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We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Solace » Apr 14th, '09, 21:18

McMaybe wrote:I laughed. Lyrics were funny, in an obvious joke way. Flow was OK, I mean, it was good, but you fell off quite a few times. Mixing was the best I've heard from you, but the down fall was the chorus. It was SHIT. The mixing mainly, or voice.. Or, I don't know what the fuck it was really.

Anyway, definitely a 8/10.

I can't say much more than that man. I actually thought alysha was gunna be on it haha. About the flow the ENTIRE 2nd verse was off imo like damn. Whatever funny shit. I'd give it a 7/10.

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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 15th, '09, 01:17

^ :o
SHIT i been off all day, and i get the most feed of my life.

thx for all the feed guys :smoking: yea, i agree about the second verse being off by a second. i might remix it, but there's no real point to rereleasing it :unsure:
and lol, the chorus isn't my favorite either, but neither of us could sing. so... :whistle:
@ McMaybe, thx, the mixing took me longer than recording :sweating:
@ Jay-19, thx man :y:
@ kez, great feedback man. :8)
@ Solace, :o great album cover, can u make it "we paid you" tho, instead of we made u :smoking:

thx for the feed, i really do appreciate it :flower:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Solace » Apr 15th, '09, 02:02

Hahahaha how the fuck did I not notice that? Here man

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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 15th, '09, 02:03

^lmao, thx man :happy: looks good.

btw, can u get on msn, i'm working on something. need ur opinion :whistle:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Solace » Apr 15th, '09, 02:06

I am :smoking:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby dbeauluvswomen » Apr 15th, '09, 06:13

I honestly didn't like it. I know it was a joke, but I can't listen to that gay stuff. You've made better. I look forward to hearing other stuff from you though. :y:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 15th, '09, 08:04

dbeauluvswomen wrote:I honestly didn't like it. I know it was a joke, but I can't listen to that gay stuff. You've made better. I look forward to hearing other stuff from you though. :y:

thx for feeding :y:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby James R. » Apr 15th, '09, 14:06

I thought it was funny, but I'm not going to give it a high rating for the following reasons.

1.) It was eminem's ideas with our names adapted. Honestly it was funny and lyrically you did a good job, but that's like passing a test with the study guide right in front of you. It takes something to connect it all, but all you have to do is make the connection

2.) All the high points of the song were because they were Em's high points.

3.) The chorus was terrible as fuck

With that said; I liked it a lot. It made me laugh, I was entertained, you sound good rapping faster, it makes your voice less... I dunno strange. Good job man. If this wasn't a parody I'd give it a 7 or 8, but since it is... aw fuck it you can have a 7/10. Good job man
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 15th, '09, 17:55

James R. wrote:I thought it was funny, but I'm not going to give it a high rating for the following reasons.

1.) It was eminem's ideas with our names adapted. Honestly it was funny and lyrically you did a good job, but that's like passing a test with the study guide right in front of you. It takes something to connect it all, but all you have to do is make the connection

2.) All the high points of the song were because they were Em's high points.

3.) The chorus was terrible as fuck

With that said; I liked it a lot. It made me laugh, I was entertained, you sound good rapping faster, it makes your voice less... I dunno strange. Good job man. If this wasn't a parody I'd give it a 7 or 8, but since it is... aw fuck it you can have a 7/10. Good job man


^ thx man :y: i think i'm definitely gonna be doing fast tracks in the future :happy:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Tornado » Apr 16th, '09, 14:37

Chorus sucked majorly (sounded like it had no layers and had no harmony) and you basically just copy and pasted names out at will. If you were going to do it well you shoud've kept the smae flow but change the subject just like Weird Al does, but flow was better, delivery was alright i guess, lyrics still weakh
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 16th, '09, 23:13

^thx man :happy:
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