SaJJad - Destruction Of The First Aid

[Xray]

lyrically, this shit is fire...but the delivery of it just seemed a bit off..your voice doesn't match the flow quite right..but other than that this a stand-out track..you should try to work on harmonizing your voice to the beat you're on along with the flow you're doing. It sounds like you're trying too hard to convey your message rather than just letting it come from within..once you find that happy medium I could see this as a street single.

thanks for the feed back on my track though; the beat I purchased from a guy who called himself Bronco Stefan, and he's a bitch ass dude who stole my money because that's an industry beat and he had no rights to the music so I couldn't use that beat and also around 10 different songs that I had bought beats for because of this guy...The Mixtape that track was on never got released because I didn't own the rights to over half the music...very shitty situation, always make sure your producer MADE HIS BEAT..that is if you want to make money off of rap.

EDIT:
coming for yar finance, no need for guidance
I dont need a fucking map to direct me to your hidings

best lines in the track imo, wordplay was smooth

Wow, I bet you wanted to kill him after that, I know I would of went on a hunting spree haha. Thats some really fucked up shit, props for the heads up. Appreciate the feedback man, I'll take what you said in mind, cause I've never thought about it like that.

[lifeadeath]

Hey yo,

This is really sick song! You've improved like hell since i first time heard your songs and that wasn't even so long time ago.

I'm glad you posted the lyrics too because it was really a joy following them with the song, awesome song bro!

[preest]

this shit is fucking sick man, I was loving the imagination in the words and the energy you put in you cant really fault it! I just wish it was a full track with a hook - that would be sick if you could keep the same feel to the track throughout!

well done man nice stuff

[Xray]

Thanks preest I appreciate it homie. Life and Death, props dawg, I really appreciate it that you see me now, alot better than what I used to be. Keep it coming.

[Solace]

I cant say much man...That was off the top dope. I loved the sample on it. I felt it all, I loved it all (no homo). Great track dude

[Tash8]

wow damn, my fav verse from you since dark days!

anyways i'm not too fond of the idea of calling born alone and ride alone 2 but yo dude... i have this beat like it's pyscho type beat htat i think might fit you, hit me up!!!

but anyways, this is dope, lyrics are decent, but delivery, flow, emotion and energy are all just outrageous!!!

[DelinQuent]

LOVED IT!

this may be one of the first pieces on TR that leaves me with no complaints other than that i want the full song.

absolutely loved how you took a mellow beat and really went IN on it.

flow was spot on, i didnt notice a single flaw. it all sounded natural. rhyming was as usual, nothing spectacular but it's perfect how it is in my opinion.

9/10 simply because it's not a full song.

[Xray]

Wow I wasn't expecting you two to like it THAT much, well Tash yeah but not you DQ. Good shit.

Thanks for the feedback, keep it coming.

[DelinQuent]

Wow I wasn't expecting you two to like it THAT much, well Tash yeah but not you DQ. Good shit.

Thanks for the feedback, keep it coming.

i dont hold grudges, so even if you fucking hate my shit, i'll still give you my honest opinion lol

keep up the good work

[<Stiiccy>]

Wow I wasn't expecting you two to like it THAT much, well Tash yeah but not you DQ. Good shit.

Thanks for the feedback, keep it coming.

i dont hold grudges, so even if you fucking hate my shit, i'll still give you my honest opinion lol

keep up the good work

what if i fucked your girl...would you still give me honest feed

[Xray]

Wow I wasn't expecting you two to like it THAT much, well Tash yeah but not you DQ. Good shit.

Thanks for the feedback, keep it coming.

i dont hold grudges, so even if you fucking hate my shit, i'll still give you my honest opinion lol

keep up the good work

I never said I hate your stuff, its just that the love songs and auto-tune aren't my cup of tea you know? I remember you used to make different kind of songs once in a while, I remember that collab you did with So Real, that was a dope track. Keep the feed coming if you got something to say ppl.

[Tornado]

I thought i remembered this beat..

anyway dope verse, your flow and delivery was reallly energetic and suited the beat, i just thought you should've done a storytelling type song on this track but other than that, no complaints about it

[Slim Zaddy]

damn , man that's was hot ,, i liked your emotion in it ,, lyrics were fire , dope xray

[PeeGey]

nice song man who did this beat?

[PeeGey]

this is very cool track I know one lithuanian rap song with the same beat