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New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Solace » Jan 8th, '09, 22:37

Dope beat, very catchy. Your flow was good, didnt see problems in it, infact i quite liked it. Your voice reminds me of Kanye. I think the chorus ruined it, i didnt mind that it was Eminem or that you sampled someone famous but it was quite annoying "lets get down to business, lets get down to business" etc. You started sounding slightly different in the 2nd verse too. Keep it up, id like to hear more music from you.

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Re: New Track.. Business feat. Eminem (Unfinished)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 9th, '09, 16:59

ya man ,, it doesn’t matter if you just have eminem in your song.. it's okay . anyway , i thinks it's pretty good song , actually i like the beat it's cool and catchy the hook was nice too .. talking about the lyrics and the rhymes they were pretty nice .. and your flow was good and to the point , delivery was nice . i liked it . and ya the chorus was not good actually it annoyed me ,, but overall it's a dope song man .. 8/10 .. gd job here :y: :y: .. sooory for the late feed but i was having problem with tha link . and i hve said this to ya earlier .
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