)...flow aint that good..( u need to work more on it..in each line its kinda different and shit..a bit long and a bit short....so yeah u could work on it....) 
hook is amazing 
overall good track ..lookin forward to hear more The Darkened Equinox
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Re: The Darkened Equinox
by randomghost » Dec 28th, '08, 11:20
mm...nice delivery( good and on point)...nice lyrics( not bad at all...a lil work on lyrics too..it would be perfect )...flow aint that good..( u need to work more on it..in each line its kinda different and shit..a bit long and a bit short....so yeah u could work on it....) hook is amazing overall good track ..lookin forward to hear more
)...flow aint that good..( u need to work more on it..in each line its kinda different and shit..a bit long and a bit short....so yeah u could work on it....) hook is amazing overall good track ..lookin forward to hear more 
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Re: The Darkened Equinox
by <Stiiccy> » Dec 28th, '08, 14:45
preet good man...still need some work...
but you will get there
but you will get there
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Re: The Darkened Equinox
by MC Anonymous » Dec 28th, '08, 14:56
Thanks both!
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Re: The Darkened Equinox
by Xray » Dec 29th, '08, 14:10
Hmm you got a lisp thing going on, but really sounds like your having trouble spitting correctly. Voice isn't bad either, flow was actually not bad, your on the right track on the flow, cause least you "flow" sorta on beat. Lyrics is your specialty so good job on that, but the mixing is very dry. Sounds very empty too, might want to raise the tremble and mid range a bit, cause atm the bass and dryness is taking over. But you've only started with this so not bad, at least its dry rather than hiss to the max.
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Re: The Darkened Equinox
by MC Anonymous » Dec 29th, '08, 16:21
Xray wrote:Hmm you got a lisp thing going on, but really sounds like your having trouble spitting correctly. Voice isn't bad either, flow was actually not bad, your on the right track on the flow, cause least you "flow" sorta on beat. Lyrics is your specialty so good job on that, but the mixing is very dry. Sounds very empty too, might want to raise the tremble and mid range a bit, cause atm the bass and dryness is taking over. But you've only started with this so not bad, at least its dry rather than hiss to the max.
Thanks for the feed dude! You seem to know a lot about mixing so do you think we can talk on MSN so you can teach me a bit about this mixing stuff? If yes, PM me your addy
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Re: The Darkened Equinox
by °[~CHR!$~]° » Dec 30th, '08, 01:31
no lie flow was way off in the 1st 4bars...then it kept on being shaky...not sayin dumb down ur lyrics...just maybe dumb down the amount of words...get me
@ double hook....u got a good hook feeling to it....but still lol@ point of no return- similary 
haha....u takin good steps... keep droppin
ps: its time for you to feed some shit
@ double hook....u got a good hook feeling to it....but still lol@ point of no return- similary haha....u takin good steps...
keep droppinps: its time for you to feed some shit
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Re: The Darkened Equinox
by Ka0t1c » Dec 31st, '08, 01:35
yeah, u need to rap to the beat and make the beat your bitch
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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