,, keep it up ..
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