RedZek - You Crossed The Line

[James R.]

Well honestly I didn't like it. You took shots at me that barely made sense. You dissed yourself more. I made you racist? Well now you look like the bad guy for being a racist. Smart move. The flow was awful, though you accidentally went on beat at times. The lyrics were preschool at best even though you had a 3rd grader ghost write a few lines for you. The quality was complete shit. The beat was complete shit. Maybe if you mixed it like a human and used a beat that didn't make people suicidal you'd be getting better reviews. There was nothing personal about this. The punchlines were that of a video of 3 kittens napping on a sunlit patio. I don't know what should offend me more. That you "dissed" me or that you had the nerve to put me in a song that's this utterly shit.

And you can't say that you're a racist and then say you're not. Either way that makes you a liar and that's just retarded.

[Solace]

It didnt seem like he was pissed off, it seemed like he laughed at it ^

Anyways, its good to see your taking advice instead of telling everyone theyre a hater when they say you really suck. Your lyrics are still quite bad...I'd say drop in CW til you get the respect you expect, and then start the dropping of songs til people say your actually decent.

just doin it for fun,i wouldnt need people to tell me that im decent or somethin,havin u hearin my song is actually Nice for me

So your posting songs but you dont actually want to become a rapper?

[Jay-19]

Oh... my... God...

That was just awful. Real awful man.
I got three tips for you.

First:
You should at least get yourself a real microphone before you start rapping. I don't really know what kind of microphone you used, but I would guess it is some kind of headset mic. Which, frankly, just does not qualifies as a good microphone for rapping. Real talk.

Second:
It doesn't matter if you can write in English, you really have to have the ability to pronounce it too. So yeah, you should really try to fix that before rapping in English.

Third:
Delivery. One of the most important things when it comes to rapping. You can't just sound like someone being doped out on various tranquillizer when you're trying to be an emcee. You just can't, that's the truth of the day man.

And I'll throw this tip in for free, just because I like being a nice guy.
Don't, ever again, try to go against people who're clearly superior when it comes to rapping.
That's just... well... plain stupidity.

I think that's about it...



Yeah, I'm done.

[Le Tunisien]

Oh... my... God...

That was just awful. Real awful man.
I got three tips for you.

First:
You should at least get yourself a real microphone before you start rapping. I don't really know what kind of microphone you used, but I would guess it is some kind of headset mic. Which, frankly, just does not qualifies as a good microphone for rapping. Real talk.

Second:
It doesn't matter if you can write in English, you really have to have the ability to pronounce it too. So yeah, you should really try to fix that before rapping in English.

Third:
Delivery. One of the most important things when it comes to rapping. You can't just sound like someone being doped out on various tranquillizer when you're trying to be an emcee. You just can't, that's the truth of the day man.

And I'll throw this tip in for free, just because I like being a nice guy.
Don't, ever again, try to go against people who're clearly superior when it comes to rapping.
That's just... well... plain stupidity.

I think that's about it...



Yeah, I'm done.

Good

[Xray]

The melody sounded as if you were trying to make it sound like an Eminem melody, for some reason those notes ring bells. Song was garbage, like SajN said you sound like you just had an operation.

Oh and I found out you was gonna diss me before? better turn the fuck around and leave me the fuck alone before you get fucked for the? someone help me out here, how many times has this dude got ripped a new asshole? everyone lost count.

QUIT RAP, START MODELING, YOUR A SEXY MOFO.

[Le Tunisien]

The melody sounded as if you were trying to make it sound like an Eminem melody, for some reason those notes ring bells. Song was garbage, like SajN said you sound like you just had an operation.

Oh and I found out you was gonna diss me before? better turn the fuck around and leave me the fuck alone before you get fucked for the? someone help me out here, how many times has this dude got ripped a new asshole? everyone lost count.

QUIT RAP, START MODELING, YOUR A SEXY MOFO.

uhhh?? when did i say i was gonna u before?? who said that? huh wtf

[Almostlity]

That was just awful. Real awful man.

[Nu Syd]

chorus sounds like some satanic ritual

[Jay-19]

chorus sounds like some satanic ritual

I almost made a number 1 in my pants reading that!

[B.A.D.]

dude

stop ashaming yourself and delete the song!!!!!!!!... people are just laughin at you

why are you so stupid??

I wanna help you, really.... just delete the track and stop having people laugh at you

[<Stiiccy>]

THAT SHIT WAS INCREDIBLE MAN...YOU FUCKIN SOOOOOOO MURDERED EM...

ESPECIALLY JAMES......................................


SIKE


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I WANNA FUCK HANNAH MONTANA

[enjinn]

i see potential...you just need a lil more practise...relax on the mic

[Le Tunisien]

this is stupid, but , does anybody still have this song in his puter?send me a link if possible ,,,,, i reformated and lost all T.T thx in advance rofl

[Drama Setter]

not bad , Thanks 4 sharing

[Drama Setter]

not bad , Thanks 4 sharing

Shit , I was wrong , listening to sth else , Fuck that